Claiming:Camp/Asyline Hayes

Name: Asyline Opheria Hayes

Age: 17

Gender: Do you want to check? Of course she's a female.

God Parent:

1. Poseidon (Although the story and the picture will make sense a little more.

2. Apollo

3. Thanatos

Mortal Parent: The lovely and beautiful Ashlynn Hayes

Appearance: At the right :3

Personality: '''Okay! *takes a deep breath and ties a cloth around my forehead* LETS DO DIS!!!!!!'''

Asyline is a girl with a shy and introverted person. She is very courageous, courteous and, at times, rebellious. She is very trustworthy and loyal. She is also very stubborn and hot tempered. She is very nervous around boys and will blush a lot. She tends to keep her head down whenever she is outside camp because of her bright sea green eyes so she will tend to be very insecure. She is very witty and sarcastic when you manage to break her shell and be a little more cozy around her. She is normally seen with her half siblings, why? Because they simply understands her more than usual campers. She also have arguments with the Ares and Aphrodite's campers because what they normally do really does infuriates her.

History:

Young Ashlynn Hayes was a very adventurous and an extrovert girl. She was also very rebellious which explains how Asyline gained her rebellious streak. Rules never seemed to have pushed her down as she had always seemed to find a loophole around it. She was so outgoing and fun-loving that sometimes people wonder if Asyline really is her daughter. She had always managed to sneak off in the nights into the big and vast forests that seemed to hold a never ending interest in the little five year old. But the only place that holds dear memories to the little brown-haired girl is the beach, oceans or lakes.

Whenever she is near the water bodies, she would always spot fishes sort of bowing down at her but she would always dismissed them as a sugar rush attack in her brain from the many juice box that she drinks. As she began to grow older, she finally found her job and interest in studying the many types and mysteries of the marine animals in the big blue ocean. When she was 25, she finally had a degree in biology, learnt how to swim and scuba dived, got master degrees in biology and finally had a job in one of the top aspiring biology labs in Manhattan. She cares deeply for the ocean and that's how she managed to catch the attention of the sea god(s).

One bright and blue day, 27-year-old Ashlynn Hayes was out in the ocean, trying to figure out how stonefish managed to produce poison glands on top of their skin when she spotted a poor little turtle stuck in a fishing net. Ashlynn had growled at the fishermen whom were ignoring the turtle and she had gotten away from her research and freed the little marine turtle away. This caught the attention of (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) and immediately it was love in first sight as the god(s) drank in the beautiful appearance of Ashlynn. Not only that, her kindness and true love and care for the ocean made then/him love her even more.

But sadly, Ashlynn was already engaged to a handsome but cheating and conniving young man named Steven Willson. But still, that didn't stopped (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) from getting to know her so he disguised as a new marine biologist named John Zickerberg that just came back from New Zealand and Ashlynn was his new teacher for showing the god the ropes in the lab. She managed to crack jokes with the god and became good friends with him. By the second month, All the female scientists were infatuated with (Poseidon/Pontus/Thalassa) but Ashlynn was still blinded by her love for her fiancé.

Soon enough, Ashlynn caught Steven making out with a prostitute in bed and Ashlynn was heartbroken. She immediately walked to the ocean and began to shout, scream and cried out to the ocean about why she had chosen a bad man for a fiancé. Soon, (Poseidon/Pontus/Thalassa) heard her cries and gently comforted her. She sought comfort in the man's arms as Ashlynn became dangerously drunk with the bottle of beer she had brought to the beach. Poseidon couldn't take the urge and desire so, in her state of unconsciousness, had done 'it' with her.

2 months later, Ashlynn finally found out that she was pregnant with a baby in her womb so she tried to kill it, thinking it was Steven's baby as she caught him cheating on her behind her back so it will feel like a burden carrying his child. (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) had secretely stopped her from doing it, knowing that it was his child and his own flesh and 'blood'. Ashlynn finally stopped although she still have bad feelings about it, (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) finally thought it was time to show everything to the young woman and, although Ashlynn was a bit unconvinced at first, she finally was convinced and 7 months later, she given birth to a beautiful young baby girl called Asyline Hayes and that didn't have brown eyes but beautiful sea green eyes that were similar to the man that Ashlynn called her loved one.

(Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) was overjoyed at this fact and the fact that he had a child with one of his most beloved lover but Zeus eventually found out and (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos)was forced to go back to his home on Olympus. But before that day came, the god had given one of his favourite child a dagger that can turn into a bow at will. Before the night that he will disappear back to Olympus, he asked Ashlynn what her wish was and the 30 year old said. "I have a loving husband and a beautiful little girl. What more could I want? Although, it has always been my dream to go to Australia and take a dive in the deep blue seas."

The next morning, Ashlynn woke up and found that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) wasn't beside her and there were two strips of paper that had appeared on the nightside table that were a trip to Australia. After the trip to Australia, Asyline and Ashlynn were living a happy life. But then Ashlynn was forced to consider about sending her to the camp that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) had told her about before disappearing in the middle of the night. Because of Ashlynn's gift of looking through the mist and she saw some monsters near Asyline. One day, when Asyline was seven years old, she had made the sink exploded because somebody had taunted her that her mother was a w*ore and that she was pregnant with a bast*rd child.

And when Asyline was 8 years old, she was in the at ground, playing with other kids when a tall man in a trench coat walked over to her and talked to her. He said that she was very pretty and would liked a lollipop. Asyline almost accepted it but she had a managed to see only one eye under the man's head. Ashlynn had found out about this and brought her to another playground to play in.

When Asyline was 9, she had gone out of the house and immediately a hellhound pounced on her, knocking her down. She had struggled under the big demon as she had used a big stick and whacked it and it let her go after being confused for a while but immediately recovered from it's shock. She looked around for a weapon but the hellhound grabbed her legs and pulled her under him. Asyline rolled away and her hairpin that, her mother told her to keep it in her hair always,rolled out and it turned into a knife, Asyline's eyes widened as she remembered her mothe told her to just swing it and stab it towards a creature if it doesn't seemed like a normal human being. She hesitantly grabbed it and the hellhound came towards her.

She has stabbed it in the hellhound's head just in time before she got mauled to death. Ashlynn finally knew what had happened so she finally made a decision, Asyline would go to camp and stay there until she is old enough to fight. Ashlynn had found a satyr named Colin Reeves that had been looking after them ever since Asyline was born with the orders from (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) and told him to go and find Camp Half Blood.

Along the way, they had encountered another monster called an Empousai. She was very angry at Asyline as Percy had killed their senior Empousai (Kelli) so the Empousais had sworn revenge on all children of (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos.) So she had disguised as a cashier and Asyline was in the store to buy some food but then the Empousai appeared and attacked her.

Asyline yelped and was shocked but she managed to dodged back and her hairpin and became the knife again. She growled as she was so sick of monsters, she perfectly dodged all of the empousai's attacks and finally killed it with a stab on it's eye.

The monster was killed but the satyr was gravely injured in the process because she had scratched him, thinking it would distract Asyline. But he managed to bring Asyline safely in the borders of Camp Half Blood. When Asyline was 11 and gotten stuck in the Hermes Cabin for far too long, she saw a Poseidon camper being bullied by an Ares kid, she had feel her justice side shown and immediately, a big sphere had appeared around the Ares Camper. After putting him down, Asyline was claimed as a (Poseidon/Pontus/Thalassa) child.

Weapons: A dagger that is most of the time in a form of a blue hairpin with seaweed and shells on it but it will turn into a dagger and a bow that Asylie rarely uses due to the fact that she is awful with it.

