Claiming:Broken Covenant/Violet Smith-Accepted

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Name: Violet Smith

Age: (Should be 115) is actually 15

Gender: Female

Species: Demigod

God Parent: Kronos

Mortal Parent: Lily Smith

Appearance: She has really short red hair. She also has vibrant green eyes. You can usually find her wearing some kind of green clothing, jewelry, or anything like that. She generally wears short sleeved t-shirts and jeans, and on a rare occasion, a skirt.

Personality: Since she has been stuck in the Lotus Casino for two hundred years, she is generally just awestruck and confused in the modern world. She is usually really peppy, and hyper. When she sees something she has no idea what it is, like a blender, she becomes like a four-year-old and is awestruck and amazed at it. She is prone to mood swings, though, so she could be hyper and peppy, and then a downer and lazy.

History: In 1834, Lily Smith was a slave. Her owner was cruel and didn't let her have breaks or lots of luxuries, like a proper bed. One day, a man came and bought Lily. He was kind and didn't beat her and let her have what she wanted. Then, her master set her free. He left her alone on the streets, and when night fell, a man came to her. He took her away to his house. She stayed there for several years. A few years after the man took Lily in, Violet was born. The man then told Lily that he was really the titan Kronos, and that he was only possessing a body that he found. Lily then was humbled and asked why he chose to be with her, when he had the titanessess? He then replied that she was more beautiful than any of them and that she seemed to have a pull that drew her to him.

A few months after Violet was born, her mother then ran away from Kronos. A few days after she ran away, she was captured and made a slave again. Her mother was forced to work in the fields at her new masters' house, while Violet worked in the kitchen. When Violet was six, her mother was sold to a different family than her current masters. Right before her mother was taken away, she told Violet that she was a daughter of Kronos. Her master then took her to Nevada when the gold rush spiked. There, she ran away and found the Lotus Casino. She stayed there until a man came and took her out. Looking back on the memory, the man looked like Kronos. She was taken out in the mid-1930's and then, was living in various places all over the country, foster homes that the U.S put her in, and then came back to Las Vegas, where she ran into the casino again. By this time, she was about 13.

This time, she escaped by her own will. She was tired of the games and the stuff in the casino and wanted out. So, she snuck out one night after discovering that the Lotus flowers were drugged. She was chased out of the casino and then she walked the streets of Las Vegas, for a few days, and there she ran into her first monster, an empousi. A demigod nearby visiting family killed the monster and took her to camp. She was there for a few days and wasn't claimed. While she was there, she had a Hephaestus kid forge her a CB scythe, which she named φορά, or Time. She was walking around camp and found that lots of the kids did have weapons, while she didn't. So she went to the forges and asked to have her CB scythe forged.

Since most were claimed when they arrived, she felt abandoned and forgotten. So she left. She had heard about some demigods that felt the same way towards their parents while she was walking around camp. So she followed them to the BC. When she decided to follow them, she didn't think things through very much. As soon a she came to her first road, she was almost ran over by a car. Thankfully, one of the people walking by grabbed her and then pulled her to saftey. The person then asked her why she would be so stupid as to walk by a road without looking both ways. She then replied that she wasn't stupid but was new to this world. The person then asked her where she was from and she said, a long, long, time ago. (in a galaxy far, far, away XD) The person then gave her a quick survival guide pep talk thing to help her survive. Little did she know, that person was Kronos. He then pointed in the direction the BC was and left. She followed the strange man's directions, and came across the BC.

Weapons: She prefers to use a CB scythe, but does pretty good with a sword or daggers.

Why she wants to join: She feels abandoned by Kronos, as he never claimed her or even acknowledged her. (or so she thinks. *Evil laugh*)

Faction She Would Like To Join: Veritum Unitum

Why Should She Join That One: She feels angry that the gods let her mother be taken away, and feels that the gods are heartless rulers who should be overthrown. She also believes that we serve under the oppression of the gods, that we should be our own rulers and not be forced to do things for our parents/the gods.

BookloverNow1 (talk) 01:54, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

• Considering how Kronos is stuck in Tartarus I don't know if he could have a child..

• She escaped? what was she doing when she escaped? you are fully aware demigods on the street get attack much faster right?

• i don't know if its possible to get out of the lotus casino on your own (however so you may argue your points)

• what was her first monster?

• how did she get her weapon??

that's all the problem I see hope to see you soon

Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 09:53, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

SO, i looked and fixed most of your questions, but to answer some of you questions, Kronos was really in Tartarus, and he was possessing a body. Also, it is possible to get out of the LC, as Percy and friends did. all you have to do is not eat the lotus flowers. BookloverNow1 (talk) 00:53, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

Checked, as per the claimant's request

• Chronos /can/ have a child, as the claim is set before the PJO series of books wherein Chronos is permanently scattered through Tartarus, however you do need to explain how he ended up on earth and why Chronos would choose to sleep with a slave. 
• How did Violet grow up? Was she made to work in the fields or in the house? Did she know her father's parentage? How did Lily manage to escape the plantation with such a young daughter? (You could use Harriet Tubman here, as she's a daughter of Hermes in universe.)  
• Who took her out of the Lotus Casino originally? 
• Did she have an awareness of time while there? If she could escape by choosing to, how did she? Remember that the Casino is extremely difficult to leave as time does pass at a completely different rate, and Percy etc were chased down by Lotus Eaters when escaping. 
• How did Violet explicitly hear about the Broken Covenant and how did she get there? How did she find the Hephaestus kid who made her weapon? 
• How does a couple of centuries old demi-god manage to survive in a different time, with cars and various other technologies? I'd advise you to put a little but more detail on how she managed to find her way to the Covenant. 
• Why does she choose Veritum in particular? Her reasons seem extremely vague.

You know you love me, XOXO gossip girl  ~Alex 

in answer to some of your questions, a mysterious man came and took her out of the LC. she also did not have an awareness of the time, and i changed it to where she was chased out of the LC. She also heard about the BC by overhearing some other people going to the BC, and she got there by following them to it. 

(this is really a note to myself) 

I did the first one, and the the second one. along with the third one, fourth, and fith ones. and sixth one. BookloverNow1 (talk) 21:57, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Almost there, just a few things left to fix

• Parents can only stay with titans/gods for a very short amount of time. at most, maybe under a year if EXTREMELY WELL EXPLAINED. Being with a titan for many years is definitely not allowed, please fix this
• nitpicky but, did she run away because she thought he was crazy? or why did she run away?
• violet didn't work as a baby right? please clarify
• How did she get to the lotus hotel; i.e. did someone tell her the location, did she come across it, please clarify
• As a subpoint to the one above, violet was the one to get to the hotel right? TBH if she was like 6, there is no way she would get there. I mean, she is six. It isnt realistic
• Was the person who took her out kronos?
• empousi is too strong for only two demigods. Please choose a light monster from here.
• the last instance of kronos would be impossible because he was very much sent back to tartarus, so could you perhaps change this?

all i see right now, hope to see you back

  is coming back for you~ 19:16, February 21, 2016 (UTC)