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Name: Asyline Opheria Hayes

Age: 17

Gender: Do you want to check? Of course she's a female.

God Parent:

1. Poseidon (Although the story and the picture will make sense a little more.

2. Apollo

3. Thanatos

Mortal Parent: The lovely and beautiful Ashlynn Hayes

Appearance: At the right :3

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Asyline Opheria Hayes

Personality: Okay! *takes a deep breath and ties a cloth around my forehead* LETS DO DIS!!!!!!

Asyline is a girl with a shy and introverted person. She is very courageous, courteous and, at times, rebellious. She is very trustworthy and loyal. She is also very stubborn and hot tempered. She is very nervous around boys and will blush a lot. She tends to keep her head down whenever she is outside camp because of her bright sea green eyes so she will tend to be very insecure. She is very witty and sarcastic when you manage to break her shell and be a little more cozy around her. She is normally seen with her half siblings, why? Because they simply understands her more than usual campers. She also have arguments with the Ares and Aphrodite's campers because what they normally do really does infuriates her.


History:

Young Ashlynn Hayes was a very adventurous and an extrovert girl. She was also very rebellious which explains how Asyline gained her rebellious streak. Rules never seemed to have pushed her down as she had always seemed to find a loophole around it. She was so outgoing and fun-loving that sometimes people wonder if Asyline really is her daughter. She had always managed to sneak off in the nights into the big and vast forests that seemed to hold a never ending interest in the little five year old. But the only place that holds dear memories to the little brown-haired girl is the beach, oceans or lakes.

Whenever she is near the water bodies, she would always spot fishes sort of bowing down at her but she would always dismissed them as a sugar rush attack in her brain from the many juice box that she drinks. As she began to grow older, she finally found her job and interest in studying the many types and mysteries of the marine animals in the big blue ocean. When she was 25, she finally had a degree in biology, learnt how to swim and scuba dived, got master degrees in biology and finally had a job in one of the top aspiring biology labs in Manhattan. She cares deeply for the ocean and that's how she managed to catch the attention of the sea god(s).

One bright and blue day, 27-year-old Ashlynn Hayes was out in the ocean, trying to figure out how stonefish managed to produce poison glands on top of their skin when she spotted a poor little turtle stuck in a fishing net. Ashlynn had growled at the fishermen whom were ignoring the turtle and she had gotten away from her research and freed the little marine turtle away. This caught the attention of (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) and immediately it was love in first sight as the god(s) drank in the beautiful appearance of Ashlynn. Not only that, her kindness and true love and care for the ocean made then/him love her even more.

But sadly, Ashlynn was already engaged to a handsome but cheating and conniving young man named Steven Willson. But still, that didn't stopped (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) from getting to know her so he disguised as a new marine biologist named John Zickerberg that just came back from New Zealand and Ashlynn was his new teacher for showing the god the ropes in the lab. She managed to crack jokes with the god and became good friends with him. By the second month, All the female scientists were infatuated with (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) but Ashlynn was still blinded by her love for her fiancé.

Soon enough, Ashlynn caught Steven making out with a prostitute in bed and Ashlynn was heartbroken. She immediately walked to the ocean and began to shout, scream and cried out to the ocean about why she had chosen a bad man for a fiancé. Soon, (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) heard her cries and gently comforted her. She sought comfort in the man's arms as Ashlynn became dangerously drunk with the bottle of beer she had brought to the beach. Poseidon couldn't take the urge and desire so, in her state of unconsciousness, had done 'it' with her.

2 months later, Ashlynn finally found out that she was pregnant with a baby in her womb so she tried to kill it, thinking it was Steven's baby as she caught him cheating on her behind her back so it will feel like a burden carrying his child. (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) had secretely stopped her from doing it, knowing that it was his child and his own flesh and 'blood'. He has shown her the pros about raising the child and how proud you'll be when he/she had done something great. Ashlynn finally stopped although she still have bad feelings about it, (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) finally thought it was time to show everything to the young woman and, although Ashlynn was a bit unconvinced at first, she finally was convinced and 7 months later, she given birth to a beautiful young baby girl called Asyline Hayes and that didn't have brown eyes but beautiful sea green eyes that were similar to the man that Ashlynn called her loved one.

(Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) was overjoyed at this fact and the fact that he had a child with one of his most beloved lover but Zeus eventually found out and (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos)was forced to go back to his home on Olympus. But before that day came, the god had given one of his favourite child a hair pin that can turn into a bow at will. Before the night that he will disappear back to Olympus, he asked Ashlynn what her wish was and the 30 year old said. "I have a loving husband and a beautiful little girl. What more could I want? Although, it has always been my dream to go to Australia and take a dive in the deep blue seas."

The next morning, Ashlynn woke up and found that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) wasn't beside her and there were two strips of paper that had appeared on the nightside table that were a trip to Australia. After the trip to Australia, Asyline and Ashlynn were living a happy life. But then Ashlynn was forced to consider about sending her to the camp that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) had told her about before disappearing in the middle of the night. Because of Ashlynn's gift of looking through the mist and she saw some monsters near Asyline when she was eight.

When she was five, she was swimming in the swimming complex when she went underwater and stayed there for around 10-15 minutes underwater. The kids around her had shouted for their parents for help when she didn't resurface but when she came up form the later a few minutes later, she looked her usual self although with a very confused face expression. The parents were all busily talking with one another to notice Asyline in the water, except for Ashlynn whom was wearig a very nervous expression.

Later, Asyline and Ashlynn went to the local aquarium but when all the fishes swam over to her, Asyline had conversed with the little fishes and the people surrounding her was thinking that she is crazy but dismissed it as being the wide imagination of a six year old but Ashlynn thought other wise. When they had exited the aquarium, Asyline had told her mother, "Mummy......That little fishy just now told me that he was very proud to meet the king's daughter.' That had shocked Ashlynn to the core and together they brought her home. One day, when Asyline was seven years old, she had made the sink exploded because somebody had taunted her that her mother was a w*ore and that she was pregnant with a bast*rd child.

And when Asyline was 8 years old, she was in the at ground, playing with other kids when a tall man in a trench coat walked over to her and talked to her. He said that she was very pretty and would liked a lollipop. Asyline almost accepted it but she had a managed to see only one eye under the man's head. Ashlynn had found out about this and brought her to another playground to play in. Who knew that it was a cyclops that was spying on Asyline so that Poseidon knows what is happening to her.

After that incident, her mother and her had been going school after school and moving state after state to get rid of the monsters, although Asyline was curious at the sudden moves after only 2-3 months in school, she never said anything due to the fact that she trusts her mother with all her life. Because of Ashlynn's gift of looking through the mist and she saw some monsters near Asyline when she 13.

But the monsters kept on coming in, when Asyline was 9, she was playing in the water when suddenly, a Fire Breathing Horse appeared. She hadn't noticed the monster so she continued playing in the water until suddenly she felt something hot on her neck. She turned around and she screamed at the sight of the monster. People thought she was crazy when she started screaming at the 'innocent pony' so they ignore her.

The horse kept walking over to her and she had gone deeper and further under water. The horse, angered, ran to Asyline and was about to burnt her alive when Asyline unintentionally made a water ball and threw at the Fire Breathing Horse, making it weakened. She grabbed one of her arrows and stabbed it in the stomach, making it explode to dust. Ashlynn found out about it and moved again to another state.

When Asyline was 10, she and Ashlynn were taking a makeshift safari tour in one of the safari place but when Asyline was near a Dark creek, a big, black scorpion appeared. She was wide eyes and her hands touched her hairpin easily, her mum taught her how to use it due to the many monster attacks.

Ashlynn finally saw what she was staring at and her eyes widened too, she told Asyline not to move at all but Asyline was rebellious so she made the hair clip into a bow and dodged away from the Scorpion's attack with it's tail, she growled and strung the bow and shot it in the stomach, which died because the metal tip is made of celestial bronze. Ashlynn thought again that it was time to move.

