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Index > Broken Covenant Claiming > Broken Covenant/Siegfried and Ragnar Thorsen - Approved


I've approved it for the BC and Civitas, but Ragnar's faction claim for Liberi still needs to be approved by either Raid or B...

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Name: Siegfried Abel Thorsen

Gender: Male

God Parent: Hecate

Mortal Parent: Gunnar Thorsen (Adopted by grandparents; Gunther Thorsen and Emilia Thorsen)

Appearance: (Currently 18 years old)

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Personality: Siegfried is the utter polar opposite of his brother Ragnar. He's eloquent, charming, and courteous to a fault. He's easy to get along with, and only during rare moments does it appear as if he is aggravated. He is well-preserved and sticks to his morals, in stark contrast with his younger half-sibling. He's loyal to his allies, and would never even consider betraying them if given the chance. He's passionate, dependable, and civil. He's a well-mannered polite young individual that can tolerate most people, and if he cannot, usually he would attempt to stray from them. He's talented in blocking out people he isn't fond of from his mind, as he distracts himself with better, fonder things.

He cares for most people, even if they are total strangers. But the person he most definitely concerns himself the most is his brother. While he has committed despicable acts in the past; actions that forced Siegfried to join the Broken Covenant along with him, he still respects and worries over him. Ragnar is one of the few things he has of his old, tarnished life. While Ragnar tries to distant himself from Siegfried, he still watches over him, praying that there will never be a day where he finds himself victim to a demigod's blade instead.

Perhaps one of his grandest qualities would be how trustworthy and reliable he is. He despises lying and deception as a whole, and disapproves for his brother's actions as such. He can be dense however, especially considering how he remains unaware of how much Ragnar values his respect and tries to capture his attention through the homicides he commits. He's fiercely protective, but he doesn't know everything. He doesn't know about the abandonment Ragnar felt; the mental abuse he received when only Siegfried was acknowledged; and the fear he felt of being forgotten. He is lost and does not know it.

Weapons/Possessions: Dagger (Kardia), Sword

Faction: Civitas Popularis

Reason:

The gods have grown unwise and foolish under their reign. Their unwillingness to cooperate led to deaths of my loved ones, and for that, I can never forgive them. They need to fall, and we demigods and others who have realized the flaws in their rule should use their descent as the stepping stones to our own assembly. But acting reckless and brutish will only lead to being like the gods, however. I acknowledge that, as I've witnessed what only stark resentment can do to a man. The threat of anarchy will also hang over us once we are successful with ambitions. But that is only if we lack democracy. Yes, order and discipline is what we need in order to excel. Idiocy is reserved purely for our enemies.

–Siegfried Thorsen


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Lionel "Lio" Astor -Child of Themis
-Leader of Civitas Popularis/The Politician/Child of LawMaybe for cp222

Welcome to our faction, make yourself at home in the dorms, I generally oversee more of the political stuff around here, my brother James oversees the training, he takes it quite seriously as he was in the military for a number of years. Once you're settled there's various areas you can help in, either as a body guard to me or anyone else from our faction when they need to leave on a mission of some type, with the main fighting group, or we'll also be having some more specialised groups, assassins, spies, that sort, just let me know what you decide



Name: Ragnar Jonah Thorsen

Gender: Male

God Parent: Kakia

Mortal Parent: Gunnar Thorsen (Adopted by grandparents; Gunther Thorsen and Emilia Thorsen)

Appearance: (Currently 18 years old)

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Personality: Ragnar is the utter polar opposite of his brother Siegfried. He's rude, snide, and quick to judge. He's sadistic as well, and has no qualms for harming or even murdering others. He's a sinful bastard that only cares for his own needs and wants. He's a liar, and to some, a coward. He despises defeat almost as much as he disdains admitting it. He's disrespectful and greedily accepts compliments in spite of never giving any. It's easy to please him, due to his crowned vanity, but it's just as difficult to aggravate him. He's a vengeful spirit that will assure that whenever he is messed with, the assailant shall feel the full brunt of his choler and wrath.

He is most certainly a despicable young man that only worries for his personal concern. Or so he claims. Secretly, he has always yearned for the respect and compassion his half-sibling receives. While most would expect Ragnar to loathe Siegfried as much as he detests everyone else in general, he does not. He cannot bring himself to abhor his own brother, for he wants him to view him as an equal. As if the two of them had an impartial relationship. This confuses him, and at times, he wonders how he truly perceives his close yet distant brother. Whether it is hatred, attachment, or nonalignment.

