Claiming:Camp/Elladora Lestrange

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Name: Elladora Lestrange

Gender: Female

God Parent: (3 options, correct?) Hephaestus, Ares, or Hypnos

Mortal Parent: Baharia Lestrange

Appearance: Long black hair, average height for her age, with dark brown eyes, that look black from far away. 

Personality: She is a very quiet girl who does not trust... She is strong willed but does not often show that... She feels that she is alone, and only wants family, and trust, but even though she wants trust, she does not show trust in anybody..... To strangers and even her family it seems as she has gone mad.

History: She was born into a rich household, growing up with her mother for a short while. When Ella was 3, the house was set on fire and her mother died in it (investigators think it was a murder). Ella was at her aunt's house for the night, as Baharia was out for the night.

She was taken in by her grandmother, Bella. She grew up in a very stressful and crazy household, when she was with her grandmother, as Bella often got arrested for murders... She left the manor and stowed away to New York. She wandered, remembering what her mother said about a camp half-blood before she died, looking for the camp, asking everybody she knows. She stumbles into a satyr and it leads the way to Camp Half-Blood.

(Background on Baharia (mother)- Baharia was born in London, England and was raised in her mother's house, before leaving off on her own. Baharia was distantly related to a roman demi-god (great great great great great granddaughter, if you want me to be exact). The reason for classifying her as a 'mortal' is that the demigod, and their children, and grandchildren  married mortals, making the 'godly' side futher away each time. Baharia's mother died (for unknown reasons) and was adopted by Bella. She met When she had Ella, the godly father (I would prefer Hephaestus) visited once, and told her about Camp Half-Blood.

Weapons: A silver dagger

Madeyefire (talk) 21:34, January 2, 2013 (UTC)Madeyefire

Why was the house set on fire? Why didn't Ella die in the fire? Why did Bella often get arrested? How did the mother know about camp? And Ella wouldn't have been able to just find it, camp is protected from strangers just walking into it. 

"You are in every line I have ever read."   -Ruby

Ok, I edited it and added a little background on the mother. -Madeyefire

• You need more history than that. Add more about how she found camp. Add the background on Baharia into the story, not just as a little excerpt.   Slay Talk  "Shadows wonder why we scream."16:20,1/3/2013    [[Special:EditCount/Slayingthehalcyon|Special:EditCount/Slayingthehalcyon]]  

I can't think of a way to put her mother's background into the main story other than the way it is.. -Mayeyefire

The only history on the mortal parent that's really relevant is how the god parent and her met, courted, etc

Are you still planning to work on this?

"You are in every line I have ever read."   -Ruby

yes, just give me a wee little time Madeyefire (talk) 01:50, January 10, 2013 (UTC)