When Asyline was 11,she was out swimming in the ocean to collect some plants for Ashlynn when she a dog headed animal. Asyline tried to swim away but the Telekhine grabbed her leg and pulled her towards it. She struggled in the water but was surprised to see that she could breath in water but she was too careless and left her hairpin at home. She took one of her arrows and stabbed it in the telkhine's stomach. The monster turned into dust as she walked out of the water with the plant in her hand, what's surprising too is that her clothes isn't wet.

Throughout the next six years, she had attended more than 15 schools and lived in more than twenty states. But the monster kept coming in so when they settled in Manhattan again, the monsters stopped coming because Asyline had became more experienced in fighting the monsters and driving them away.

One day when Asyline was 17, she had gone out of the house and immediately a hellhound pounced on her, knocking her down. She had struggled under the big demon as she had used a big stick and whacked it and it let her go after being confused for a while but immediately recovered from it's shock. She looked around for a weapon but the hellhound grabbed her legs and pulled her under him. Asyline rolled away and her hairpin that, her mother told her to keep it in her hair always,rolled out and it turned into a bow, Asyline's eyes widened as she remembered her mother teaching her how to use a bow and shoot it at anybody whom is not a human being. She hesitantly grabbed it and the hellhound came towards her.

She missed a few times but finally shot the hellhound's head just in time before she got mauled to death. Ashlynn finally knew what had happened so she finally made a decision, Asyline would go to camp and stay there until she is old enough to fight. Ashlynn was walking in the woods, trying to fin Asyline's hairpin that was missing in the woods when she saw Colin Reeves,the satyr, that was protecting them from the monster that was trying to kill Asyline.

Along the way, they had encountered another monster called a harpy. She was angry at all children of Poseidon because all of the haypies thought that Percy had kidnapped Ella. So she had disguised as a cashier and Asyline was in the store to buy some food but then the harpy appeared and attacked her.

Asyline yelped and was shocked but she managed to dodged back and her hairpin and became the bow again. She growled as she was so sick of monsters, she perfectly dodged all of the fury's attacks and finally killed it with an arrow on it's eye.

The monster was killed but the satyr was gravely injured in the process because she had scratched him, thinking it would distract Asyline. But he managed to bring Asyline safely in the borders of Camp Half Blood at the age of sixteen. One day, when Asyline was going for archery practice, she saw a Poseidon camper being bullied by an Ares kid, she had feel her justice side shown and immediately, a big sphere had appeared around the Ares Camper. After putting him down, Asyline was claimed as a (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos) child.

Weapons: A bow that is a hairpin with seaweed and coral in it's neutral state.

(I think went a little too overboard with the history.......A fricken ten paragraphs story XD)

The-Mysical (talk) 13:08, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Edited!

The-Mysical (talk) 03:06, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

okay so XD here are le mistakes:

  • Add Your Siggy Or 4~'s
    • If You want a siggy, you could either ask someone to help make it for you or request one here: Custom Signatures
  • Please Change Pontus and Thalassa and pick camp gods. >~< They have no cabins.
    • Look Under Camp Gods Or just go on the main page of the wikia and when ya see the tabbers click "Cabins" and it will lead you to the cabin list c:.
  • Why would she kill the baby? I mean, why if it was Stevans?
  • The Godparent would have to leave at least when she's born. But they cant have contact at all. Asyline wouldn't know him at ALL. No touching eachother, seeing eachother, etc, etc.
    • But you could leave the wish thing and the dagger thing 
  • when did her father give her a knife O.o
  • Write Her Current Age On The Top Of The Claim Please
  • Can you at least explain the hellhound attack a bit more? Like did she slide under it, did she throw a ball at it and then dig the knife into it's shoulderblades causing it to die.

Not A Bad Claim Actually.

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Edited! The-Mysical (talk) 14:04, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Can you explain some of those attacks? Also I she cant spend that long at camp. The way the claim sounds she sounds 13. You would need more attacks 1. Explain her childhood please. Also, why would her mother make her go at 18? Because doesn't she care for her daughter's life?

