Name: Cat (Catherine) Jacka
God Parent: Apate, Apollo, HermesMortal Parent: Chris Jacka/Eve Jacka
Current Age: 13
Appearance: Cat has black hair. Her eyes are dark brown and she has a tattoo on her back. Cat is always smiling and laughing and it is rare to see her without a grin on her face. Cat loves hoodies, band shirts and jeans this is what she mainly wears.
Personality: She is cheeky, mischievous and she never really grew up. Cat is a great liar and has a natural tendency towards sarcasm. She loves a great prank and even when one is played on her she laughs with you. She is fun loving and has a positive attitude. Many describe her as a troublemaker but she is one of those people who are just easy to like. Cat is very rebellious and this means that people in authority don’t tend to agree with her. She isn’t the best listener and prefers to be running around messing around than having a serious conversation. She finds it hard to stay still for a long time and absolutely hates studying; she loves her music and plays the guitar. Music is her passion and she has perfect pitch.
History: Her father, Chris, met Apate at a spring festival she tricked him and threw a water balloon at him. He laughed and ran after her and threw a water balloon at her. They became good friends playing around together, that friendship became more. Apate left Chris after a few weeks and 3 months later Chris heard a knock at the door and a baby girl, Cat, was left at his door along with the present for her 11th birthday and a note. (She was left there by a nymph commanded by Apate)
Cat was born and raised in a small town and her dad worked as a primary school teacher. She doesn’t remember her mother but her father told her that she left her a gift for her 11th birthday. She grew up with her father and their dog, a springer spaniel named Lisa, in a small house. Her dad taught her how to draw and play the guitar when she was young and she developed a creative streak. She loved her school as her dad taught her there and she made friends with a girl called Jessica Roth they were partnered together in music and were both incredibly talented.
Cat got in trouble several times for back talking and breaking the rules by climbing trees and fences. But she was never disciplined much only a few detentions and warnings. Cat favourite pastime was playing truth or dare with her friends and playing pranks on kids at school, they would always forgive her though she would just smile sweetly. Once Cat and her friends went to and abandoned, haunted house. Cat climbed on the roof and stayed there till it got dark. Her dad always let her play out since she got back from school to the time it got dark. She was given a cell phone when she was young and her dad trusted her to go around town with her friends as long as she had her phone. She won several awards for her music; she wasn’t the most academic student but she got through with average levels, art and music were the only places she excelled at. This was a trait she shared with her best friend Jess they often spent their lunchtimes singing and playing the guitar. Her dad brought her a guitar for her 8th birthday. On the last day of primary school Cat played a prank on the music teacher she filled his car with newspapers then wrapped it up in wrapping paper, the kids had spent months planning the prank. The teacher, Mr Jefferies laughed and got the students to help him clean it up then they used the paper as snowballs as such and had a paper ball fight. Cat’s team won.
When Cat moved to her high school she was bullied because she did'nt understand the english work she felt alone even Jessica could'nt comfort her. Music was the only thing that calmed her down. Eventually after weeks of bulling she went to the teacher after the lesson and told her about what happened. The school punished the boys and Cat avoided them as much as she could. Her music teacher entered her into a music competion which she won and was in the local newspaper she still has the trophy to this day.
When she turned 11 she got home and Jessica brought her an I-pod after her party her dad came into her room and gave her the present. Without a word he left the room and gave Cat a sad smile. She opened the present her mother had left for her. It was a necklace with a masquerade mask pendant and a note.
The note read:
To my dear daughter Catherine, one day you will need this when the time comes trust in it and it will save you. You are my daughter and because of this you are special be careful there are things out there that want to hurt you because of what you are. This will protect you wear it always. There is somewhere safe for you and you will find it…
Your Loving Mother/Father Apate/Apollo/Hermes
Confused at what her mother ment she asked her dad and he said he did'nt know anymore about it. She spent hours staring at the necklace trying to figure it out but she found nothing. Cat eventually gave up but sometimes late at night it still annoyed her and she would stare at it. That day Cat wore that necklace every day just in case, she didn’t understand any of it but she trusted her mother. She wore it under her top to school so the teachers would'nt tell her off. After a while Cat was diagnosed with dyslexia which is why she found it so hard in english, she then got work more suited to her so she worked better. School was normal, Music was her highlight of the week and she was in chore with Jessica. More kids started to accept her and she was never bullied anymore. On her 13th birthday Cat and Jess went to a tattoo parlour luckily for them if they put on the right makeup they easily looked older so they got tattoos. Cat and Jess got matching tatoo's on their backs, a quote: ‘All I can do is be myself, whoever that is’. When she got home her dad said it looked lovely and just made sure that she had paid for it with her own money.
First Monster Attack: They were 13. Cat and Jessica were playing out in the woods near Jessica’s house; Jessica lived with her mother, when a large dog-like creature attacked them. Cat grabbed the necklace and it turned into a sword surprised Cat looked down at them, then at the thing that was heading straight for Jessica.
