Claiming:Camp/Ophid Carne

Name: Demon Axewood

Gender: Male

Age: 16

God Parent: Hephaestus, Zeus, Notus

Mortal Parent: Riann Axewood

Appearance: He has short spiky ginger hair, quite short, but very muscley. He has lots of freckles dotted across his face, and has very large hands. He is a size 12 in feet, and has been bullied about this. He is ashamed of the way he looks, as he believes everything it out of proportion. Most of the time he wears thick clothes and hoodies, so that he is hidden away.

Personality: There is only one word that really describes Demon, and the word is secretive. No one really knows him, as he always prefered to be alone. He is intelligent, very kind ,but still never told anyone anything about his life. The only person who really knows what he is like is his best friend, Leena.

History: His mother met his father on a cold winter night. They were both wandering the streets of Chicago, when his mother slipped on the ice, and hurt her head. Zeus/Hepheastus/Notus found her, and took her to the hospital. When she awoke she saw his face, then they kissed, and he closed the door, a month later, she was pregnant with Demon.

His birth was like any normal one, at this point his mother was dating his soon to be step-father, who was very caring and kind. And did not care that the kid was not his. When he was born, the first thing he saw was his soon to be step-father.

His childhood was a normal one, they lived in a small house way out in the suburbs. A year after Demon was born, his mother and her boyfriend got married, and he didnt care. After this they moved in city, as it was closer to both his parents work. He had a couple of friends, but none to close. Always playing with scraps, making small machines.

His school was a normal state school, basic in every way. He had a nack for the more technical subjects, such as shop class, physics and maths. Anything to do with building or creation he loved. Though he always had a soft spot for History. His best, and really only true friend though was this girl named Leena Vetech. She was just a normal kid, who also loved all of the technical things. They spent most of their time in eachothers companmy, just talking. But sadly nothing ever happened. He was pretty rich, he could get what he wanted. But he didnt want much. Most of all he just wanted to be normal. Everyone was suprised how amazing he was in shop class. He made the smallest and most detailed projects, that shocked everyone he knew. He grew pretty famous for what he made in those classes.

One night he was in his bed, while his parents watch somemore TV, when a small cyclops attacked, to his stepfather it seems like a normal murderer. His mother ran into the back, and used the stairs to flee with Demon. Unfortunately her husband, was thrown out the window, breaking his spine, and taking his life. Demon and his mother on the otherhand, moved to New York. For weeks his mother considered taking him to Camp Half-Blood. Before the cyclops found them again, they managed to escape easily this time, and Riann took him straight to camp, telling him about his father on they way there. Then he was alone, and had to cross the hill.

Weapons: His hands and a small bronze blade he made

Other Belongings: His stepfathers silver watch

 Doo Doo Doo Doo.....   15:52, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

Did they have a fling in the hospital? Maybe more of his childhood and how he got to camp.   The Swordsman,    The Knife thrower,      The Throat Ripper,   |  The Brutal One, and The Rebel     17:38, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

You could probably combine the new paragraphs you made and edit the last paragraph to fit.   The Swordsman,    The Knife thrower,      The Throat Ripper,   |  The Brutal One, and The Rebel     18:04, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

Okay ummm......Sorry but the last 2 paragraphs need to be fixed like if your reading the history those 2 dont make sense, so maybe delete the smaller one or combine them.   The Swordsman,    The Knife thrower,     <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Throat Ripper,   | <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Brutal One, and The Rebel <font face="Nyala">    18:08, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

why the mum/step dad was attacked, monsters don't attack mortals unless they block/attack them ~ BachLynn23 <span style="padding-left:6px; background-color:red; border:3px ridge black;"> <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Swordsman,   <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Knife thrower,     <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Throat Ripper,   | <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Brutal One, and The Rebel <font face="Nyala">    18:21, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

The lat part of the final paragraph is confusing. "In the end his mother was attacked, as she was trying to protect Demon, he was in bed and a series of monsters attacked. His stepfather died trying to protect Demons mother, head ripped off, and then his mother and him moved to New York, as she knew it was where he would be safest." the monster attack dosen't make sense and how does she know its safe? <span style="padding-left:6px; background-color:red; border:3px ridge black;"> <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Swordsman,   <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Knife thrower,     <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Throat Ripper,   | <font face="Monotype Corsiva"> The Brutal One, and The Rebel <font face="Nyala">    05:37, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

The part about his step-father seeing the monster is weird. Is his step father clear sighted, or a Demigod? He just can't see the monster and aid in the attack. IFW14 ~Crap Happens To Everyone, Deal With It. PeopleThink They're Cooler Than You? Change It.Live And Let Live  17:58, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Monsters don't directly attack mortals an less they get in the way<font face="Segoe Script" size="4" color="910000">The true genius shudders at incompleteness <font face="Segoe Script" size="3" color="000000">and usually prefers silence to saying something which is not everything it should be.  06:45, November 13, 2012 (UTC)