Perhaps one of the most interesting qualities about Ragnar is how hypocritical and reckless he can be. He's intelligent as well as assertive, but sometimes, he acts before he thinks. During his worst times, he becomes under the impression that surpassing Siegfried is an impossibility. And whenever he is like this, he becomes depressed, pitiful, but more violent as well. He finds no joy in homicidal activity, seeing it as a simple distraction to the goals he finds improbable to be ever completed by him. His cowardice and regret compels and controls him more than his ambitions. He is a coward.

Weapons/Possesions: Xiphos (Stauros)

Faction: Liberi Superum

Reason:

There is no other race as ignorant as the gods as the mortals. They are foolish and idiotic, but nevertheless, they are still the major dynamo for the gods' power. But we and the mortals do have something in common. We're pawns to these beings we call gods. We worship them, make sacrifices, and even do ridiculous "quests" for them. If they're as powerful as they claim, why do they need to rely on us? They need to be taught a lesson. The mortals will join our cause, whether it is through force or not, and the gods will be weakened. Everyday, they will loose a supporter, while we will grow stronger. Eventually, we will defeat the gods who have underestimated us. There is no stopping us.

–Ragnar Thorsen


History: Ragnar and Siegfried were born on the same year of the same month, but to two different goddesses. Siegfried's mother, Hecate, met Gunnar after he had one drink too many. He was always known as the wild drunkard of his family, and would usually come back to his home with a staggering drunkenness. After leaving the bar, it was then he had encountered the first of the goddesses he was to encounter. Hecate. He nearly bumped into her, but she moved with the agile speed of a serpent, avoiding him as if she had eyes on the back of her head. Gunnar collapsed to the ground, laughing giddily due to drink. But as he looked up, he was mesmerized by the beauty of the titaness. She regarded him with an amused content, as she brought a hand down to hoist the fallen man up. He grinned madly as he took her wrist, before pulling her towards him. Their lips made contact, and Hecate's eyes shot up in surprise and pleasure. Hecate drove them to his home, for Gunnar was too drunk to drive. Once there, the two had intercourse.

Once it was morning, however, Hecate had disappeared. Leaving nothing, not even a note or a trace of where she had gone. Gunnar was disappointed by this, but as usual, he bottled his sorrow inside with cocktails and beer. Two weeks after his experience with Hecate, Kakia appeared to him at the same bar. She was interested by the man, who had so daringly taken Hecate. She took advantage of his vice of lust, seducing him into having intimacy with her, before she too was gone. As if she nothing but a wisp of his imagination.

Gunnar became more violent after these two moments. He had met two different women during the month of January, and those two women left him, only staying with him for a short time. He became easily agitated, and would often engage himself in fights with the other drunkards. He had a lot of close calls, and would come home bruised, beaten, and tired. As well as lonely. Nine months passed from then, and Gunnar was almost done with his life. He probably would've sent himself to the Underworld was it not for the fact that Siegfried had appeared in his life. He was a little thing, wrapped in a violet blanket with a shimmering bronze bracelet on his arm. Inside the basket he was in, there was also a note. This note was written by Hecate, who claimed the world of Greek gods was a reality, and that the boy in the woven basket was their child; a demigod. Gunnar thought he was losing it of course, but he took Siegfried in willingly. He had a bad reputation already and leaving the boy to an orphanage would only fuel it.

A duration of a week passed, and once again, another child was in a basket. Ragnar, with a sprout of blond hair already erupting form his scalp, gave his father a toothless grin as Gunnar bent down to read yet another note. Only this time it was written by Kakia, telling the same message as Hecate's. For once, Gunnar acknowledged something as too big of a coincidence. Their world was real. The Ancient Greek gods said to only be simple myths were real. He fainted in his bedroom after setting Ragnar with his older brother in their carriage.

Stress constantly came to mind in Gunnar's head, especially now that he knew the truth and questioned everything he believed in. Only a month later, he nearly killed a man who had bothered him constantly in the bar. He had tried to strangle him, and probably would've ended his life, was it not for the fact he was tackled and beaten himself. Gunnar was brought to court, and was sent to confinement for a number of years.

