Claiming:Camp/Alice K. LaBlanc

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Name: Alice Katrina LaBlanc

Gender: Female

God Parent: Apollo, Aphrodite, Athena

Mortal Parent: Miranda LaBlanc

Appearance: 

Alice has an oval face with high cheekbones, a wealth of red wavy hair, and almond-shaped, yellowish brown eyes with dark thick lashes. She is 5 feet 6 inch tall, weighing 130 pounds. 

Personality:

Alice is a conflicted fourteen-year-old girl.

She is a seemingly indifferent loner. However, deep down in her heart, she's actually very sympathetic and generous. She feels insecure most of the time but she often acts like she doesn't care. She uses to play tough that she seldom cries in front of the others despite how sad she is. She has big issues with trusting people. That's why she doesn't make friends with others easily. Sometimes, she happens to be too ambitious that she doesn't mind hurting the others as long as she gets her job done. However, at the same time, she's willing to do everything for the ones she cares about, even risking her life. Alice is determined, smart and independent. She's also a good fighter. She likes singing and listening to music.

History:

Miranda LaBlanc was a working-to-be singer and songwriter when she met Apollo at an audition room. Apollo was attracted by Miranda's voice and they later fell in love for each other, giving birth to Alice LaBlanc.

Alice LaBlanc was born in Manhattan. 

At the age of three, Alice and her mom got into a car crash. Miranda died from extreme blood loss, while Alice survived in a miracle. Therefore, Alice only has vague memory about her mom.

Alice was sent to a foster home. Although she didn't have parents to look after her like the kids at the foster home, she had never complained a word. She always wore a smile like sunshine. She got along with other kids at the foster home well. 

Alice was five years old when she was adopted by a wealthy couple, Jane and Joseph, who treated her very well. They cared about her a lot like she was their own. That was the most blissful and the happiest time Alice had ever had. She also had a lot of friends at school because of her sociable and friendly nature.

However, everything went bad when she was thirteen years old - when she encountered her first monster in her life - an Empousai. It turned out that one of her closest friend Kara was an Empousai who attempted to kill her.

One day when she was going home from school with her friends, she accidentally crashed into a moving bicycle that was out of control. She fell onto the ground, believing that her hands may have been wounded because of the pain. But when she got up, the pain was gone and there wasn't a single sign of blood or wound on her hands. Feeling lucky, she didn't pay much attention to it, but this was spotted by Kara. Similar incidents had also happened days later when she thought that she got hurt after bumping into something, tripping or poked by a needle accidentally, there wasn't any wound on her body.

When Alice invited Kara alone to her house, Kara revealed her true identity and attacked Alice. Jane and Joseph who just happened to arrive at home were killed when they tried to get Alice out(because of the Mist, they saw Kara as a girl who was holding a knife, threatening their adopter daughter). Without truly understanding what had just happened, Alice had no choice but went on a run to escape from the monster. The police who got a call from a neighbor and just arrived, brought Alice some time to escape.

As Alice was wounded in the attack, she couldn't help but pass out at the back of a street.She was almost killed by a Cyclops until a boy and a girl appeared and took care of it. They were Oliver, son of Hermes, and Regina, who had no idea of who her god parent was. Both of them were two years elder than Alice. They were searching for a place called Camp Half Blood, which they learned from a satyr who told them about the monsters stuffs, lent them Celestial Bronze weapons but died to save them before giving them the concrete address. That's when she learned about the world of demigods. Oliver taught her to defend monsters with dagger. Oliver and Regina were the only ones whom she could rely on at that time.

The trio almost made it to Camp Half Blood after they met a satyr on the run. However, on the half-way to Half Blood Hill, Kara appeared again with another Empousai. Alice crossed the border just in time, but Oliver was killed by Kara before he could enter the camp while Regina was still fighting against the other Empousai. At rage, Alice ran out from the camp, picked up Oliver's dagger and fought against the Kara. Although she killed Kara at last, it didn't save Regina from losing in the fight. She tried to help but she was severely hurt that she fell into a coma, which lasted for three days because of a head trauma. She later found out that it was some campers who got her across the border and slaughtered the other Empousai but Regina couldn't make it through.

