Claiming:Camp/Elefsis Jade

Name:   Elefsis Jade

Gender:   Female 

God Parent:   Eris, Lyssa, Limos (any of these will do) 

Mortal Parent: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">  <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Michael Jade <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Appearance: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> '' She looks pale and sickly but pretty and can even be scary when angry. Very thin build, 5'11, shoulder-length black hair, and ear gauges. ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Personality: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">  ''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Dark personality, likes to see the misfortune of others, has a bad temper and will go berserks when angry, but she has a (deeply hidden) soft and emotional side. Not afraid to speak her mind. Has Sitophobia (fear of food or eating) as well as anorexia. ''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">History (WIP):  ''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Her mother and father met at a Rammstein concert. Her father accidently bumped into her, and it was love at first site. They spend the rest of the concert together, but they weren't interested in the music. They spend the whole time talking, and Michael found he had much in common with this mysterious woman, named (goddesses' name). Afterwards, they went to the bar sharing a few drinks, then spent the night together. The more they saw each other, the more chaotic Michael life became, and his only focal point was on Eris. (This line can be changed for different goddesses). Then out of nowhere, Eris told him everything, how she was a Goddess and she was pregnant but couldn't keep the baby. He laughed at such a ridiculous assertion, but felt betrayed that she was  <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">going to leave him. When the baby came and Eris left him, he fell into a depression and neglected Elefsis  ''



<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;">''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">numerous times. When she was toddler he tried to commit a murder-suicide by jumping into a Lion’s den at the zoo. Though they both survived with no injuries thanks to the powers (depends on godde <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">s <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">s) that saved them. ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;">''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Her father who saw this as a total accident tried to do the same again, but his time he took her and jumped off a highway over-pass. And surprisingly, yet again the Elefsis's powers saved her father, but this time Michael saw what she did  and he finally understood what his daughter was, believing Eris. <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Weapons: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">  ''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Arm length, pure obsidian, double-edge axe with her mother's name inscribed on it. Clawed gloves with flamethrower attached. ''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

User: <span style="background-color:black; border-bottom:5px magneta; border-left:5px dashed purple; border-right:5px outset red; border-top:5px dotted green; font-size:20px;">Itztli-Tochtli Teyolitia Chichinaca 00:03, November 22, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
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sorry didn't know it did that, the thing didn't show up under the claims. <span style="background-color:blue; border-bottom:1px solid blue; border-left:2px dashed green; border-right:3px outset red; border-top:2px dotted purple; font-size:20px;">Itztli-Tochtli Teyolitia Chichinaca 01:27, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, lad! No guns are allowed to be used as weapons, even with celestial bronze bullets. So change it to a melee weapon like a sword, spear, axe, etc., or if you want a ranged weapon, do a bow.

Craftman (talk) 01:29, November 19, 2013 (UTC)Craftman

okay with what craft said, since enyo isn't one of our 45 camp gods. you can't have her as one of your choices

Another thing is that your history needs some improvement, as it is rather short. You're supposed to explain specifically how the parents met, your character's childhood, and how they eventually got to camp. It should be at least around 3 paragraphs, so please, would you kindly repair this conundrum?

Craftman (talk) 01:33, November 19, 2013 (UTC)Craftman

Okay number one, Guns are not allowed, if you don't change this your claim will be invalid and deleted when the 25 is reached. Please include a 3 to 4 paragraph history. Which should include, mortal and god meeting, the early years to age of attack anywhere from 11-13...

uhhhhh guys, it says WIP o.o