Claiming:Camp/Nareus Kennedy

--Oceanhalo12 (talk) 00:30, October 1, 2014 (UTC)

Name: Nareus Blu Enki Kennedy

Gender: Male

Age: currently 15

God Parent: Poseidon, Palaemon, Eros

Mortal Parent: Danielle Kennedy(clear sighted)

Appearance: Obsidian hair with grayish-cyan eyes. Is about 6'00'" in inches? He is usually seen shirtless with a blue jacket (from his mom's fiancé) and some jeans or shorts. Has a starfish necklace he got from Poseidon on his fourteenth birthday. Has a great body :) He lis a light chocolate color, as he is Greco-African American- Australian.He weighs about 120lbs. He has a pair of sport blue retro3s that he is usually seen wearing. Http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-kZwXcY87eko/TnDNpSY970I/AAAAAAAADMI/gZYttQett0c/s1600/JesseWilliams10.jpg http://cdn.madamenoire.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/j-w.png

Personality: A fun loving guy with a starry personality and a love for nature. Always ready for adventure and excitement. Has a love for aquatic sports. He is super empathetic to everyone. He has a tendency to shrug of things. He has a humorous nature that makes people like him. He love to be around people, and has a firm belief everyone has destiny. He is very artsy and loves to draw.

 History: Background: Danielle grew up in Cape Byron, New South Wales, Australia and had a love for children, and always wanted one. She was very smart, but shy, and went diving in the Great Barrier Reef often. Because of this her family was surprised when she suddenly became a people person is 12 grade. After graduating she did five years of college and earned a masters and bachelor’s degree. At age 26 she got a job as a marine biology/ marine health professor and worked there for two years before she meet Poseidon.

 Parents Meeting: Danielle was at a conference of the board of marine biologist, when the Co chairman introduced himself as Poseidon (which she thought was ironic). After a terribly long discussion, Poseidon asked her for coffee and she says "yes." They dated for a few months and she found out she had been pregnant, since late June(It was late July).He said he must go, knowing her love, he left her  Palirroia Tou Chalkou, and a starfish chain for her son.

 Birth of Me:  Nareus was conceived are March 11, while his mom was going on 27 years of age. After this his mum moved to King Mills, Ohio, to be closer to New York, when the time came. He was named nareus after a roman in the bible.

 Childhood: Nareus grew up on a farm in King Mills, Ohio where he played with the animals, and had lots of fun. His mother taught marine dynamics at Case Western Reserve, therefore their farm was purely fun. At age five Nareus was diagnosed with major Adhd and Super dyslexia. When he was six he met a nice girl named Bering, who became his best friend (who was also his protector).They immediately became great friends and she came to his seventh birthday party. On his seventh birthday his mom gave him a starfish necklace and told him to never lose it, but he shrugged it off. When At age nine the horses on his farm started whispering to him, which he found unreal. On his tenth birthday he had a huge party with lots of kids, and his favorite foods. His mother seemed nervous as if waiting for something to happen (I later found out she feared a monster attack), but he shrugged it off and continued with his fun.

 First Monster: At age eleven, while at home a Giant scorpion appeared. Luckily Bering (she is about 600 YEARS, but was 13, and trained when she was cursed) was there and she created and ice storms, while muttering “you are prepared”, “keep it together Bering." Next she molded a small sword out of pure ice and tossed it to him. Then she disappeared, I mean like invisibility cloak disappeared (I later found out that she disappeared into snow/ice in the storm then went back to normal and snuck up quietly on the Scorpion).Suddenly the scorpion screeched in pain and swung his tail nearly stabbing my mother, while she was standing in the doorway, and she abruptly closed the door and ran and threw a sword. The scorpion fell on its side and he went to give the sword to Bering, when she said "use it." And he did, and the scorpion turned to reddish-brown colored dust. With that the ice melted all over his cut which then closed up immediately, which he shrugged off. When he looked down he found a piece of scorpion hide in the ice puddle, and Bering said Keep that.

 Second Monster:  One day Nareus was riding CHESTNUT, a horse from their farm when a harpy attacked just before his twelfth birthday, Nareus still recovering from his mom explaining his parentage, just hours before was shell shock. When Bering shot a ball of ice at it from a tree (seriously I'm starting to think children of Boreas can be invisible). Regaining my mindset I pulled out PTC (Palirroia Tou Chalkou) and lured it down then slashed its wing and it crumbled to white dust. After this I confronting Bering and she said that “As you know I am   a demigod but I’m also your protector." Naturally I replied "what?", and she said she was a daughter of a woman and Boreas, and was had been stuck in a state of un-aging freeze, (a curse from her immortal brother Zethes), and had been giving as a protector to Poseidon’s new son, as her father was strange as it is “favoring” Poseidon at the time.

