Name Ever Bloom
God Parent Nemesis or Nyx or Hecate
Current Age 15
Mortal Parent Jake Bloom
Appearance she mostly take after her dad with platinum blood hair that almost seem white and amber brown eyes stand 5’1
Personality Ever is a bright energetic and athletic girl. She always look at things from all sides but is still stubborn to what she believes is right but is willing to admit her mistakes not blaming others. But she is a girl that seems to believe that as long as she has the information that others should listen to her. She gives little to no effect to things that do not interest her and hate seeming weak and any form.
History Ever parents meet when her dad was on a case as he is a detective as her mother was their doing her Goddess job of helping justice find a serial killer which just happen to be the job that Jake was on to at the time well things take its course and after the case is solved they get together for some time and Ever comes into being.
Ever early childhood was spend with her grandpa as her dad was working a lot and she would often go over old case files with her grandpa as he made them into a game for them to play like clue this was also when he found out that she had a thing for mysteries and pretty good at getting the need information to any case and seeing the small details of the case that most people missed the first time. when she was 7 she ask to learn how to fight after watching a ninja movie with her grandpa as then she was put into a class for snake style kung fu but also dance as her grandpa still wanted her to have some girly hobbies here is where her power as a daughter of Nemesis came in handy mostly her balance and reflexes. Having her first monster attack when she was 10 where a monster attacked as it attacked her elementary school and almost killed as she bearly got away after that her dad stayed home more thinking that it was a criminal coming back for revenge against him through his daughter. Thanks to that attack Ever decided that she never wanted to be helpless again and throw herself into her studies of kung fu as well as picking up presser points as a way to help herself.
Like all half bloods Ever had some trouble in school but she was able to get through most of it thanks to her abilities to understand info that where purely facts. Ever next monster attack was the one to get her to find out about being a halfblood as she was saved by an another halfblood name Sara Longstorm who then show her the truth about her blood also helping her tell her dad and grandpa and explaining it to them as it seem unlike most gods that tell their human parteners the truth about their godhood Jake was never told. But before Sara was able to get her to a camp Halfblood she die on the way there in Ever’s third monster attack all this happen around the age of 14 but as sara never had the chance to tell her were the camp was it took her about a month to find by sreaching the forset with her dad before she found it a little bit after her birthday, she now wish to become stronger
184.108.40.206 23:49, April 30, 2013 (UTC)
Could you please break the history into paragraphs to make it easier to read. A monster attack at age 7 is a little far fetched, abd unlikely that it would happen so early.
Why did the monster try to kidnap her? If a monster sees a demigod it would mostly just want to kill it straight away.
o.O why would a 7 year old care for criminal cases, even if her mother was nemesis
What do you mean by: she been at camp now for 2 years as she grow stronger so that she never see another Sara? .-.
She can't have already been at camp for 2 years as making a claim is pretty much saying they just arrived.
If she went to camp at 13, but is 15 now, she can't have been at camp for that time, I realise it may seem confusing, but the wiki has been here for 2 years, if she'd been at camp all this time, you'd have to go around asking users permission to say which characters she knew, plus there's the whole what did she do, all the many numerous events we've had she would have been in, this is why it's easier to not have them be at camp all along.
Everything's perfectly fine except for the ending, looking for camp for 2 whole years is far from plausible
So where was she exactly during those 5 months? How did she survive? how did she even get to camp?
So, what age was she when she got to camp?
Do you still plan on working on this?
If getting Ever to Camp was vital, why did they only search for it on the weekends?
Once the char page is done, kindly add her to the Cabin List.