Siegfried and Ragnar ended up in the custody of their elderly grandparents; Gunther and Emilia Thorsen.

They aspired for a better life for their grandchildren, in hopes they wouldn't end up like their violent father. Siegfried was their immediate favorite, however, so they paid more attention to him than they did Ragnar.

Eventually, a couple of years passed, and the duo were now in school. Siegfried became popular due to his overall good nature and attitude, and always helping a troubled person in need. Ragnar, however, took company in the form of the shadows and stood in the sidelines while his brother received praise. He was envious of him, and at the time, wanted nothing but for others to loose interest in him. Unfortunately for Ragnar, this did not happen.

Due to the brothers constantly being together, their first monster attack happened earlier than usual. A Scythian Dracanae infiltrated their school in the guise of a substitute teacher. At the end of the day, she told ten-year-old Siegfried and Ragnar to stay after class, as she claimed she had something to tell the two of them. Confused at what they did, they looked at her questionably once the final bell had rung. And with her pray in front of her, she shed her mist form, and snarled at them with vibrant serpentine eyes.

Ragnar yelped, and in instinct, Siegfried grasped his brother's hand tightly as they attempted to dash out of the room. But the monster was fast, and no matter where they ran, she would always counter them. Finally, she had cornered them, and with a flicker of forked tongue, she tried to claim her meal. Before evaporating into a fountain of dust. A man stood over them now as the golden sand went with the wind. He appeared to be in his middle ages, with a hint of stubble covering his chin. His eyes, although young, seemed ancient in a way, but what was most profound about him was the shimmering blade he held in his hand.

He hoisted the two of them up as they stared at him in amazement. He took the two of them home, but while driving there, he explained who he was and what that monster was as well. He was Viggo Dahl, demigod son of Thanatos, who had actually been working as the vice principal of their school. He had been living a normal life for years now, with minor monster attacks. He had sensed something from Siegfried and Ragnar for a while now, and believed the monster attack had occurred not because of him, but due to the fact that they were both demigods. And on the topic of demigods, he explained about the world of Greek gods and how their world was a reality, and about the monsters that secretly inhabited this world as well. He warned them that the attacks would soon become a common occurrence, and that they should sought out a camp. He said he'd be willing to bring them there when they're ready.

Of course, while the story was a bit out of there, the children had to agree with his claims. They nearly had their life taken, after all. After dropping them home, Viggo left, and a normal life pursued for the brothers. For now that is.

Around a duration of several years, they would be chased by other monsters, although they themselves hardly ever encountered anything. Due to the intervention of Viggo. He had kept a close eye on the brothers, preventing a hellhound from stalking them while they went off to a shop with their grandparents when they were eleven; killing an empousa when she had meant to assassinate them during the night when they were twelve; and having a lycanthrope be ended with a blade of silver when it tried to infiltrate the school when they were thirteen, and so on.

Four years later, when they were fourteen, their grandparents died of old age. Siegfried was in tears during the funeral, while Ragnar just looked down at their corpses with a cold gaze. Viggo arrived as well with a satyr companion, and said they were now under his jurisdiction, having manipulated the mist.

They traveled from airport to airport, killing monsters along the way. They eventually reached New York. Viggo, however, claimed while he did wanted them to join camp, he also wanted to train them as well. And so he did.

He gave Siegfried a dagger, which he called Kardia, the Greek word for heart. Ragnar was given a shimmering blade named Stauros, which meant cross. They sparred and battled and trained, until eventually, they had grown strong under a period of another two years. They were attacked by monsters, of course, but their training had taught them to be swift and strong. Whenever a hellhound appeared, they would act as team, Ragnar weakening the beast, while Siegfried finished it off.

Life was good again for awhile. Until the day Ragnar killed Viggo. Truth be told, he was a former Broken Covenant member that was exiled after killing off a number of his fellow members. Before being struck down, he had shadow-traveled, and hid in fear for years. He thought that by handing down two promising members, he would be pardoned, and might even be allowed to join the Covenant again. Ragnar was always afraid of being betrayed. He had never liked Viggo, and the way he treated them. Although he was unaware of Viggo's plot, he was convinced he meant anything but good for them. He had confronted Viggo about it, and when he said he was just tired, he asked again. This time, Viggo reacted more violently, striking Ragnar with a wicked slap. Rubbing his sore cheek, Ragnar was convinced Viggo was a threat, and for that, he slayed him. He forced a vice of pride on his former father figure, causing him to be dazed, before ending him with the very sword he passed on to him.