(I think went a little too overboard with the history.......A fricken ten paragraphs story XD)

The-Mysical (talk) 13:08, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
okay so XD here are le mistakes: Not A Bad Claim Actually.
 * Add Your Siggy Or 4~'s
 * If You want a siggy, you could either ask someone to help make it for you or request one here: Custom Signatures
 * Please Change Pontus and Thalassa and pick camp gods. >~< They have no cabins.
 * Look Under Camp Gods Or just go on the main page of the wikia and when ya see the tabbers click "Cabins" and it will lead you to the cabin list c:.
 * Why would she kill the baby? I mean, why if it was Stevans?
 * The Godparent would have to leave at least when she's born. But they cant have contact at all. Asyline wouldn't know him at ALL. No touching eachother, seeing eachother, etc, etc.
 * But you could leave the wish thing and the dagger thing
 * when did her father give her a knife O.o
 * Write Her Current Age On The Top Of The Claim Please
 * Can you at least explain the hellhound attack a bit more? Like did she slide under it, did she throw a ball at it and then dig the knife into it's shoulderblades causing it to die.

Edited! The-Mysical (talk) 14:04, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Can you explain some of those attacks? Also I she cant spend that long at camp. The way the claim sounds she sounds 13. You would need more attacks 1. Explain her childhood please. Also, why would her mother make her go at 18? Because doesn't she care for her daughter's life?

Edited!......Again! The-Mysical (talk) 23:16, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Ok so first of all you monsters wouldnt attack Asyine so young even if she is one of the big three. Also there are arge age gaps 4 to 6 to 9, please fix that. Hellhounds can wiegh as much as a car so "rolling out under it" wouldnt work. How would Asyline know to use her hairpen as a weapon if her mother didnt tell her that. Include more information on the satyr because it appears as if he appeared out of nowhere. Empousai are medium level monster so a singe demigod could kill the thing by herself. Fix the format on your last paragraph it seems to e doing a scroll effect.

Edited! Again......And again.....Also, I'm on my phone so I can't seem to find the problem of the scrolling...........

The-Mysical (talk) 00:36, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

You stil havent fixed this part. " The next morning, Ashlynn woke up and found that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) wasn't beside her and there were two strips of paper that had appeared on the nightside table that were a trip to Australia. After the trip to Australia, Asyline started to attract the attention of many evil and deadly monster that wanted to kill the young daughter of (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos). Ashlynn was forced to consider about sending her to the camp that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) had told her about before disappearing in the middle of the night. One day, when Asyline was seven years old, she had made the sink exploded because somebody had taunted her that her mother was a w*ore and that she was pregnant with a bast*rd child" Any god children can not be attacked before age 8 and your saying in this part that when asyline was attacked before that age.

Fixed.......Again.......Again.......And again......... Also when Asyline was seven years old, she didn't have a monster attacked her, she made the sink explode.

The-Mysical (talk) 01:54, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

" T, Asyline started to attract the attention of many evil and deadly monster that wanted to kill the young daughter" She wouldnt atract monster when she is a baby.

Edited!.......Again......Again.......Again........And Again..........

The-Mysical (talk) 02:08, June 16, 2014 (UTC) Whats the name of your model?

I don't know since Katniss helped me put the 'Unknown Model' category below

The-Mysical (talk) 02:16, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

looks good to me, ask someone to claim it

Alright! Finally, after like 4-5 edits, I can get claimed :3

The-Mysical (talk) 03:01, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Yep

Not quite ready to be claimed, sorry. How did the godparent stop Ashlynn from killing the baby? Could you add in some more details on her childhood before the age of seven? This wiki is set 17-18 years after the event of the Percy Jackson novels, so Kelli would have had time to reform. You cannot have a dagger/knife as a main weapon. Asyline's main weapon has to be something substantial like a sword, bow, spear etc. Finally, there is a huge problem in the end of the history. On the wiki we have a rule that no character being claimed has been at camp for the past three years (three years is how long the wiki has been running, if you're saying that your character has been here for those three years it's sort of like cheating because there are users and characters who have been here for those three years and it's not fair on them, because your character has not existed on the wiki during that time). You've said she is 17 at the top of the claim, but she's only 11 at the end of the claim. So you can either change her age to 11 as that is how old she is at the end of the claim, or you could have her attend camp for a bit and then leave and come back, or she could stay in the mortal world and get to camp at 17 after a lot of monster attacks. Or something in between. Sorry for the super long comment >.<