 Third Monster, Bering and he had left his mother, after spending about 10 months with His new dad Da’on Tals. They were at lake Erie when Poseidon appeared and said he would protect him and let him live in the sea,. Nareus had just turned thirteen and gladly accepted. But a Karkinos attacked, and as he knew about this he let it grab him, just to overpower it and throw it away from the water. He did get scraped, but the Karkinos stupidly shot a spray of water at him and the water healed him. He pulled out PTC, and jabbed it repeatedly on its underside, and it tuned to brown dust. Nareus spent a 2 years with his father until, Poseidon could not endure Amphitrite’s jealousy no longer and transported Nareus by a hippocampus named fýkos (seaweed), and he arrived minutes later on his fifteenth birthday. His father told him he could call on fykos just by thinking. He also gave me a Pegasus named Springstrike.

<p class="MsoNormal"> <p class="MsoNormal">Camp arrival: Nareus arrived and was greeted by Bering and a centaur named Alexander, who explained everything and welcomed him to his new home: The Poseidon Cabin.

<p class="MsoNormal"> <p class="MsoNormal">Weapons: PTC (Palirroia Tou Chalkou) which as you Greeks know means tide of bronze. It is a mini-trident that morphs into a sword.It has palirroia tou chalkou on it sideways and a trident on vertically.If Nareus is angered its power to freeze water and glows with a stellar turquoise color. It looks like this: http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130801225545/h2o/images/b/b3/Trident.jpg

asteríes means starfish, and is a starfish chain that can turn into a polished celestial bronze dagger. The necklace can provide Nareus with invisibility, only minutes at a time.

Oceanhalo12 (talk) 00:31, October 1, 2014 (UTC)

Comments
Thank you for your first claim and welcome to the wiki. There are a few points I would like you to address, so your character can be presented in the best way possible and fit in. If there is anything you find confusing then feel free to message me on my page. By clicking my signature, you will be directed there.

1: Please can you mark it with your signature? This can be done by pressing the signature button in source mode, if you're unsure what that means, please contact me or ask someone on the main chat (:

2: There are a few spelling, grammatical and formatting errors in your claim. It's nothing to be ashamed of (claims are big after all!) but sometimes it's hard to mean what you articulate. I would ask you to have a quick proof-read of the claim and fix any errors you find. If you need any help/struggle with spelling, feel free to ask and I can retype for you.

3: Please can you reformat or extend the personality and apperance section a little more, a few more lines would go a long way to helping the claim workers see who you're playing, additionally it's advised to add the name or a link to the model you are going to use for that character's page.

4: There needs to be some more work on history, maybe a little more on Naerus' childhood, why he was moved to Ohio by his mother, what his early childhood was like etc. Around 5-6 lines would do. Additionally Bering cannot be a daughter of Poseidon/Khione as I believe she would be an immortal then which isn't acceptable under wiki policy. However I could suggest that she be a demigod daughter of Poseidon or a camp god like Boreas (the north wind) or merely an ice nymph created by Boreas, please also add her age at the time of the first attack. An ice weapon would injure the scorpion but celestial bronze would kill it easier, Bering seems to have too much control over her powers for a demigod who seemingly hasn't gone to camp. If she is indeed an ice nymph, she would struggle in combat as the nymphs have weaker power-sets than demigods.

5: Second monster attack: Please write an age when this occured, also I doubt that Poseidon would give his son a pegasi if he wasn't at camp, as Naerus wouldn't know how to ride or look after it and both of them would consequently be at risk. As Naerus isn't a trained demigod, he may also find it harder to take out a harpy and need Bering's help to do so. Please can you also detail the trip/journey to camp, if Bering is an ice nymph or a daughter of a cabin god, she could probably escort him to camp safely c:

7: Please can you add further detail on the weapons? I am unsure of what a PTC actually is; is it a sword, is it an axe etc? Please list all weapons you intend to use and detail any minor enchantments placed on Naerus' weapons? I assume these were given to his mother by Poseidon and then passed down to him at some time?

Thanks and feel free to ask me any questions, I look forward to Naerus being developed!

Please fix to what Scales suggested. I believe the girl and him couldn't have killed a giant scorpion as it would overpower and outsmart them. How did he arrive at camp? How did he receive the pegasus?{{User:Broken fire/

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Zethes is the demigod son of Boreas, brother of Calais. He is a Boread