Name: Elladora Lestrange
God Parent: (3 options, correct?) Hephaestus, Ares, or Hypnos
Mortal Parent: Baharia Lestrange
Appearance: Long black hair, average height for her age, with dark brown eyes, that look black from far away.
Personality: She is a very quiet girl who does not trust... She is strong willed but does not often show that... She feels that she is alone, and only wants family, and trust, but even though she wants trust, she does not show trust in anybody..... To strangers and even her family it seems as she has gone mad.
History: She was born into a rich household, growing up with her mother for a short while. When Ella was 3, the house was set on fire and her mother died in it (investigators think it was a murder). Ella was at her aunt's house for the night, as Baharia was out for the night.
She was taken in by her grandmother, Bella, who had many mental and personality disorders. She grew up in a very stressful and crazy household, when she was with her grandmother, as Bella often got arrested for assaults and battery (she hated other people), until was arrested for murder when Ella was 10... She left the manor and stowed away to New York by ship (she was in the storage with the animals while on it). She wandered, remembering what her mother said about a camp half-blood before she died, looking for the camp, asking everybody she knows. She stumbled into a satyr and it lead the way to Camp Half-Blood. Ella is now 11.
(Background on Baharia (mother)- Baharia was born in London, England and was raised in her mother's house, before leaving off on her own. Baharia was distantly related to a roman demi-god (great great great great great granddaughter, if you want me to be exact). The reason for classifying her as a 'mortal' is that the demigod, and their children, and grandchildren married mortals, making the 'godly' side further away each time. Baharia's mother died (for unknown reasons) and was adopted by Bella. She met Ella's father in a restaurant and had a very long conversation with him. She eventually invited him over to her house. When she had Ella, the godly father (I would prefer Hephaestus) visited once, and told her about Camp Half-Blood.
Weapons: A silver dagger
Why was the house set on fire? Why didn't Ella die in the fire? Why did Bella often get arrested? How did the mother know about camp? And Ella wouldn't have been able to just find it, camp is protected from strangers just walking into it.
Ok, I edited it and added a little background on the mother. -Madeyefire
- You need more history than that. Add more about how she found camp. Add the background on Baharia into the story, not just as a little excerpt.
I can't think of a way to put her mother's background into the main story other than the way it is.. -Mayeyefire
The only history on the mortal parent that's really relevant is how the god parent and her met, courted, etc.
Are you still planning to work on this?
You can't really get often arrested for murders. One would be enough more than a few years, I'd imagine
So someone murdered Ella? And why was the grandmother always getting into trouble and such?
How did Ella manage to stow away? Why was her grandmother killing people?
Oh wait, sorry didn't notice this before, you don't mention any ages since 3, so how old was she when her grandmother was arrested and how old is she now?