Fourteen-year-old Alice was claimed by Apollo during her first dinner at Camp Half Blood. Having nowhere else to go, she's now a year-rounder at Camp Half Blood. After the series of unfortunate events, she became a seemingly indifferent loner who doesn't trust anyone but herself, though the happy optimistic girl is still somewhere behind her tough mask.

Weapons: Celestial Bronze dagger. Celestial Bronze sword.

--ChocoKat (talk) 16:01, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

--ChocoKat (talk) 15:55, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

okay kampe is a unique monster, i'd suggest changing that to an empousai. why would she kill her foster parents? and how did oliver and regina learn how to fight?

File:2227111-miles super.jpg I'd rather be web slinging -Hydro 15:46, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

oh and pls sign this with 4 (~)'s File:2227111-miles super.jpg I'd rather be web slinging -Hydro 15:48, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

edited. oliver and regina learnt it from past experience.--ChocoKat (talk) 16:07, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

from what past experience? where did they get celestial bronze weapons to slay monsters? and how did an empousai attack start a fire? and i'm pretty sure the police would be less likely to accuse a 12 year old girl of arson File:2227111-miles super.jpg I'd rather be web slinging -Hydro 00:34, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Edited. From the past experience of running away from monsters. The satyr who died lent the weapons to them. The fire part did sound weird. So,m I changed it.--ChocoKat (talk) 02:50, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

okay how exactly did she survive on her own? >.< and btw if they still lacked proper CHB training, they still wouldn't be all that great and how would they even know their godparents? File:2227111-miles super.jpg I'd rather be web slinging -Hydro 02:53, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

You mean like on the run or the first attack?--ChocoKat (talk) 02:57, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

yeah on the run, but it would make sense if she got a few injuries from the first attack File:2227111-miles super.jpg I'd rather be web slinging -Hydro 03:00, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

All right, I'll make some edits on that. For the god parents part, I rewrote it as Oliver learnt from his mum, while Regina had no idea who her god parent was.--ChocoKat (talk) 03:03, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Edited.--ChocoKat (talk) 03:42, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

If Kara is the one who is betraying Alice, Why is it Alice who has invited Kara to be alone at her house instead of the other way around?

"No wind is of service to him that is bound for nowhere."  -Wind   

Alice didn't know about that at that time when she invited her. Kara took the chance and started the attack.--ChocoKat (talk) 04:30, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Okay. You might want to include some accidental display of her Apollo related powers shortly before Kara's attack as monsters usually attack once they've seen demigods exhibit their powers in some way.

"No wind is of service to him that is bound for nowhere."  -Wind   

edited.--ChocoKat (talk) 05:19, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

It seems a little odd to me that Oliver would have enough knowledge and experience to know who his god parent is whereas Regina does not yet they both appear to be on equal ground when it comes to their fighting experience and ability.

"No wind is of service to him that is bound for nowhere."  -Wind   

They basically know similar things except that Oliver's mom told him about his father. If this really bothers, I can edit it out.--ChocoKat (talk) 05:34, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

No that's fine that makes sense. All that's left is I would suggest just cleaning the claim up a little bit and fixing the grammar and then you should be good to go.

Windsword7Let The Battle Begin 05:38, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Edited.--ChocoKat (talk) 06:20, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Where and how was she wounded to have caused a 3-day coma? What age was she when she arrived at Camp? Take your time. I've got forever to wait -Demi ღ

Revised. She got a head trauma and she was 13 years old when she arrived.--ChocoKat (talk) 11:38, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

In the history, it says she arrived at Camp at thirteen, yet her current age, according to the personality, is fifteen. So... which is it? Thirteen or fifteen? Take your time. I've got forever to wait -Demi ღ

Ooops, I misunderstood something. I'll make some edits on it.

Done editing--ChocoKat (talk) 12:45, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

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Well, it looks alright to me. Kindly add in her name to the cabin list and her picture to the photo album once the page has been made. Thank you.

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