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Name: Madonna Madeline Klein
Gender: FemaleNicknames: Mostly Known as: Mads. Other names: Madeline, Miss.Klein, Maddie.
Mortal Parent: Armani Klein
Godparent: Aphrodite ^.^
Age: • 16 •
Note: The satyr was trained in camp A LOT.
Appearance: She has brown hair and is about 5'4. She has a very slender body but lets say (She has a pretty big chest ok? Im going to admit it.) She has pretty brown eyes and lips that are pale. She's small and is 120 pounds. She has dark eyebrows and she has somewhat a long nose. She is occasionally seen with nerdy glasses/regular ones. Her style is dressy-casual, basically small dresses but with adorable white sneakers. She is impersonated by Christine Prosperi
Her personality is hard to explain. She's a complicated person. She loves drawing and has a whole sketch book of them. She's a bit of a "thot" or a hoe. She loves thinking boys as boy toys and is not scared to cheat. She loves movies, the beach, and Madonna. She could sometimes be a primadonna. She's a bit seductive yet bossy.
Please note this satyr had tons of practice in >.> sword fighting."
History: Armani Klein worked as a stylist for famous stars. He then met this (Aphrodite) new girl who he had to style. He found out her name was Elizabeth Centric. They instantly fell in love. Soon, he tried to take days off working as they always wanted to be together. As they spent time together for months, they finally did it. She then soon found out she had a baby 2 weeks later, but she didn't tell him until she said she had to go on a trip to Paris. She left and as soon as she left 1 hour later he got a note and found a baby on the doorstep. The letter said:
I'm sorry to tell you I had to go to Mount Olympus. Read some greek mythology to understand. Anyways, this is our child, our real baby. Except she is a demigod. She is in danger of monsters. I know you took a few sword lessons so try to fight for her. Be careful. Sooner or later some person will come at your doorstep with her and tell her he needs to take her to camp half-blood. There will be a cabin for her and all her half siblings. Let him take her because it will be to safety. I'm sorry if your mad at me that I led you to this pain. Anyways, enclosed is a ring that could turn into a sword when you click the the M's Pearl. Don't tell her about it until she is older.
Aphrodite, Goddess Of Love & Beauty
He saw the baby and felt love for it as he felt for Elizabeth (Aphrodite). Of course at some point he felt a bit sad Elizabeth (Aphrodite) left him, he kind if got mad. I mean, she was kind of a player for having CABIN at this camp half blood. He soon named her Madonna, because he was a fan of her first, 2nd she was one of his first famous person he had to style.
Madonna grew up as someone who got what she wanted from the age of when she could speak. She took bow and arrow and sword fighting classes at Lake Bow-row when she was about 10, and met friends like Diana Renee. She had a wonderful life. She was the gossip girl at school and no one stopped her from doing what she wanted to do. She had tons of friends and was the most popular girl in school. She was always bribing the teachers and hated homework. She had tons of sleepovers, and parties especially at 11. She always wore the best clothes at school too. She hated gym and was one of the only girls that didn't try and steal their parents money, she got it from just pouting. She had a lot of boyfriends and loved watching black and white movies.
One day at 12, she saw a shadow of a cyclops. She could have sworn she saw a weird thing, but shrugged.
Madonna was then met her monster at age 13. She was in the girls locker room after gym and a long time of sweating (eww) and she was getting her clothes on. Then she saw the Harpy. She gasped and was so freaked out she also tried to run. Then, a random boy came in a attacked it for her by using reed pipes to wrap it up in a vine. She gasped. She first stared at him, and then said "What boy goes into the girls locker room? If your trying to see something of ours, go make out with someone or something" and then she walked out like nothing happened. Even though she was pretty much freaking out in her head. She then ran out when the guy was about to say something or get her.
At age 14, she was at a empty "about to close down" boutique to get a pink dress with golden roses. She then saw a lady with bronze legs. She yelped. The lady tried to kill her but then the same guy came out of a dressing room and attacked it by using his sword and trash can. Once he flipped, he dunked the trash can on it's head. Then when it wasn't looking her slid his legs under it and as it fell he killed it. "Are you stalking me? omg, whats going on?", she said. He told then told her about camp half blood. Since she didn't believe him she ignored him and told him, to get a freaking life. He then explained, "My Name is Nick, your a demigod, do we have to go through this EVERY TIME?" She cried and then said, "I don't want to leave my father you, you faggot!" She ran away crying from the stalker.
She then went on with her life, trying to pretend it was normal, as it wasn't. She went to school, wandered around the hallways and stuff
When she was 15, she was walking around looking for thrift shops to add on her blog. In a few months was her birthday and she was excited to decorate it with different reviews. All of a sudden, she was attacked by the empousa. But then, the same guy kicked the empousa with swift slash kick. She fell and started bleeding HARD on her elbow. The guy then got out his sword and flew it right in it's body, stabbing it. She was so happy yet so freaked out. He then put something over her and it was dark. And as the dark thing went over her, she heard him mutter, "Finally, I never thought a spoiled girl with 10 inch heels would run so fast."
She probably was knocked out for a day because when she woke up, she was home. She saw the same guy and yelped, "STALKER!" He told her calmly she was a half-blood and her dad knew. He also told her that his name was Nick. He took off his pants to show he was a satyr. She then slowly comprehended this and says, "So You a-aren't ly-ly-ly-lying?" Surprisingly, she didn't freak out as she saw many weird things that day. But she still yelled out annoyed, "Screw you and the Gods, I don't want to go to a fake imaginary camp." He also told her, that if she calmed down, they would be there faster. Her dad kept telling her to calm down and go to camp with Nick. She was so freaked, she fainted again.
