Claiming:Camp/Lucy Conlin

Name: Lucy Conlin

Gender: female

God Parent: Poseidon, Zeus or Apollo

Mortal Parent: Elizabeth Conlin

Appearance:



Personality: Lucy is sweet, caring, and usually happy. It takes a lot to get her angry, but when she does get angry at someone, she holds a grudge for a long time.

History:

Elizabeth and Lucy's dad met while Elizabeth was in New York, and they got very close, but she found out he was a god, so he left before Lucy was born. They were together for about 2 years before he left, and he left for a 'business trip' and never came back, though she knew he was a god.

Even at a young age, Lucy always wondered what had happened to her dad. Her mom told her that he died in a car crash, but she didn't believe her, because she had a feeling that he was still alive. Growing up with a single mom was hard for her since her mom worked as a teacher her mom worked a part-time job in a bakery. As a result, she didn't get as much attention as she would like from her mom, but she was grateful for what she had. In school, she was different from the other kids. For example, when she was in 7th grade, somone was teasing her. She felt angry bubbling up inside of her, and just as she was about to burst, the water fountain next to her burst instead, yet she remained dry. When she was 9, she was walking home from school and she took a shortcut that went through an alley, where she saw a man huddled in a corner. She walked over to him, and he suddenly grew larger, and eventually morphed into a Cyclops. She didn't know what to do, so she hid behind a nearby trashcan, where she found a kitchen knife. Luckily, she has good aim so she threw it at it's eye and it was blinded, letting her get away.

She didn't tell her mom what had happened, but after facing a minotaur and barely escaping, she told her. Her mom decided it was time for her to know she is a demi-god. Lucy was mad that she wasn't told before, so out of frustration towards her mom, she contacted her cousin in California who let her stay with him. She left without telling her mom, and her mom was looking for her, but couldn't find her anywhere because her cousin kept her hidden. She stayed there for 2 years. As the years past, more monster attacks happened, and she didn't know what to do, so she came back to see her mom, who had missed her very much. She stayed with her mom for half a year before leaving to go to Camp Half-Blood, where she is now. She is currently 16.

Weapons: A celestial bronze sword with her name engraved in it

Lubka321 (talk) 23:44, January 10, 2014 (UTC)

Lubka321 (talk) 05:12, January 5, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
Please sign your claim with 4 ~'s. Daggers are great secondary or backup weapons but should not be used as a primary weapon. Make sure your history is at least 3 to 4 paragraphs long on how Elizabeth and Poseidon met, and her early childhood, her first monster attack (Being a child of the big three, her first monster attack should be between the 8 to 11 range), and how she got to camp. I see that you want to roleplay a 17 year old, but if she got to camp at age 13, where and what has she been doing these 4 years, she can't have been through all the events that had happened if she was never roleplayed. The best way to fix it without making too much of a change is to make her leave camp to do something, and has just returned to camp recently. That way her age can stay the same without having any loopholes (Can't find the word I'm trying to say >.<) during roleplays.

1. Kindly elaborate on the part how her parents met.

2. Having developed her powers at such a young age like, as you've mentioned, a 3rd grader is a too much.

3. First monster attacks at the age of 13 when you are a child of one of the Big Three is just too late. It usually starts at the age of 8-11.

4. Simply using a pocket knife won't kill a manticore. PLUS, facing one is suicide.

5. Her history should be at least 3-4 paragraphs as what is said in the guidelines.

Why did the water fountain burst? Why did she stay with her cousin? Was it out of frustration that her mom didn't tell her about the demigod thing? Will her mom even let her go that easily? >.< So, when monster attack begin, they continue and they'll occur more often since she's a child of one of the Big Three. You didn't mention much about her having attacks during the following years.