Claiming:Camp/Sylvia Lopez

Name: Sylvia Lopez

Age: 15

Gender: Female

God Parent: Cybele, Apate, Aphrodite

Mortal Parent: Johnny Lopez

Appearance: 



Personality: She's a mild tempered girl who loves animals. She's a caring person as long as you don't get on her bad side. She loves to play tricks on people, and even pranks. She's a people person, and tends to be a little talkative.

History:

The encounter:

A young man, in his early 20's who happened to be very good looking. In other words he was a Man whore. He loved to get every girl who could as long as they where Pretty. The man was named Johnny Lopez. A lot of Women hated the sucker.

One night when he was in a bar he met a beautiful young women with strawberry blonde hair. He never had met a women with such beauty. He instantly feel in love with her. He convinced himself that he wouldn't do the dirty with her on the first time he saw her. But she had other plans, They ended up getting a hotel room, and doing the dirty. She didn't see her when he got up the next morning. He played it off like nothing happened.

A few months passed and he answered the door to see a baby in a silk blanket with golden lace, a letter written, and a bronze dagger. The note explained that she had to leave, and the dagger was to stay with the young girl at all times.

Johnny had, however, told his daughter that her mom had died when she was 3.

Early life:

As a young child she loved to play tricks on people, and be a little dramatic. She was also known for 'tricking' people into doing things for her. Once she tricked a store clerk into giving her a free candy bar & pop. The store clerk got her for stealing later on, and she was banned from the store. She also had a fondness for Dramatic things. She always got the main parts in the school play's she was in.

Monster attack(14 years old):

One day, when she was walking home from school, she noticed that the Zoo was letting people in for free as long as they had there school ID. She decided on going in. On the way to the Lion cage she met up with her friends Jenny, and Tanya. "Hey Tanya, Jenny wait up." She said the Happily as she was running up to them. They where in the zoo having fun, until they heard screaming coming from a corner of the zoo. Sylvia, of course, looked over to see a rampaging bull. She blinked again and then saw a Minotaur. She started to scream as it was running towards her. She, on the other hand, remembered the dagger had dad gave her, pulled it out. Sylvia screamed in terror as the monster came barreling towards her. When the monster got close enough she ducked. She looked up to see the underbelly of the monster,a nd drove the dagger into the center of  its chest. This only made it angrier. it in turn flipped around causing Sylvia to go flying. She was a bit shocked when she saw one of her friends ran at the monster, and turn it to a pile of dust.

She woke up a few hours later in the hospital. She told the tale of what had happened. Everyone thought she was simply crazy, and laughed at her. She of course knew what she saw. She freaked out of course. The doctors called a psychiatrist the next. She told them what she had saw. He just gave her a weird look and told her she was hallucinations, and was possibly going crazy. They put her on medication to 'stop' the Hallucinations.

Getting to camp(15 years old(3 months later)):

Sylvia was walking down Broadway to her fathers work, when she suddenly  saw something out of the corner of her eye. She shrugged it off, and continued to walk. She walked another 15 minutes until she came upon a bank called 'Charter 1.' She walked in with a smile on her face. She looked over at the counter to see her father gone. She looked around for him, and then spotted him. "Hey dad." She said this as he spotted her. She walked over to him and giving him a hug. she gave him a bag. "I gotta go sorry, but I'll be home later for diner." She looked at him, and walked out of the bank.

She walked for about 20 minutes. She turned down an alley. She looked around as she heard the crunching of wrappers. She turned around to see an old women. She laughed it off and then looked again to see a feathered Lady. She gazed at it, and laughed. She looked at the feathered lady, as she started to come towards her. She freaked out, and started to run. She came to a dead end, when she remembered the dagger she kept in her purse she dumped out her purse as she notice a bronze gleam to it. She looked at the feathery beast, and ran ran towards it. She stabbed it as hard as possible. Causing it to turn to dust. She looked at her hands as she noticed a little bit of dust on it, and then brushed it off on the grass as she emerged on the other side of the alley.

