Name: Malachi Smith
Age: 17, Malachi’s birthday is September 20th 1994
History: I never knew my parents so i grew up in an orphanage in Winnipeg. The only reason I know my last name is because it was on a blanket that i was wrapped up in when the people found me. I hated every second of living in that orphanage. The other kids would always tease and bully me. When I was 10 I began to develop my powers. The first time it happened, i was on the ground and one of the other kids in the orphanage was going to kick me, but before he mad contact the lower half of his legs were frozen, the kid never bothered me after that. Another thing that happened to me was that I started to get attacked by monsters. The only reason I survived is that I learned how to control some of my powers. When I was 14 people noticed that strange things would happen around me so they started to call me a freak. After a year I ran away from the orphanage. I lived on the streets for the next two years of my life and i slowly made my way to New York. I tried to travel at night as much as i could and when i did stop i would just find some minimul amount of shelter incase it rained. I would steal anything food, clothes and other supplies i needed along the way. When I reached New York I was found by a satyr and he brung me to camp half-blood. at camp half-blood i never talked to anyone. then i heard about the BC and left to go find it.
Personality: Malachi is usually called cold. Also everyone calls him heartless. He’s only nice to people that know him well, not that it has happened before.
Likes: The cold, rules, ice cream
Dislikes: mortals, emotions, the gods
Weapons: I don’t have any, just my powers
Appearance: He has blonde hair and icy blue eyes. He’s very fit from doing sports at school. He has some scares on his arms from being attacked by monsters.
Mortal parent: Unknown
Powers: •I can fully freeze monsters and objects, and only partly freeze humans and demigods. the bigger it is the more energy i use freezing it •I'm more powerful the colder it gets •I can make things out of ice, but they can be easily destroyed and will melt after awhile • When I’m around a lot of snow I can create a snowstorm, but it drains a huge amount of energy
Faction: Opus Superum
Reason to join the Faction: I find that the mortals are weak and that the gods only use is to create more demigods. We are much stronger then both races and we deserve to rule. We shouldn’t have to run and hide from monsters.
The freezing things, should be careful as to if they can freeze mortals or demigods, because even a few minutes frozen could kill or give someone brain damage from lack of oxygen.BachLynn(Send an Owl!) 14:42, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
i changed it Iceclaw100 21:53, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
How did he survived two years on the streets? And why did he send the satyr away instead of receive his help, and how did he find The Sanctuary? Queen.Bee(Your Highness here!) 13:53, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
i mentioned that he had some control over his powers in between by the time he was 14, and i fixed the satyr part. Iceclaw100 11:59, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
Ok, so you ran away at 15 and lived ont he streets until 17? Ok so your powers would help you with monsters and maybe even mortal dangers, like muggers, rapists and murdereres, and maybe even why you'd be ok in the cold winter months because of your mother being who she is, but you'd still need food, shelter, money, living on the street isn't that much easier just because you are a demigod.BachLynn(Send an Owl!) 14:28, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
i changed it Iceclaw100 16:41, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
i made some changes with the history, I added the first time he used his powers, and was a bit more spacific about what he did when running away Iceclaw100 12:18, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
sorry i had that before, i just took it out and forgot to put it back in Iceclaw100 20:37, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
keeping on the move and luck Iceclaw100 20:19, November 3, 2011 (UTC)
OK, I'm going to approve this, but you should at least write in a couple of instances maybe in those 2 years where he had close calls with maybe like the police and/or monsters, I'm not saying it's impossible to survive on the streets for 2 years, but it should be pretty damn difficult.BachLynn(Send an Owl!) 17:46, November 6, 2011 (UTC)
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