Name: Elefsis Jade
God Parent: Eris, Lyssa, Limos, Nyx, Melinoe (any of these will do)
Mortal Parent: Michael Jade
Appearance: She looks pale and sickly but pretty and can even be scary when angry. Very thin build, 5'11, short hair, and medium-sized ear gauges.
Personality: Dark personality, likes to see the misfortune of others, has a bad temper and will go berserks when angry, but she has a (very deeply hidden) soft and emotional side. Not afraid to speak her mind. Has Sitophobia (fear of food or eating) as well as anorexia.
History: Her mother and father met at a Rammstein concert. Her father accidently bumped into her, and it was love at first site. They spend the rest of the concert together, but they weren't interested in the music. They spend the whole time talking, and Michael found he had much in common with this mysterious woman, named (goddesses' name). Afterwards, they went to the bar sharing a few drinks, then spent the night together. The more they saw each other, the more chaotic Michael life became, and his only focal point was on (goddesses' name). (This line can be changed for different goddesses). Then out of nowhere, (goddesses' name) told him everything, how she was a Goddess and she was pregnant but couldn't keep the baby. He laughed at such a ridiculous assertion, but felt betrayed that she was going to leave him.
When the baby came and (goddess’s name) left him, he fell into a depression and neglected Elefsis numerous times. When she was toddler he tried to commit suicide by jumping into a Lion’s den at the zoo. Though he survived with no injuries thanks to the bystanders that saved him. Elefsis was taken away from him, and given to his sister for around 3 years (largly uneventfull for Elefsis); he was sent to a mental facility. After while he finally begain to understand who his daughter was, believing (goddesses' name). He snapped to his senses realizing what he had done, after completing therapy, he devoted his time to his daughter. As she became very protective of her father, but in contrast fought with him on everything. But she had a creative side, as an amazing at drawing but even though she loved to pain it wasn't very good. She was often bullied in school, alot because she just loved to sit and watch nature, and others made fun of her from being so thin. She wasn't nessicaly anorexic but didn't eat often if she could help it. As an eight year old, she was fircely independent as well as aggressive towards others.
When Elefsis turned 10, she became very thin (because sometimes she refused to eat) but had a strong will, and Michael was afraid of her, especially when she was angry, and she was dangerous because she had been training in martial arts.She would fly into a demon-like furry, almost if she was insane. She took joy in watching people's misfortune. Michael tried in vain to reach her mother, to ask what he should do, but nothing. So when she turned 13 he decided to take matters into his own hands, he sent her to a mental facility to help with her anorexia and her temper because she might endanger herself or others. After several months not improvement was made and they released her saying their was nothing more they could do for her. A few months after getting out of the institution, her and her father were out driving, when they had an accident. Michael was ok but Elefsis was in serious condition and was in a coma, which she might not wake up from. But, while in her coma, Elefsis saw a large bluish-purple mass that said it was sent from her mother, who told her about who she was and what she could do. When she came out of the coma her father told her he understood everything now and he was taking her home. As she packed, she found in the bottom of her drawer a Celestial Bronze double-edge axe and clawed gloves. And a note that said: "When needed, you will know."
On the way home, a Manticore attacked them, running the car off the road which killed her father instantly. During her anguish, she found a new feeling of real rage not just one of her temper-tantrums. Then in a blinding rage she rushed at the manticore, summoning her weapons she begain to attempt to rip the creature into pieces. After calming down,she realized a saytr was following her, and he escorted her to Camp Half-Blood. (at 13)
Weapons: Arm length, pure celestial bronze, double-edge axe with her mother's name inscribed on it and clawed gloves.
User:13:27, February 4, 2014 (UTC)
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sorry didn't know it did that, the thing didn't show up under the claims.01:27, November 19, 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, lad! No guns are allowed to be used as weapons, even with celestial bronze bullets. So change it to a melee weapon like a sword, spear, axe, etc., or if you want a ranged weapon, do a bow.
okay with what craft said, since enyo isn't one of our 45 camp gods. you can't have her as one of your choices
Another thing is that your history needs some improvement, as it is rather short. You're supposed to explain specifically how the parents met, your character's childhood, and how they eventually got to camp. It should be at least around 3 paragraphs, so please, would you kindly repair this conundrum?
