Claiming:Camp/Elefsis Jade

Name:   Elefsis Jade

Gender:   Female 

God Parent:   Eris, Lyssa, Limos, Nyx, Melinoe (any of these will do) 

Mortal Parent:   <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Michael Jade <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Appearance: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> '' She looks pale and sickly but pretty and can even be scary when angry. Very thin build, 5'11, short hair, and medium-sized ear gauges. ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Personality: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">  ''<span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Dark personality, likes to see the misfortune of others, has a bad temper and will go berserks when angry, but she has a (very deeply hidden) soft and emotional side. Not afraid to speak her mind. Has Sitophobia (fear of food or eating) as well as anorexia. ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">History: ''<span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;"> Her mother and father met at a Rammstein concert. Her father accidently bumped into her, and it was love at first site. They spend the rest of the concert together, but they weren't interested in the music. They spend the whole time talking, and Michael found he had much in common with this mysterious woman, named (goddesses' name). Afterwards, they went to the bar sharing a few drinks, then spent the night together. The more they saw each other, the more chaotic Michael life became, and his only focal point was on (goddesses' name). (This line can be changed for different goddesses). Then out of nowhere, (goddesses' name) told him everything, how she was a Goddess and she was pregnant but couldn't keep the baby. He laughed at such a ridiculous assertion, but felt betrayed that she was going to leave him. ''



<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;"><span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">When the baby came and (goddess’s name) left him, he fell into a depression and neglected Elefsis  ''<span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">numerous times. When she was toddler he tried to commit suicide by jumping into a Lion’s den at the zoo. Though he survived with no injuries thanks to the bystanders that saved him. Elefsis was taken away from him and he was sent to a mental facility. After while he finally begain to understand who his daughter was, believing (goddesses' name). He snapped to his senses realizing what he had done, after completing therapy, he devoted his time to his daughter. ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;">''<span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">When Elefsis turned 10, she became very thin (because sometimes she refused to eat) but had a strong will, and Michael was afraid of her, especially when she was angry, and she was dangerous because she had been training in martial arts.She would fly into a demon-like furry, almost if she was insane. She took joy in watching people's misfortune. Michael tried in vain to reach her mother, to ask what he should do, but nothing. So when she turned 13 he decided to take matters into his own hands, he sent her to a mental facility to help with her anorexia and her temper. After several months no improvement was made, but Elefsis had slowly, over several weeks, starved herself into a coma. Michael (finally) realizing that these things might be part of her powers took her home when she came out of the coma. However, while in her coma, Elefsis saw a large bluish-purple mass that said it was sent from her mother, who told her about who she was and what she could do. When she came out of the coma her father told her he understood everything now and he was taking her home. As she packed, she found in the bottom of her drawer a Celestial Bronze double-edge axe and clawed gloves. And a note that said: "When needed, you will know." ''

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;line-height:15.75pt;">''<span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">On the way home, a Manticore attacked them, running the car off the road which killed her father instantly. During her anguish, she found a new feeling of real rage not just one of her temper-tantrums. Then in a blinding rage she rushed at the manticore, summoning her weapons she ripped the creature into pieces. After her rage ended she was covered in blood and rolling around in the creature’s remains. After calming down, she walked all the way to Camp Half-Blood, until she fainted from exhaustion. ''

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;"><span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Weapons: <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">''<span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">  <span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0in;">Arm length, pure celestial bronze, double-edge axe with her mother's name inscribed on it and clawed gloves. ''

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"> Itztli-Tochtli Teyolitia Chichinaca  (I am, who I am, who I am, who am I?)   01:34, December 5, 2013 (UTC)'''

Comments
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sorry didn't know it did that, the thing didn't show up under the claims. <span style="background-color:blue; border-bottom:1px solid blue; border-left:2px dashed green; border-right:3px outset red; border-top:2px dotted purple; font-size:20px;">Itztli-Tochtli Teyolitia Chichinaca 01:27, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, lad! No guns are allowed to be used as weapons, even with celestial bronze bullets. So change it to a melee weapon like a sword, spear, axe, etc., or if you want a ranged weapon, do a bow.

Craftman (talk) 01:29, November 19, 2013 (UTC)Craftman

okay with what craft said, since enyo isn't one of our 45 camp gods. you can't have her as one of your choices

Another thing is that your history needs some improvement, as it is rather short. You're supposed to explain specifically how the parents met, your character's childhood, and how they eventually got to camp. It should be at least around 3 paragraphs, so please, would you kindly repair this conundrum?

Craftman (talk) 01:33, November 19, 2013 (UTC)Craftman

Okay number one, Guns are not allowed, if you don't change this your claim will be invalid and deleted when the 25 is reached. Please include a 3 to 4 paragraph history. Which should include, mortal and god meeting, the early years to age of attack anywhere from 11-13...

uhhhhh guys, it says WIP o.o

Oizys does not have a cabin at camp, please remove her from the choices.

then why are there children of Oizys on the wiki?

<span style="background-color:black; border-bottom:5px magneta; border-left:5px dashed purple; border-right:5px outset red; border-top:5px dotted green; font-size:20px;">Itztli-Tochtli Teyolitia Chichinaca

A note on the weapon, obsidian wouldn't harm monsters, and a flame thrower attacked to gloves is a bit OTT. Her powers wouldn't be active as a baby, they come in around 12-13 (for an Eris kid), the age start getting sniffed out by monsters. How could she be considered strong if she never ate? She wouldn't be able to see her mother, that's direct interference. How old was she when she was attacked?

I need clarification on the weapon. How can an item given sub-consciously in a coma-induced dream transpose into the real world? ~Moodle, Yours to command (Sig WIP).

You can't have a "mysterious power" saving Elefsis from her father's actions; that would be direct interference. Also, people would obviously witness her father trying to jump into a lion's cage and jumping off of an overpass and he would be arrested and Elefsis taken from him.

okay after that murder-suicide thing there is NO WAY IN HELL! he'd get elefsis back and btw the manticore would most definitely tearing HER to shreds :3 since ya know, she lacks training

Starving herself into a coma, would take weeks of not eating like at all, at which point most parents would start to notice she's refusing to eat any meals. If she was eating some to keep him from being suspicious, it would take even longer to get to the point of a coma, to the point where her body would look noticeably emaciated.

okay like i said even if she has weapons, without training. the manticore would still be the one doing the shredding >.<