Name:Ashlynn "Ash" Aurora Gray
God Parent:Athena, Aphrodite, or Persephone
Mortal Parent:Noah Gray
Ash has dark brown hair up to two inches below her shoulder. She only wears it up when she is training, and she always wears it down and free. She has misty gray eyes that are under thin brown eyebrows. Ash has rosy cheeks and nice, smooth olive skin. Her height is average for her age.
Personality:Ash is diligent and pours hours working on whatever project she needs to get done. She tends to be more booksmart than streetsmart, sometimes coming across as socially awkward, but she's still a solid friend eager to help another solve their problems. She is also quite modest and avoids showing off, but she loves praise. She loves to read and write all day. She is also a very skilled fighter.
History: Prof. Noah Gray was a mythology professor at the university near the place he lived. One day, while Noah was researching through some scrolls, a beautiful woman knocked on his door to ask him a question about the Greeks. While they discussed the Ancient Greeks, Noah fell in love with her. Ash was born on the sixteenth of April from Athena's head. Soon after she was born, her mother left her with her father, Prof. Noah Gray, in Providence, Rhode Island, and then went back to Olympus. But before she left she told him who she really was, Athena. Noah took care of Ash with all his love, he hardly let her leave the house, and homeschooled her until sixth grade. He never told her about her mother, only to say she was smart, kind and loved Ash with all her heart. But on her first day at school, Ash met her first monster. Her teacher was a cyclops! Clover, her awkward satyr, but only friend, was holding him off when he attacked during recess, while Ash hid behind a bush. While she was there, Clover quickly gave her a locket. He told Ash the truth, then gave her a locket and told her that it was her protection, to always wear it. Then he went on defending her. Ash opened the locket, and it transformed into a shield and a sword. She defeated the cyclops, then confronted Clover about her mother again. He told her that now she knows, more monsters will come after her. So Ash turned and ran home. She told her father, who tried to explain why. But she didn't listen. She packed her things, and left. She sought out Clover, who was still at the school, to tell her what she needed to do. He told her that while she was at her house, he arranged a flight for her to Long Island the next day. So, for the night they booked a room at a motel near the airport. Clover told Ash all about Camp Half-blood, and the gods. In the morning, before they were to set out, the owner of the motel came to their room to say goodbye. Suddenly, he transformed into a Drakon, and attacked Clover and Ash. They fought the Drakon, but they were no match for it. Clover quickly thought of a way for Ash to escape. He was going to sacrifice himself. Ash was reluctant, but soon let him sacrifice himself for her. Before he sacrificed himself, though, he told Ash how to get to the camp, and to always stay alert for monsters. Ash escaped safely, took the plane to Long Island, and arrived at the camp a day later. Ash calls it her home. She has been there a year now, and she enjoys it there.
Weapons:Cleophas, her locket that when is opened, turns into a Celestial Bronze sword and shield.
Gods aren't allowed to have physical contact with their children, and how old was she when she reached camp?
Sorry but that's model is already being used by Shiloh. Please change it
17:27, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
This history does not give any explanation whatsoever as to how Ashlynn's mortal and god parent met each other.
A cyclops wouldn't have attacked her when she was in 3rd grade. It wouldn't attack until she had revealed some semblance of her powers which doesn't occur until around the age of 12. And even if it had, the Cyclops would have found and killer her in an instant.
Okay two things. How would her best friend possibly know how to fend off a cyclops or even see it? And why would she have to wander around the Southwest for a year fighting monsters? Why didn't her father just get her a ticket to New York?
How come she managed to easily defeat all the monsters if she hadn't been trained? And is that image you're using Morgana from the TV series Merlin? She's kinda recognisable, I'm going to put her up for voting.
I understand her father doesn't know about the camp, but it's clear he at least knew about the existence of the gods since Athena revealed herself to him so why did Ashlynn feel like she needed to deceiver her father instead of just telling him about the camp?
Yeah sorry I was thinking of a different person's claim. But anyways, I don't understand why she has to be wandering around for a year. Why wouldn't the Satyr just show her the way?
It is very highly unlikely that Clover would be wandering around for a year and Clover would never have found her to actually guide her to camp.
But once she gathered some sense she'd have to realize that she couldn't find camp without someone who knew where it was. And in any case, Clover would be able to sniff her out.
Yeah, she received help from demigods she met on the way. And Clover gave up on her and believed that she probably died so he went back to the Camp. --Theawesomeperson202 (talk) 15:09, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
If she received help then why would she be wandering around for a whole year?
What happened to the satyr, why didn't he take her to camp immediately, or follow her once she left? --18:32, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
Well, she didn't want him to take her there so she left him at the school the day the monster attacked. And she told him not to follow her, so Clover gave up on her believing in like a week she would be killed by a monster. He went back to camp. --Theawesomeperson202 (talk) 18:38, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
A satyr wouldn't leave a demigod if they thought it meant that they would die. Their job is to protect and bring the demigod to camp, even if it means loosing their life. --18:43, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
How was the locket able to provide protection?
What monster is it exactly that kills Clover? I really think you should get rid of this year long journey. It's pretty much the main reason why this claim hasn't been approved yet.
Just have Clove arrange a flight to Long Island and have Clove be killed some point before they get there.
Okay so now you need to add in a little part where Clover tells her exactly how to get there before he dies. Otherwise she'd just be wandering around Long Island.
Drakons.. are very hard to fight, defeat no less. So she and the satyr wouldn't have been able to defeat it that easily.
Just change it so that Clover sacrifices himself for Ash to escape from the Dracon but they don't actually defeat it.