Okay number one, Guns are not allowed, if you don't change this your claim will be invalid and deleted when the 25 is reached. Please include a 3 to 4 paragraph history. Which should include, mortal and god meeting, the early years to age of attack anywhere from 11-13...
uhhhhh guys, it says WIP o.o
Oizys does not have a cabin at camp, please remove her from the choices.
then why are there children of Oizys on the wiki?
A note on the weapon, obsidian wouldn't harm monsters, and a flame thrower attacked to gloves is a bit OTT. Her powers wouldn't be active as a baby, they come in around 12-13 (for an Eris kid), the age start getting sniffed out by monsters. How could she be considered strong if she never ate? She wouldn't be able to see her mother, that's direct interference. How old was she when she was attacked?
I need clarification on the weapon. How can an item given sub-consciously in a coma-induced dream transpose into the real world? ~Moodle, Yours to command (Sig WIP).
You can't have a "mysterious power" saving Elefsis from her father's actions; that would be direct interference. Also, people would obviously witness her father trying to jump into a lion's cage and jumping off of an overpass and he would be arrested and Elefsis taken from him.
okay after that murder-suicide thing there is NO WAY IN HELL! he'd get elefsis back and btw the manticore would most definitely tearing HER to shreds :3 since ya know, she lacks training
Starving herself into a coma, would take weeks of not eating like at all, at which point most parents would start to notice she's refusing to eat any meals. If she was eating some to keep him from being suspicious, it would take even longer to get to the point of a coma, to the point where her body would look noticeably emaciated.
okay like i said even if she has weapons, without training. the manticore would still be the one doing the shredding >.<
Where was she taken when she was away from her father? Also, there are children of Oizys on the wiki as they are part of the Broken Covenant
What happened from when she was born to age 10 other than her dad's mental break down, it isn't very well described.
Do you still plan on working on this? If you haven't made any edits by 23 Dec the claim will be subject for deletion due to inactivity
How did she find camp without the help of a satyr?
The answer to that, my dear Riri, is simple. Elefsis was told "everything" (from the claim), thus she would know the approximate location of Camp Half Blood. However it would have taken her quite some time to find it. Very difficult yes, but not wholly impossible. ~Moodle, Yours to command (Sig WIP).
The whole mental institution for not eating/anger issues doesn't make sense, they wouldn't sen her to an place like that unless she were clearly a danger to herself or others. There's also no way if she were at a mental institution that she could still manage to not eat long enough to end up in a coma, they would be monitoring her constately. Then, as absurd and unrealistic as it is, eve if she were able to not eat, at all for weeks, not a single bite of anything, to put her body into a coma, which again very very unlikely, that wouldn't be something she would just bounce back from as quickly as you make it sound like she does. And Moodle, don't answer questions for other peoeple, it isn't your claim.
Do you still plan to work on this? If no edits have been made by 1/7 it will be subject for deletion due to inactivity.
I am currently in Germany for vacation
16:11, December 31, 2013 (UTC)
I'll put this on hold for a week then.
13:29, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
Ok but you still need to work on the issues listed prior to you going on Holiday, those were never fixed
So she's 13 now?
17:05, January 24, 2014 (UTC)
I don't really think one could walk to camp half-blood, since we have planes, trains, cars and all that. And usually demigods don't find satyrs. Satyrs find demigods, so kindly change that. Overall your claim looks good. Oh and please mention at what age she got to camp.
Something is wrong with your signature, it keeps adding a category 'signatures' every time you use it to sign a page, and I keep having to remove it, please fix your signature so it stops doing that, thanks
i have no idea how to change it
13:22, January 29, 2014 (UTC)
At what age did she get to camp? Please clear that part up cause I am not sure how long she was in the come, like, has it been years since the accident with the car happened or only weeks or days?
15:43, February 1, 2014 (UTC)
What happened during her time spent with her aunt? How long did she stay with her aunt? If there was a satyr following, why didn't they make themselves known so they could protect Elefsis? Is she still 13 when she is attacked?
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12:59, February 8, 2014 (UTC)