She woke up a few hours later. It was twelve o'clock. She then said to Nick after re-assured she was a demigod and this was not a trick that she was ready. They then started their journey on the way to camp.
She was near the strawberry farm. They were making good progress. She got up and started walking with Nick in silence.
She was about to go through the camp door, after Nick told her about it but then a harpy came. She then looked at it and said, "Oh God, No f*cking way." But, something happened. The harpy kind of stared at her like he was her crush. She then slowly walked through the camp doors, while she was confronted by the camp director, "Alexander". He told her if she could do that, she was probably the daughter of Aphrodite or Eros. She then said, Her father fell in love with a women. All of a sudden, a beautiful dove animation showed up on her head, and she was claimed by her mother.
While she was at camp, she was in the deep forest. She then saw the santucary. A girl led her to a place where she saw the Opus group. She then said, "Where do I sign up?", as she was grinning at everyone. She turned 16 after a while staying at camp...
Weapons: Golden Ring that turns into a CB sword
Why She wants to join the BC: First of all, the gods have been here WAYYY too long in reign. 2nd of all, who wouldn't want to show them a taste of their own medicine. What if they were demigods and had to be almost killed by monsters? Now thats what I want to see. Lets show them a taste, shall we? I want to show the gods who's boss like Madonna. They hurt my father, well they get pain. They want nice Madonna, well Madonna's about to get wild.
Why should you belong to that faction, what are your core beliefs, why does their ideology suit your personality/beliefs? Well, I believe in showing them a taste of their own medicine. And, if thats going to have to take trying to conquer and make them hurt forever, so be it. Also, our god parents expect us to go and do as they want, like dogs? what the hell, no, no thank you. We must give them pain. Pain is the best for them, thats the only way they shall understand. We should be able to rule. We have to survive in both worlds, demigod and human life? Thats not going to work for me. Also, we should be able to have domination over both, gods and humans.
One of the core tenets of Opus is that the demigods would take over domination over the mortals, as opposed to liberating the mortals as Madonna seems to desire to do.
Who exactly was this boy that saved her from the harpy?
Kindly fix some of the spelling and grammar errors to avoid confusion. Next, on Aphrodite's letter, she said that someone will accompany Madonna to Armani, telling him that she must go to Camp Half-Blood. Why didn't that happen? Did Armani ever tell Madonna everything about her true identity? If Nick just whisked away Madonna without Armani's knowledge he would certainly wonder, even if he knew she will go to camp some day. He may think that his daughter just ran away, or got kidnapped, or this or that, you never know. Also, you said that "She then turned 16 concidently [coincidentally], a few days after waking up." Did she faint or something after Nick revealed himself to be a satyr? Because if she did, she wouldn't "agree and had to think it through again, she was carried by him for half of the time, and then let go when she was ready to accept that she was a demigod" because she's unconscious.
Fixed~ and it did happen. Nick brought her to camp. Katty<3
Could you fix the first paragraph? As I read it, Aphrodite gave birth in an hour e.o which is kinda disturbing XD Anyways, could you add in her childhood from 1-12?
what type of monster was the 'lady with the bronze leg'?
Empousa and I'll fix it when I get home. XD birth in an hour 0-0.
Fixed both <333
As Pandy's not an admin, nor does she own a Faction Leader, she may not approve Broken Covenant claims as Heinrich. So the edit has been reverted to the edit last made by Kat.
hmm, i feel like the monster attacks are poorly explained. like if you say stuff like "he distracted the empousai with a swift dropkick with his hooves and carried of madonna to safety" OR he could get her to safety while ensnaring the monster in vines (summoned by his reed pipes ofc) it'll be cool :)
Fixed hydro <.<
okay so... i feel like you should say the satyr did some weapons training, that would justify how he saved her for the last 2 attacks and maybe when he's explaining the greek world to her, you can have her not like how things are from the get go. "like, we demigods have to live and hide screw that!" because that would justify her reasons for joining the BC more. >.<
Kindly add a bit more to her early childhood. If you could possibly add in a few specific events, or even monster sightings, that would be great. Then, if she had a phone, her first monster attack would have come sooner, seeing as phones, the internet, etc can alert monsters within the area of a demigod's whereabouts. Then, how did the guy manage to have 10 daggers on him? It's not exactly easy to hide one or two daggers on your body but to have 10 on him is a bit too much (unless he had a bag full of them, then that's a different story altogether). How come the satyr didn't just approach her father sooner and have him explain the situation to Madonna, to avoid all those times of her running away from him? How did she suddenly get close to the strawberry farms? Nick couldn't have walked all the way while she was unconscious. Next, Aphrodite's symbol for claiming would be a dove, not a heart. How did she come across the BC member? They wouldn't just be wandering about Camp, you know. Could you also explain this line to me: "She then started to feel hate because of that Aphrodite". It doesn't quite make sense.
- Fixed The Dad thing
- Removed The Phone Thing
- Added More Childhood Stuff
- I now used a sword instead of 10 daggers
- Fixed The Opus stuff
- Fixed Aphrodite's sign
- It doesn't take 4 months for woman to find out she's pregnant. Normally, it only takes around 2 weeks.
- Why would Aphrodite leave two swords when just one would suffice?
- Then, could you add in specific events at specific ages? Like say, she was 7 when ______.
- What was the shadow she saw when she was 12?
- In her third monster attack (the one where she's 15 years old), you said she's 2 days away from her birthday. That's practically a year without any monster attacks so I'd suggest moving the third monster attack to a few months before her 16th birthday.
- As I've mentioned before, I highly doubt finding a BC member would be that easy. Perhaps you could say she wandered in the deeper parts of the forest where she came across a BC member? I'm pretty sure that would be plausible.
- Fixed The First One
- Fixed That One;didn't see that there
- got it
welp it looks good to me >.<
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