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'''History''': One day, her father was in a peaceful and calm meadow. He always went there to find a place to be alone. Then, as if out of nowhere, a strange woman appeared. She told him that she also was fond of the meadow. After that, they spent some time in the meadow, laughed, talked, and even played. He then invited her to come to his house, and she accepted. A couple months later, he found a baby girl on his doorstep, with a note. It told him of Camp Half Blood, a place she would need to go when she was older. She told him to escort the child to New York Times Square to meet someone who would assist her to Camp Half Blood. It came with a sword She also told him of some horrible dangers Celeste, the child, may have to face. |
'''History''': One day, her father was in a peaceful and calm meadow. He always went there to find a place to be alone. Then, as if out of nowhere, a strange woman appeared. She told him that she also was fond of the meadow. After that, they spent some time in the meadow, laughed, talked, and even played. He then invited her to come to his house, and she accepted. A couple months later, he found a baby girl on his doorstep, with a note. It told him of Camp Half Blood, a place she would need to go when she was older. She told him to escort the child to New York Times Square to meet someone who would assist her to Camp Half Blood. It came with a sword She also told him of some horrible dangers Celeste, the child, may have to face. |
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| + | Celeste lived a fairly normal life, by demigod standards at least. She always seemed to be good at theater as a kid. With her outgoing and colorful personality, she was constantly finding ways to make the audience laugh. Her interest had sparked at 8 years old. She was diagnosed with ADHD at the age of 10 because it was noticeable that she did not pay much attention in class. She seemed to stare outside, thinking of what she would do ''after'' school. She was diagnosed with dyslexia in the same year, for when the class did reading out loud, she often stumbled and read words wrong, taking up almost the whole class trying to get through one chapter of the book. Despite all this, she was a pretty well-behaved child. She never talked during class, she never swore, and she never back talked her dad. She never was rude to people. She was a very friendly and sympathetic person. She felt happy and somewhat normal, until that one day. |
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| − | Her father put her through school. She felt...out of place. She was always told to stop being such a creep, but she could not help it. It's as if she was supposed to be a creep. She loved hearing stories and listening in on conversations. She also felt strangely drawn to mythology. All kinds of it interested her. She'd love a world like that. She was always told things like "A pegasus? Pft. As if." or "What's so fascinating about this?" She hated the taunts and teases. |
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| − | Sometime in March 2014, she went to her favorite place, which was a meadow in which her parents had met. She settled down and fell asleep for a long time. She woke looking straight at what looked like a overgrown Rotweiler (hellhound). She thought she could gently move away, but apparently this "dog" was out to get her. The "dog" followed her, baring its teeth at her. It pounced at her, and she did not know what to do. She struggled, but it was no use. She screamed for help, but no one answered. She was about to give up when she felt...strange. In fact, she seemed to be glowing. A |
+ | Sometime in March 2014, she went to her favorite place, which was a meadow in which her parents had met. She settled down and fell asleep for a long time. She woke looking straight at what looked like a overgrown Rotweiler (hellhound). She thought she could gently move away, but apparently this "dog" was out to get her. The "dog" followed her, baring its teeth at her. It pounced at her, and she did not know what to do. She struggled, but it was no use. She screamed for help, but no one answered. She was about to give up when she felt...strange. In fact, she seemed to be glowing. A prismatic beam came out of her and blasted the "dog" up in the air. It landed on the ground and with a PUFF! It had turned into some yellow dust. She told her dad about the incident right away. Her father told her to pack up all her stuff as he took her to New York. On the way, he gave her a sword given to him by her mother as well as an explanation of what he knew. She had a teary goodbye with her father and met up with Harold, the harpy (shhhhhh i know lame name). Harold showed her the way to Camp Half Blood as well as assisting her along the way. |
On their trip, Harold and Celeste enountered a seemingly innocent duck that was actually a giant man eating bird. Harold knew to keep calm, so he told Celeste to use her sword, giving her tips as she fought. Celeste was able to, probably very badly, get a handle of her sword. She was caught by the duck and almost got flown away with it. Luckily, Harold used his talons to scratch up the bird and limit its movement. Celeste delivered the final blow between its eyes. She fell to the ground, covered in that yellow dust, and landed in a pond. Harold guided her the rest of the way there. Celeste was amazed that all this happened in the time period of a week. She was excited but nervous for whatever lay ahead. |
On their trip, Harold and Celeste enountered a seemingly innocent duck that was actually a giant man eating bird. Harold knew to keep calm, so he told Celeste to use her sword, giving her tips as she fought. Celeste was able to, probably very badly, get a handle of her sword. She was caught by the duck and almost got flown away with it. Luckily, Harold used his talons to scratch up the bird and limit its movement. Celeste delivered the final blow between its eyes. She fell to the ground, covered in that yellow dust, and landed in a pond. Harold guided her the rest of the way there. Celeste was amazed that all this happened in the time period of a week. She was excited but nervous for whatever lay ahead. |
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Celeste Lindell
Name: Celeste Lindell
God Parents: Iris, Demeter, Nemesis
Age: 13
Mortal Parent: Tom Lindell
Appearance: About 5' 5", Birthmark on her wrst in the shape of an arch, Image provided
Personality: Celeste is an easygoing girl. She is very innocent and naive. She is a very friendly and sympathetic person. (If child of Iris) She enjoys outdoors. She is very playful and caring. She will, however, be surprisingly bloodthirsty around monsters. (If child of Demeter) She is very calm and collected. She is not interested in fighting. She tries to make others around her happy and healthy. (If child of Nemesis) She keeps a normal composure, unless she is around popular kids. She absolutely hates them.