Viggo screamed, alerting the satyr, who Ragnar struck down as well during the heat of the moment. He was afraid, as it was the first time he had ever committed murder. When he heard the sound of clopping hooves, he was terrified, and didn't look as the glorious sword took the life of the satyr. He roused Siegfried, and the two fled, and tried searching for camp on their own. It was difficult, as despite being in New York, everything was still unfamiliar to them. It took three weeks for a local satyr to find them, and bring them to camp.

They stayed in camp for a meager period of time. Siegfried, again, was popular while Ragnar just stood behind him once more. He didn't even have a cabin, due to Kakia not having one. It was a lonesome time for him again, as while his brother had friends, he had none. Feeling isolated, Ragnar grew violent and colder, and started fascinating about killing again. Ending Viggo and the satyr had brought him a type of adrenaline, and he wanted to experience it again. He also started losing his faith in the gods as well. As days quickly passed by, he realized something. The gods were, in reality, a fragile existence. They relied on the sacrifices and worship in order to grow strength, and was it not for these components, they would be weak. A true deity, in his opinion, does not need to rely on mortal lives in order to gain strength. They needed them and the mortals in order to keep their resilience, and this gave him another realization. He was just a pawn to them.

Siegfried also grew a similar disdain. His friends, including his Aphrodite child girlfriend Monica, were on a quest together while he stood in the sidelines due to an injury he suffered during an unlucky moment while sparring. He waited patiently for their return, but after several weeks had passed and no word came, he grew worried. He had attempted to Iris message them, but to no avail. Another week passed, and once the word reached his ears, he gazed into the sky furiously. Monica, who had been the leader of the quest, was slaughtered by a rampant pack of lycanthropes during the quest. His other friends ended up with horrid fates as well. He blamed himself for awhile, until he realized the true cause of his companions' demises. The gods. Aphrodite herself had sent her daughter on the quest, and Monica died as a result of it. He had heard a rumor they tried praying to them as well, begging for help when it did not come. This made him furious. He had enough of the gods.

A few days later after the event, Ragnar admitted to Siegfried he had lost his faith for the gods. He explained his reasoning to him, claiming the gods were nothing but a weak race that relied on other beings in order to be considered gloriously powerful. But he was surprised, and a bit relieved as well, when Siegfried agreed the gods were rash. They left camp for two years and managed to support themselves in a small apartment for awhile, although they struggled. Siegfried managed to impress ignorant mortals with his readings with tarot cards, and found a small way of gaining income through this. Ragnar faced more difficulty with a Career, but once the two years passed, a stranger knocked on their door. He was a BC recruiter, who had heard of them thanks to his keen resources. He informed them of the Broken Covenant, and once he was finished, Siegfried and Ragnar agreed to come with him to the Sanctuary.

Comments

Please state the age of their first monster attack. Considering the years he had known and trained himself, wouldn't Viggo be stronger than the Jonah?. There is a crime, but no criminal. ★❣Broken❣★Jap32

Their age during their first monster attack was actually already stated in their history: "At the end of the day, she told eleven-year-old Siegfried and Ragnar to stay after class, as she claimed she had something to tell the two of them."

Also, I added in their history that Ragnar used his powers in order to make Viggo vulnerable and dazed. "What an artist the world is losing in me." -Hybrid 07:07, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

11 isn't "earlier than normal" we typically expect the first monster attack to happen any time between 11 and 13, with 14 stretching it. Then, being there is two of them, going a full three years without another attack is unlikely. As the Thanatos guy shows up again when their grandmother dies, I'm assuming he wasn't training and helping throughout those 3 years already. Though I don't really understand why you wouldn't have already been using him to help fill the gap of 3 years. You could toss in a couple of attacks those three years with the Thanatos guy working for the school he would have easy access to have already been training and helping the boys.

