Name: Daisuke Hayashi
God Parent: Ares, Hermes or Dionysus
Mortal Parent: Mayumi Hayashi
Appearance: Blonde hair with green eyes. He is of medium height and a slim build.
Personality: Daisuke is nice, compassionate and is always smiling, though he's quiet most of the time and won't tell others his true feelings in fear of burdening them.
History: Mayumi was an up-and-coming singer/actress and went to America to further help her career. After one of her shows a mysterious man appeared in front of her. He called himself Daisuke and was both courteous and strikingly handsome so as a result Mayumi started to like him. So they started going out and after a month or so Mayumi became pregnant. The man left leaving Mayumi distraught for she had come to love the man and as a result she was never able to love again. The only thing he had left behind was a bronze looking katana, as something to remember him by and Mayumi treasured it and decided it would be passed on to her child when he was ready. Then when it was time, she gave birth to a baby boy who she named Daisuke. She became determined to love and raise the boy right.
Daisuke grew up with a pretty normal life. He had a loving mother and was popular among the schools he went to because of striking looks and kind nature, but one night when he was thirteen years old and walking home from a friends house. He heard a flap of wings above him and all of a sudden a harpy (something he had never seen before) plunged at him from the sky. He was able to duck just in time and a moment later he started running at top speed. Though the harpy kept on his tail and Daisuke had no idea what to do. Then without warning the sound of a twang filled the air and the harpy turned to golden dust that fell to the ground along with a bronze looking arrow. Daisuke turned to see a satyr holding a bow in his hands.
The next day Daisuke sat next to the boy who had saved his life in a taxi. After the frightful experience the boy had hurried him home and told him and his mother everything about the Greek gods. The two were reluctant to believe at first, but the boy soon persuaded them who was in fact a satyr. They were now going to some place called Camp Half Blood where Daisuke was to start a new life as a demigod, but on the way another tradegy happened. Once they had gotten out of the taxi and were walking up a small hill a big black dog pounced on the two. Luckily the satyr had seen it out of the corner of his eye and was able to tackle Daisuke out of the way. The satyr then told Daisuke to run, which he did and ran at full speed as he dodged the trees. The satyr tried calling after him to tell him he was going the wrong way, but he had taken his eyes of the hellhound and before he could react it bumped hard into him and went straight after Daisuke. As he ran he remembered his Mother had given him a weapon, something she said had come from his father. He rummaged in his long, athletic bag and took out a bronze looking katana, just in time too because at that moment the hellhound lunged at Daisuke and he did the only thing that came naturally ... he swung the katana at the beast. By some luck it hit its mark and the monster turned to golden dust. The satyr soon caught up with him and they went together toward his new life. When they arrived and he passed the boundary line he was instantly claimed.
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Katana, throwing stars and a small backup knife.
It is recommended that, when choosing your three god parent choices, you stick to one gender. Also, since your claim is (essentially) for a child of Zeus, he would have had his first monster attack at a younger age (no later than 11). And from then on, more monsters would attack him. In addition, where did he obtain his weapons and did they encounter any monsters on the way to Camp?
Hope that's okay now and I also changed the primary god parent choice.
I doubt a random katana would be lying on the ground. Also, you still have to address the age problems.
Okay, fixed both ... hopefully. ^^"
Almost :) Like I stated earlier, a child of the Big Three must have his/her first monster attack no later than 11, meaning he/she has to be attacked at around 7-11. Then, the sword, if it came directly from his godly parent, would be considered as direct interference. Oh, also, the Apollo Cabin is currently full so there's a higher chance of getting either Ares or Hades.
Okay, hope the thing about the katana is better. Also I changed the god parents choices ... I'm assuming that someone's who's not a child of the Big Three can last longer, tell me if I'm wrong.
Yup. Those who are not Big Three kids can last up to around 13 (if they're kids of major Olympians) and 14 (if they're kids of minor gods). Oh and you'll still need to fill in that last open godly parent choice since it's required to have 3. Then, how exactly would a katana (which, mind you, are usually long) fit into a bag? Lastly, what age was he when he got to Camp?
Okay, fixed. The katana was in one of those long, althetic type bags and his age when he got to camp was 13, his first attack was when he was 13 and he travelled to camp half blood the next day.
Seems good :)
PS. could you go on chat in a couple of minutes? I need to talk to you about something :))