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Edited!......Again! The-Mysical (talk) 23:16, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Ok so first of all you monsters wouldnt attack Asyine so young even if she is one of the big three. Also there are arge age gaps 4 to 6 to 9, please fix that. Hellhounds can wiegh as much as a car so "rolling out under it" wouldnt work. How would Asyline know to use her hairpen as a weapon if her mother didnt tell her that. Include more information on the satyr because it appears as if he appeared out of nowhere. Empousai are medium level monster so a singe demigod could kill the thing by herself. Fix the format on your last paragraph it seems to e doing a scroll effect. 141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

Edited! Again......And again.....Also, I'm on my phone so I can't seem to find the problem of the scrolling...........

The-Mysical (talk) 00:36, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

You stil havent fixed this part. "The next morning, Ashlynn woke up and found that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) wasn't beside her and there were two strips of paper that had appeared on the nightside table that were a trip to Australia. After the trip to Australia, Asyline started to attract the attention of many evil and deadly monster that wanted to kill the young daughter of (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos). Ashlynn was forced to consider about sending her to the camp that (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanatos) had told her about before disappearing in the middle of the night. One day, when Asyline was seven years old, she had made the sink exploded because somebody had taunted her that her mother was a w*ore and that she was pregnant with a bast*rd child" Any god children can not be attacked before age 8 and your saying in this part that when asyline was attacked before that age.

141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

Fixed.......Again.......Again.......And again......... Also when Asyline was seven years old, she didn't have a monster attacked her, she made the sink explode.

The-Mysical (talk) 01:54, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

"T, Asyline started to attract the attention of many evil and deadly monster that wanted to kill the young daughter" She wouldnt atract monster when she is a baby.  141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

Edited!.......Again......Again.......Again........And Again..........

The-Mysical (talk) 02:08, June 16, 2014 (UTC) Whats the name of your model? 141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

I don't know since Katniss helped me put the 'Unknown Model' category below

The-Mysical (talk) 02:16, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

looks good to me, ask someone to claim it 141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

Alright! Finally, after like 4-5 edits, I can get claimed :3

The-Mysical (talk) 03:01, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Yep 141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

Not quite ready to be claimed, sorry. How did the godparent stop Ashlynn from killing the baby? Could you add in some more details on her childhood before the age of seven? This wiki is set 17-18 years after the event of the Percy Jackson novels, so Kelli would have had time to reform. You cannot have a dagger/knife as a main weapon. Asyline's main weapon has to be something substantial like a sword, bow, spear etc. Finally, there is a huge problem in the end of the history. On the wiki we have a rule that no character being claimed has been at camp for the past three years (three years is how long the wiki has been running, if you're saying that your character has been here for those three years it's sort of like cheating because there are users and characters who have been here for those three years and it's not fair on them, because your character has not existed on the wiki during that time). You've said she is 17 at the top of the claim, but she's only 11 at the end of the claim. So you can either change her age to 11 as that is how old she is at the end of the claim, or you could have her attend camp for a bit and then leave and come back, or she could stay in the mortal world and get to camp at 17 after a lot of monster attacks. Or something in between. Sorry for the super long comment >.<

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I sort of understood your comment so edited! And no problem, the longer, the better.....!

The-Mysical (talk) 07:56, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Please add the age for the first monster attack. How old was she when she reached camp?

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Edited!!! for the seventh time :/

The-Mysical (talk) 11:31, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

  • In some parts of your claim, it still says (Poseidon/Pontus/Thalassa), so make sure to read your claim over and replace that with (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos).
  • How come none of the parents tried and help Asylinen right away when their kids told them that she hasn't resurfaced?
  • If the monster was a cyclops (the tall man in a trench coat), how come it didn't attack Asyline when it had the chance. She was a young child, vulnerable, without any weapon to defend herself.
  • How did Asyline know of the technique of how to use a bow. Using a bow isn't something that comes naturally to all demigods especially with her god parentage. A demigod untrained in using a bow and arrow would not know how to use a bow nor would be able to aim properly. If you say it was a wild shot, it'd a bit of a stretch.
  • Elaborate what you mean by Ashlynn "finding" the satyr, Colin Reeves. 
  • You need to keep in mind that the wikia takes place approximately 17 years after the book end. That'd most likely be enough time for an empousai (Kelli) to reform in Tartarus.
  • An empousai requires 3 to 5 demigods to kill, so it's unlikely for Asyline (even with the satyr) to kill one all by themselves. I would suggest choosing from the light monsters.
  • From the flow of history, after the hellhound encounter (at the age of 11) Colin went to bring Asyline to camp, along the way they encounter the empousai, aftert killing it Asyline got to camp. That would make her 11 whens he got to camp and she's currently 17.
    • If that's the case, what has she been doing at camp for the past 5 to 6 years? As she wasn't roleplayed, she can't have participated in any events that ahd happened nor have been interacting with characters at camp. You can't just assume that she did.