Also, your years in the story aren't adding up to the age you claim he is currently. You say they were 11 when the first attack happened, then put 3 years later the grandmother died which would make them 14, then that they trained with that Thanatos guy for 3 years and then the whole thing happened when the truth came out which would make them 17, Then you put that they stayed at camp for 3 years which would make them 20. However there's also the small issue of, you can't claim the characters were at camp within any time in the last two years. You have to go back more than two years, in order to make up events like this, because obviously these events didn't really just happen at camp, because it would have had to have been campers on the wiki currently. You see this wiki is like one giant game, so by claiming your characters were at camp all this time, you're saying events happened that never really happened, which isn't allowed, so you have to go back far enough so that you don't run into as many continuity issues, which a period of two years does.

Also, as far as Siegfried's convictions to join, I feel rather apprehensive that he has any true convictions at all for anything with the BC as he appears to just be doing what Ragnar was rather forcibly pushing on him, and as far as Ragnar's reasons well I mean, just having a god parent with no official cabin seems like a weak reason to be that upset, upset enough to join the BC. He also was the one that uncovered Viggo's plot, which should have given him just as much reason not to trust the BC. Also I don't understand why he would have instantly killed the satyr just because the satyr came to see what was going on.

Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach D7d8 doctor who new sonic screwdriver

I've revised it. Hopefully, I have addressed the issues you've stated but if more have popped up as a result of this revision, I will gladly address whatever I must do to fix it again. Thanks for the helpful feedback. "What an artist the world is losing in me." -Hybrid 06:44, December 7, 2013 (UTC)

I'll try to make time to look over this later today, I have to catch up on emails and do some homework first though, if I don't check this again by like Monday or Tuesday with more notes or an approval, please remind me >.< life gets hectic and I forget easily >.<

Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach D7d8 doctor who new sonic screwdriver

Ok the only thing I see, is that it still seems that you are insinuating they have spent time at camp sometime in the last two years, but maybe I'm reading it wrong.

Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach D7d8 doctor who new sonic screwdriver

Wait, I thought two years was all right as long as it doesn't go pass that scale? "What an artist the world is losing in me." -Hybrid 18:57, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

no they can't be at camp any time in the previous two years, otherwise you run into continuity issues. Think of it like playing a game, and you're trying to say they've been playing longer than they really have, so you have to go back far enough to where either most chars and/or users aren't around any more anyway, or prior to the wikis creation.

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Heinrich Alten ~ Leader of the Broken Covenant
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Welcome to the BC, the leaders of the factions you guys wish to join will speak to you now about giving you permission to join their factions
Character's Bio


 Age: ???  Height: ???  Weight: ???
 Sexuality: ???  Relationship Status: N/A
  Main Weapon: His weapons are unknown while his attire is a white hooded robe, and a set of black and gold armor complimented by a full-face mask.

 – “???”

Character's Powers

 Powers of a Child of Hebe:

  1. Children of Hebe have the ability to force the effects of age upon a person for a short time; making them feel pain and cause their movements to be slow and sedated.
  2. Children of Hebe can become temporarily changed during battle and become even stronger and quicker in combat than they were before, for a short time.
  3. Children of Hebe can become resistant to all types of physical attacks for a short time.
  4. Children of Hebe can cause an opponent to feel aching bones and muscles for a short time.
  5. Children of Hebe are innately stronger and faster due to their slow aging.
  6. Children of Hebe have an innately faster rate of healing than other people.
  7. Children of Hebe always have an unlimited supply of Ambrosia, even if none is on them at the time, they can create it out of nothing
  8. Children of Hebe can restore energy to a weakened person and heal some minor wounds.
  9. Children of Hebe are able to curse someone with being very young children again, this has the potential to cause the victim a feeling of being lost, helpless and often leading to fits of crying, this only lasts for a short time and drains the user considerably.
  10. Children of Hebe have the ability to strike someone with a curse of old age for a short time; however, the person will not only feel old, they will become old and be unable to fight or even defend themselves, this also drains the user for a considerable time while using the power
  11. Children of Hebe can bless water to have the effects of allowing whomever drinks it to feel young again for a short time, their appearance may also take on a more youthful appearance for as long as the effects last.
  12. These children age slower than normally, beginning around the age of 12, and retain a youthful appearance far longer than most.

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OOC I approved the one for Civitas, but you need either User:Zer0TheNinja or User:Bctcz to approve the one for Liberi.

Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach D7d8 doctor who new sonic screwdriver


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Vexuvius Lerkelashvor -Child of Kratos
-Leader of the Liberi Seperum

 – 20:21, December 23, 2013 (UTC)

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