History: One day, her father was in a peaceful and calm meadow. He always went there to find a place to be alone. Then, as if out of nowhere, a strange woman appeared. She told him that she also was fond of the meadow. After that, they spent some time in the meadow, laughed, talked, and even played. He then invited her to come to his house, and she accepted. A couple months later, he found a baby girl on his doorstep, with a note. It told him of Camp Half Blood, a place she would need to go when she was older. She told him to escort the child to New York Times Square to meet someone who would assist her to Camp Half Blood. It came with a sword She also told him of some horrible dangers Celeste, the child, may have to face.
Celeste lived a fairly normal life, by demigod standards at least. She always seemed to be good at theater as a kid. With her outgoing and colorful personality, she was constantly finding ways to make the audience laugh. Her interest had sparked at 8 years old. She was diagnosed with ADHD at the age of 10 because it was noticeable that she did not pay much attention in class. She seemed to stare outside, thinking of what she would do after school. She was diagnosed with dyslexia in the same year, for when the class did reading out loud, she often stumbled and read words wrong, taking up almost the whole class trying to get through one chapter of the book. Despite all this, she was a pretty well-behaved child. She never talked during class, she never swore, and she never back talked her dad. She never was rude to people. She was a very friendly and sympathetic person. She felt happy and somewhat normal, until that one day.
Sometime in March 2014, she went to her favorite place, which was a meadow in which her parents had met. She settled down and fell asleep for a long time. She woke looking straight at what looked like a overgrown Rotweiler (hellhound). She thought she could gently move away, but apparently this "dog" was out to get her. The "dog" followed her, baring its teeth at her. It pounced at her, and she did not know what to do. She struggled, but it was no use. She screamed for help, but no one answered. She was about to give up when she felt...strange. In fact, she seemed to be glowing. A prismatic beam came out of her and blasted the "dog" up in the air. It landed on the ground and with a PUFF! It had turned into some yellow dust. She told her dad about the incident right away. Her father told her to pack up all her stuff as he took her to New York. On the way, he gave her a sword given to him by her mother as well as an explanation of what he knew. She had a teary goodbye with her father and met up with Harold, the harpy (shhhhhh i know lame name). Harold showed her the way to Camp Half Blood as well as assisting her along the way.
On their trip, Harold and Celeste enountered a seemingly innocent duck that was actually a giant man eating bird. Harold knew to keep calm, so he told Celeste to use her sword, giving her tips as she fought. Celeste was able to, probably very badly, get a handle of her sword. She was caught by the duck and almost got flown away with it. Luckily, Harold used his talons to scratch up the bird and limit its movement. Celeste delivered the final blow between its eyes. She fell to the ground, covered in that yellow dust, and landed in a pond. Harold guided her the rest of the way there. Celeste was amazed that all this happened in the time period of a week. She was excited but nervous for whatever lay ahead.
Weapon: Celeste uses a Celestial bronze sword with a little illustration on the hilt (rainbow if Iris, flowers if Demeter, yin-yang if Nemesis). Otherwise, she has some experience on a Celestial Bronze dagger.
"Be kind whenever possible. It is always possible."-Dalai Lama
Comments
- Please elongate your history so that it's at least 3 paragraphs.
- Assuming that the feminine voice is Iris', if she were to help her slain the monster it would be direct interference and is not allowed among the gods and goddesses.
- Kindly provide more detail (After changing the issue above) on her first monster attack such as what type of monster she was attacked by, how she managed to defeat the monster or escape, and etc.
- Please elaborate more on her early childhood.
- Also specify that the weapons (Dagger and arrows) are made of Celestial Bronze as it is the only type of metal that can harm monsters and other demigods.
|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|---~Kevin---
Even if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.
I feel that Emma Watson is too famous to be used for a model, so either change the model or go here.
"Bows before bros." - Bethany Mota 
In general, please go into more detail.
Space is to place as eternity is to time.~ASH
"When she was about to give up, she screamed one more time, and, in a burst of light, the dog flew off her." I assume this is perhaps the help given by Iris but just as I stated in my first comment it would count as direct interference which the gods are not allowed to, unless the statement means otherwise. How come Tom knew the location of Camp Half Blood? According to your history, the note only had the name of it but not where it resides.
|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|---~Kevin---Even if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.
I meant for it to be Celeste's doing, but I guess it was a little unclear. As you can see I have fixed that.
- How did she get to Camp?
- Where did her father get the weapon to give to her?
"Can we just call them storm spirits? Venti makes them sound like evil espresso drinks." -The Super-sized McShizzle Message the Dancer!
If you read again, I fixed that. Thx for the advice!
The last entry was 2012, it's 2014. She can't stay at camp for the two long years. If you want, you can say she went back and came again but not that she stayed the whole timeSuch is life~ lol. 
Broken
Whoops! I was planning something where she wouldn't tell her dad about it until her second monster attack, but I scrapped that. I forgot to change 2012 back to 2014.
Please tell at the end of the history, what age she arrived at camp.
Space is to place as eternity is to time.~ASH
A year did not pass at all. It was still March 2014. She's still 13.
Please elaborate more on her early childhood and I don't think harpies bring demigods to camp.
Space is to place as eternity is to time.~ASH
"A harpy was known as the mother of Zephyrus, the west wind, sisters of Iris and daughters of Thauma, and Electra."
Harpies have close ties with Iris. Iris even saved some from the Boreads once. Maybe this harpy is doing it because of that? That was my intial idea.
I don't really know what to put for her early childhood. Suggestions?
How she was as a child, what was she good at, when she got diagnosed with ADHD things like that