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Edited....For the eighth time.....

The-Mysical (talk) 04:02, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

  • You need to patient, you'd just be more frustrated and disappointed if you expect your claim to aleays be "claimed" on the third or fifth comment.
  • In some parts of your claim, it still says (Poseidon/Pontus/Thalassa), so make sure to read your claim over and replace that with (Poseidon/Apollo/Thanotos).
  • "Because of Ashlynn's gift of looking through the mist and she saw some monsters near Asyline." This seems to suggest that monsters were attracted to Asyline at an early age.
    • Even being a child of a big-three god, her scent is stronger but would not develop until her early teen years.
  • Your history has not much on the ages between 8 to 16, kindly include in the claim what had happen during that age gap.
  • Since 16 is the only monster attack you have written that Asyline had gotten, 16 is too old for a child of a big-three god to have their first monster attack. They generally get their first attack in the ages of 8 to 11.
    • For each year after Asyline's first monster attack that she doesn't go to camp, kindly provide and elaborate on another monster attack.
  • There's a continuity issue with Asyline's encounter with the harpy, it says that the monster is a harpy but at the end of the paragraph it says: "but then the fury appeared and attacked her."
    • ​Furies serve under Hades, and would only attack a demigod, if Hades have sent them to.

|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|---~Kevin---GrieverEven if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.Griever

  • If Ashlynn had seen some monsters near Asyline when she was 13 that wouldn't make sense. Asyline got to camp whens he was 12 (from what I read in the history), if she's been at camp, Ashlynn would not have been near her to see that monsters were near her child. Also the camp border prevents any monsters from getting into camp.
  • The water pressure and the different property than air would most likely render an arrow to sink to the bottom of the arrow fair before it is near the target. So it's unlikely for an arrow to hit the telekhine underwater, even if it did not sink, the speed it would be coming at it's target will be slow. That would give the telekhine more than enough time to dodge it.
  • The sharp stick isn't made of Celestial Bronze so, while it can moderately hurt the fire breathing horse at most, it would not be able to kill it.
  • From what I read in the history, after the hellhound encounter (when she was 12), Colin went to bring Asyline to camp, along the way they encounter the harpy, aftert killing it Asyline got to camp. That would mean that she had gotten to camp when she was 12 and she is currently 17.
    • If she has been at camp for the past 4 to 5 years, what has she been doing at camp for all those years? You can't assume that she had participated in any events nor that she had been interacting with characters at camp, since she wasn't roleplayed.

|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|---~Kevin---GrieverEven if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.Griever

Edited......And yeah, I have never been a very patient person so sorry if I annoyed you in any which way........

The-Mysical (talk) 03:24, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

I'm not annoyed or anything. I know how frustrating it can be right now, just stay put, I'm sure your claim will be ready for approval soon.

  • A fire-breathing horse breathes fire from their nostril and their mane is on fire, so if she did attempt to stab the fire-breathing horse's head with an arrow, the fire would most likely melt it. 
  • The sharp stick isn't made of Celestial Bronze so, while it can moderately hurt the telekhine at most, it would not be able to kill it.
  • Really the magical barrier wouldn't necessarily stop monsters from attacking Asyline unles they stayed in their house 24/7. Also, Poseidon has many children, all which their scent attracts monster. I don't see why Poseidon would favor Asyline and give her a magical barrier.
  • How come Ashlynn only started seeing monsters near Asyline when she was 12? She had encountered other monsters before hand already.

|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|---~Kevin---GrieverEven if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.Griever

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