`She ran into her friend Tanya. She told Tanya everything. "well I gotta tell ya something." Tanya looked at her, and started to shed her skin showing a thundery body. Sylvia started to freak out, and scrambled behind a tree. "I'm a Thunder Nymph." She said this with a smile. Sylvia backed away, and thought rationally 'this isn't real' She looked at Tanya and blinked again. She then started to laugh.. "Nymphs are from Greek Mythology, that crap isn't real..." She said this as Tanya zapped a flower from the ground. "Believe me now?" She said this calmly. "Sure, next you're gonna say Demigods are real." She looked at Tanya who smiled. "Of course they are. You wouldn't be here if they weren't." She looked at her coolly, and smiled, "How can that be? My moms dead." She said this in an Irrational voice.Tanya then looked at her, and smiled. "well she's a goddess, not sure which one though." She said this fast.

Tanya explained to her about the Gods & Goddess having children with Mortals. Sylvia looked at Tanya in complete shock. "That's kind of cool." She said this as they walked down Broadway, She looked at Sylvia. "Well there's a camp you should go to. It's called camp half blood." She looked at Tanya, and continued to listen. "It's the only place safe for Half-bloods like yourself." She said this a bit fast. Sylvia looked at Tanya, and smiled. "Well how am I gonna tell my dad?" She looked at the girl. "well I left a note with him explaining everything." She looked at her. "How about my clothes? I can't live without my Clothes & make up, and you know that" She looks at her with a desperate look. "Already got them packed in my car lets go."

They drove for about an hour stopping in front of an old farm house. "This doesn't look like a f*cking camp." She say's this a bit rudely. Tanya looked at her pulling the girls bags out of the car. "Well we have to walk past the magical borders first." She said this fast, ans started to carry her stuff up the hill. They walked a couple of minutes as they walked past the borders. Sylvia was amazed by what she saw. She looked to see a ton of cabins all lined around. She smiled happily as she was told to go to the Hermes cabin to put her stuff away. She's been waiting patiently for her Mother to claim her.

Weapons: Dagger, and Xphios

~The life of one is what matters most, to the littlest plant to the biggest Animal&#60;3 (talk) 17:12, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

Comments
Kindly sign your claim with four tildes (~). In the time when she was seven, it said a tiger came up to her but she petted a lion. When did the lion approach? Why would she carry a dagger with her? In addition, why carry a weapon if you don't know how to use it? What age was she when she was attacked by the Minotaur? What age was she when she arrived at Camp? Oh also, could you fix up a few misspelled words?

Yesh I can...It was like 5 in the morning when I made this >w<

~The life of one is what matters most, to the littlest plant to the biggest Animal&#60;3 (talk) 17:12, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

Almost there, Chocoshake! :D Just a few issues to address.

It doesn't really take 9 months for a demigod to be born from a godly mother. If her first monster attack was at the age of 14 and he got to camp when she was 16, it means she's outside... meaning... she'd be exposed to monster attacks. How was she able to survive for two years?

13:32, December 6, 2013 (UTC)

Who exactly called her crazy and put her on medications?

The Psychiatrist did and Thank you Ice Cream. :D

~The life of one is what matters most, to the littlest plant to the biggest Animal&#60;3 (talk) 05:55, December 7, 2013 (UTC)

It still wouldn't make much sense for a girl to carry around a dangerous weapon everywhere she goes, especially when she doesn't even know how to wield the said weapon. Kindly expand a bit more on who Tyler is in the first part and what exactly his role was in her life. Next, it says she woke up in the hospital but there was no mention that she passed out in the first place. Then, why was there a need to go to her father's workplace? Lastly, where did she get her weapons?

I know I'm gonna fix it tomorrow. >w<

~The life of one is what matters most, to the littlest plant to the biggest Animal&#60;3 (talk) 04:55, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

The early childhood part needs more details. It only has one sentence, which isn't enough.

Where did she get her bow and arrow?

Could you please add a bit to the gap between her early childhood and her monster attack? Also, 14 is pushing it for a monster attack. It should be between 11-13, so you could have her attacked the day before her 14th birthday, if that works.