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Name: Estrelle Lacroix

Age: 15

God parent: Asteria

Mortal Parent: Claude Lacroix​ 

Species: Demititan

Appearance: Estrelle has pale skin, and her hair is dyed purple. She usually spreads some silver glitter on her hair to make it galaxy-like. She’s quite short and a bit tiny in general. Although quite agile, Estrelle isn’t very athletic.

Personality: Estrelle is a stylish, classy person, never rude or churlish. She cares much about others, always willing to make them feel proud of themselves. Most of the time she’s perceived as shallow, but she has a heart of gold. What she can’t stand is when someone is being overlooked. Estrelle believes that everyone should be treated as equal, not only demigods- mortals, nymphs etc. too. She dislikes satyrs though because of the one she met during her past. She’d do almost everything to make this dream of hers come true.

History: Claude Lacroix lived in Marseille, France. He was an astronomer, but his hobby was astrology. He read lots of books about it and went to many astrologists to know his fate. One of them, Angeline, was really Asteria in disguise. When they met for the first time, each of them felt that the other understands them like nobody else does. They quickly fell in love and stayed together for almost half a year until Angeline left, breaking Claude’s heart. Five months after he found a baby girl on his doorstep, along with a pair of earrings. He was a little surprised, but took the earrings with him believing it’s Angeline’s last gift for their daughter, whom he named Estrelle.

Estrelle’s early childhood was happy and carefree. She lived with her father in Marseille and had some friends. She was an average student and a little dyslectic, but still she managed to get satisfying grades and even win a few art competitions. In her free time, she enjoyed fashion design and sewing as it made her feel relaxed.

But everything changed when she was 12. Her father died in a car accident and Estrelle was adopted by their neighbors, Jacques and Blanche. But the new parents weren’t good to her. She was neglected, and if complained about it, even beaten by her new alcoholic mother. She sneaked out of their house as often as she could. She didn't know that their scent kept monsters away from her, probably saving her life.

One day, when she was 14, two telekhines attacked her while she was walking by the seaside. She tried to dodge their strikes, and fell to the ground, accidentally rubbing one of her earrings, which were the ones Claude found with her. The earrings suddenly changed into a bow and a quiver full of arrows. As she took archery lessons as a child, she managed to shoot the monsters. That caused her to believe she’s “weird” and “different”.

Estrelle lived with her foster parents for about three years until she couldn’t stand them anymore. She took some money, food and personal belongings and ran away. Blanche and Jacques weren’t really touched by it, as they never loved Estrelle. The 15-year old-girl lived alone in a tent in the countryside for a month. Then a satyr met her. He told her about who she was and invited her to Camp Half-blood. But Estrelle thought that if her mother was a titaness, she could help her in her difficult life. That’s why she refused to go to camp. The satyr insisted, but three members of the Broken Covenant, on their way back from a mission, interrupted. They fought the satyr and made him escape, wounded. One of them asked Estrelle to come with them and told her about what awaited her there. She agreed, feeling that the gods can do no good.

Weapons: Star-shaped earrings/Bow and arrows (Celestial Bronze, change when chafed)

Why they want to join the BC: Estrelle believes the gods aren’t good rulers because no rulers are entirely good. She strongly believes in democracy.

Desired faction: Civitas Popularis

Reason for choosing that faction: Even though Estrelle isn’t a fan of the gods, she doesn’t want to destroy them. She strongly believes in democracy and wants everyone: demigods, nymphs, everyone to be able to vote on important issues, so Civitas Popularis would be perfect for her.

Dirael (talk) 13:25, November 4, 2017 (UTC)


Comments

Hey Dirael, I'm Toxy and I'll be checking your claim today. I tidied up the format so it'd be a bit easier to read, if that's cool with you. Anyway I'll just jump right in:

  • Unfortunately that picture is already in use, by Natalia's character Emma. If you don't want to change it, you can try asking for permission to share it on Natalia's talk page.
  • Where is Estrelle from?
  • Can you elaborate on her early childhood? For example, how did she do in school? Just some details to establish that point in her life a bit more.
  • 14 is a bit late for a first monster attack. Don't worry, though - you already have the setup in place for the "disgustingly human" defense! In the books Percy avoided monster attacks because his scummy step-dad masked his scent with how grossly human he was. Estrelle's foster parents would probably hide her scent too. If you say that in the history, then you'll be set.
  • Why did the Broken Covenant member arrive? Did he just get lucky and happen across Estrelle and the satyr? If so, what was he doing in the area? And if not, how did he know she was there?

The history is overall a bit barebones, but hey, it meets the minimum requirements. As it stands now these are my only points. Also, don't forget to sign the claim and any comments you make! If you haven't made a signature yet, just type four ~s!

BecquerelWH4T K1ND OF 4WFUL C1V1L1Z4T1ON WOULDNT 1NV3NT OR4NG3 CR34MS1CL3SBecquerel

Alright, cool stuff. This hits all the necessary marks in my books. Now you're just waiting on approval from the leader of Civitas.

BecquerelWH4T K1ND OF 4WFUL C1V1L1Z4T1ON WOULDNT 1NV3NT OR4NG3 CR34MS1CL3SBecquerel


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Character's Bio


 Age: ???  Height: ???  Weight: ???
 Sexuality: ???  Relationship Status: N/A
  Main Weapon: His weapons are unknown while his attire is a white hooded robe, and a set of black and gold armor complimented by a full-face mask.

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Character's Powers

 Powers of a Child of Hebe:

  1. Children of Hebe have the ability to force the effects of age upon a person for a short time; making them feel pain and cause their movements to be slow and sedated.
  2. Children of Hebe can become temporarily changed during battle and become even stronger and quicker in combat than they were before, for a short time.
  3. Children of Hebe can become resistant to all types of physical attacks for a short time.
  4. Children of Hebe can cause an opponent to feel aching bones and muscles for a short time.
  5. Children of Hebe are innately stronger and faster due to their slow aging.
  6. Children of Hebe have an innately faster rate of healing than other people.
  7. Children of Hebe always have an unlimited supply of Ambrosia, even if none is on them at the time, they can create it out of nothing
  8. Children of Hebe can restore energy to a weakened person and heal some minor wounds.
  9. Children of Hebe are able to curse someone with being very young children again, this has the potential to cause the victim a feeling of being lost, helpless and often leading to fits of crying, this only lasts for a short time and drains the user considerably.
  10. Children of Hebe have the ability to strike someone with a curse of old age for a short time; however, the person will not only feel old, they will become old and be unable to fight or even defend themselves, this also drains the user for a considerable time while using the power
  11. Children of Hebe can bless water to have the effects of allowing whomever drinks it to feel young again for a short time, their appearance may also take on a more youthful appearance for as long as the effects last.
  12. These children age slower than normally, beginning around the age of 12, and retain a youthful appearance far longer than most.

Owned by: Admins & Crats ~ Posted on: 13:10, November 4, 2017


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Son of Koios ~ Owned by Margaery
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Welcome to the Broken Covenant and Civitas Popularis.

Age
25 years old
Height
6'2"
Weight
172 lbs
Sexuality
Heterosexual
Relationship
Single
Birthplace
New York City, New York
Accent
New York
Weapon
CB Short Sword
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