Jessica pushed out in desperation and a gust of wind blew the dog away. A boy (saytr) appeared from behind a tree and leapt at the hound swiping at it with a sword, Cat gripped her necklace which turned into a sword and Cat jumped at the beast from behind stabbing it in the neck. The creature whimpered, convulsed then died. “Jessica are you ok?” Cat asked. “Yo-our not afraid of me” Jess asked. Cat grinned “No you’re like me”. The girls grinned. Jessica was a daughter of Aeolus. The boy looked at them a said “Follow me, I know somehwere safe for you. He kicked off his shoes and they saw he had hooves; A satyr. “You are half-bloods this world is not safe for you follow me there is a camp which is safe.” He put his shoes back on to hide his hooves.
The saytr took them to their homes and told their parents about camp and the gods and everything. Luckily their parents let them go. They then followed him and he took them to the edge of town it was late so no one was around. The satyr summoned a taxi but not just any taxi, the taxi drivers weren’t exactly human….. (Sorry I forgot the name of the taxi, the grey sisters something like that) The taxi led them to a place neither of the girls had seen before. As the satyr led them through the archway they gasped and grinned…. They were home.
You can't have knives as main weapons. They're good for secondary ones but not main. Knife fighting/throwing takes a lot of practice to hit a target accurately. Also, please place how the parents met in the history section and not anywhere else. And last thing, how old was Cat when she got to camp? 14 or 15?
- Ok, so first, I have a bit of trouble with your second parent choice, because in your history, you say: Apate/Eros/hermes, and in the "Gdly parent" you say Apate/Apollo/Hermes. So please especify which is the real one.
- Also, the first monster attack can't happen when shs's 14. The latest would be thirteen.
- You must have a monster attack for each year she is not at camp(well at least since she has her first one.)
- She would not have been able to kill the hellhound without getting hurt.
- Also, the hellhund wouldn't be laying there watching as Cat stabbed his throat.
- Changed weapon to sword
- Changed it to Apate/Apollo/Hermes
- Changed it to 13
- First monster attack was at 13 she is now 13 and at camp
- I've changed it so the saytr was fighting the Hellhound when Cat stabbed it in the neck from behind
- Ok I have another question, in the story you say: Her father, Chris, met Apate at a spring festival she tricked him and threw a water balloon at him. He laughed and ran after her and threw a water balloon at her. They became good friends playing around together, that friendship became more and Cat was born. Apate left Chris after a few weeks and 3 months later Cat arrived at his door along with the present for her 11th birthday and a note.
- So was she born, then taken by Apate, and then retrieved back 3 months after? If that's the case, please change that, that would be direct interference with Cat, which is not permitted
- Or do you mean that she was conceived? (Which I find most probable). If that's what you meant, please just change the word "born to another".
- Also, about the phone thing, I still have my doubts about it, since demigods using phones are like beacons saying "HEY MONSTERS I'M HERE, IF YOU WANNA EAT ME OR KILL ME IT'S FINE BY ME", but I'm not sure if that would count before getting to camp, by now don't change it, but just keep in mind that you might afterwards if someone tells you to.
- Changed it so Apate commanded a nymph to give Cat to Chris after she was conceived
- And ok about the phone thing I did'nt know that
When she went to camp, didn't her father have anything to say abuot it?
Could I say that her dad was sent a letter saying that she was going to a boarding school for her music talent?
- How would Jessica know how to use her powers if she wasn't trained?
- If Jessica "knew" that she was a demigod, why didn't she tell Catherine about it?
- Why didn't the Saturday just tell her father about taking her to camp?
I'm going to make jessica as a character later on so basically she didnt know she was a demigod but she knew she wasnt normal. When she was younger she was scared (not decided exactly what happened) and she hurt someone (or something) using her powers and so she knows she has powers. She did'nt tell catherine cos she was scared she would'nt accept her. *Changed it so the saytr went and told her dad about everything
The model, Maria Rondinella, is already in use by me on my character Lexi Russell. Please change the model.
Ok so first of all could you talk about the things that happend before age 11 because i feel as though that is a huge skip. Also what "gust of wind" where did this wind come from, also hellhounds can get pretty big so a gust of wind could not blow the creature away.Was Cat attacked on her way to camp?
I wrote some more about age 11-12, not much interesting happened before then but I do have about 4 paragraphs about her before age 11 so I don't see how this is a huge skip? The gust of wind was because Jessica was a daughter of Aeolus as it says in the history . It says in the Aeolus power's and I quote 'Children of Aeolus have the ability to create powerful gusts of wind, however, the stronger the gust, the more it drains them.' She was not attacked on the way to camp.
You can't use Ebba Zingmark as the model because it is in use by Flow. Please contact gypsy to share it or use another model.
yeah i wouldn't bother, seeing as how i've seen gyps deny people's requests to share more than once. i'd suggest just using this Model Hunting Agency
I've changed it to the image i origanally used
was Jessica going to tell Catherine that she was a daughter of Aelous before the monster attack? Also, did she know about Catherine being a daughter of Apate?
She was scared of telling Catherine thinking she would be scared of her/wouldnt accept her and No jess didnt know about Catherine being a demi-god
16:53, June 18, 2014 (UTC)
So jess went with her to camp yes? Are you going to make a claim for her? or is someone else going to make a claim for her? because you kind of have to either way (if she does go to camp with Catherine.)
what happened when Cat was 12? (if you added in please bold it >.<" i probably just skipped that part XD)
Looks good to me :3