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Revision as of 02:40, 8 November 2013
Basic Info:
Name: Mairin Hoshiko Sato
Nicknames: Clumsy, Mai, Hoshi, Shiko, Rin, RinRin (by a few)
Age: 16 (13 first monster attack. stayed at camp only for the summer then went back home to live with dad; 16 when she officially went back to camp to live there permanently)
Birthday: December 25th, 1997
Current home location: San Diego, CA
Gender: Female
God Parent: Asteria (1st choice), Pandia (2nd choice), dont really have a third choice now
Mortal Parent: Hitoshi Sato
Appearance: Look at picture
Personality: Very shy but kind. Clumsy Once you get to know her, she's more outgoing.
Weapons: Two twin sai swords
History:
Parents meeting-When her parents met, it was because her mortal parent was an astrologist. He loved looking at the stars above and he/she took interest on them. Mairin's godly parent then asked her mortal parent out for a date and that's when they started to see each other more. She told Hitoshi that she were a goddess and he some what freaked out a bit but not for a long time. Hitoshi kept it a secret from others. Eventually, the two grew even closer than before and then they had Mairin by accident.
Before camp- Mairin took after her mother. She liked looking at the night sky and she camps out a lot. As a family tradition for her birthday, they'd go to Yosemite to go camping out and never brought tents because on Mairin's persistence that she wants to sleep under the night sky. They'd always sleep with their sleeping bags and kept the fire going by adding lots of wood to the fire. Whenever she asked about her mother/, he would always say that he don't know what happened to her and only that there was a note left behind saying that they needed to go back to their original home town since when he met her, she were on a "vacation". Hitoshi would always tell her Greek stories about her godly parent though to give her a clue on who her other parent was, but she never caught on, believing that the stories have no meaning.
Monster Attack/Sightings:
Her very first monster sighting was when she was 10. She saw a harpy in the form of a business man. The harpy followed her father and Mairin everywhere since it sniffed her demigod scent out. The harpy wanted to kidnap Mairin away but it backed off knowing that Mairin had supervision at all times.
Her very first monster attack was when she was 13. She was walking home and a hellhound (through the mist, it looked like a husky) came up to her. Since she was looking through the Mist, she did not know what it was and petted it. Once her hand made contact with it's head, it immediately sniffed her out as a demigod and attacked her. When she saw through the Mist, she screamed for she didn't know what it was. A satyr helped her out of her situation since she was looking over for her and brought her back to her house where they told her mortal parent that she needed to get to camp immediately so that the hellhound couldn't hurt her. She only stayed at camp during the summer so she can train for any surprise monster attacks outside the camp. After 3 years with putting up with all of the random-est monster sightings and attacks, Mairin decided to stay at camp full time.
Finding Out: When she found out she was a demigod, she freaked. This was when she was immediately brought to camp by the satyr. For the first week of camp, Mairin kept freaking out about everything and she had a very hard time taking things in about there godly culture. But after learning about how gods bore demigods and the background story of demigods, she began to cool down after.
After math: During the 2 years of the school year, Mairin had many monster sightings and very seldom monster attacks (she had 2. a hellhound and a harpy attacked her at different time periods. she knew she was unprepared for the fights but some how survived them anyway) both which she almost could have died from. her father, being the worry-wart that he was known to be, asked if Mairin wanted to go to camp half-blood. Mairin declined and said that she can still stay with him. One day, before her 16th birthday, Mairin was taking a walk with her dad in the park and nobody was there. A hellhound appeared out of nowhere and attacked Mairin's dad by accident (it was going for Mairin but her dad was in front of her, trying to protect her). Mairin's father took a deadly attack from the hellhound and she stood there, looking at him, her face horrified. Mairin then took her sai swords out and lashed on the hellhound in anger. (She always keeps her sai swords at all time with her). She disintegrated the hellhound before her father could pass out from the surprise. Mairin knew that she was a danger to him and then her father told her that she needed to go to camp for more safety. Mairin, following her father's orders, went back to camp so she could keep on training so that one day, when she's old enough to go back and live with her father where no monsters would attack her, she can live with him again peacefully.
Camp Life: Mairin is very shy and isn't that great of a fighter. She'd always get put down in camp and she barely talks to anybody. She doesn't have any friends and only speaks to her other half siblings. She likes training at the climbing wall and at the big training field with her sai swords. Camp is basically training her skills in everything that could be useful to her sometime soon. Mairin trains 24/7 a day since she wants to improve as a fighter. She never misses any opportunity to train. Even though she trains everyday, Mairin doesn't show off her strength in games like capture the flag because she doesn't like being the center of attention. On big holidays (ex. Easter Break, Christmas,thanksgiving) she goes back to her father's home so she can see him at least twice during the year but usually quickly returns back to camp after the holiday is over so she can get back to her training.
Signature: PanPan
Comments
First of all, 14 is way to old for the first monster attack, that happens around 11-13. Why was she "supposed" to be at camp. "she went back to her mortal parent's house and stayed with them.": who is "them"?
You said yourself that she wasn't very good at fighting, so Mairin would not be able to make it 2 years away from camp, especially living on her own without any training.
Slay Talk "Shadows wonder why we scream."15:29,11/4/2013 [[Special:EditCount/Slayingthehalcyon|Special:EditCount/Slayingthehalcyon]]
well since idk which gender her godly parent would be i put down them.... and she only stayed for camp for a month right after her monster attack. so yeah she knows the basics of fighting.
PanPan00:15, November 5, 2013 (UTC)
Kindly have only one gender for your godparent choice so that it wouldn't be confusing later on. If they went camping but never brought tents, where did they sleep? How did the satyr help her if the hellhound was only an arm's reach away? Also, if staying at Camp would prove to keep her safe, why didn't she stay? Why only go to Camp for a month? What monsters attacked her after she came back from Camp?
Take your time. I've got forever to wait -Demi ღ
I would expect her to have a run in with a monster around 10-11 and possible fight one around 12-13. Explain how she reacted to finding out she was a demigod or how she felt with all these weird things happening.
"I will take what is mine with fire and blood." -The Mother of Dragons
If she went to camp at 14, how can she be 16 now? she can't have been at camp in the last two years, we've been over this before, in your other two claims that are still on hold, and you can't just keep making more claims because you can't seem to get the other claims approvable, its getting absurd and out of hand if you keep this up
Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach
Im sorry bach. and ill fix the age?
I changed the history a bit. hope its better.
Hey there, Pandora ^^
Just want to comment on this one: "The harpy wanted to kidnap Mairin away but it didn't have a chance since Mairin had people she knew to protect her at all times. The harpy finally gave up when Mairin went back to her house at dark."
I don't think a harpy would just give up knowing someone was there. Maybe they'll just back away or something but not really give up.
Smile and wave, boys. Now that's the worst disguise ever. ~Alias Kit
Also, at the top, it still says she went to camp at 14 and is 16 now, she can't have already been at camp for the last 2 years
Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach
I changed her history about that bach.
I didn't say the history I said "at the top", the top should match the history and the top still says that she went to camp at 14 and is 16 now
Hello Sweetie! The Doctor is in.... Allons-y ~The Doctor Bach
Oh. XD sorry abt that. ill change it.
Okay, so the harpy thing again. What supervision are we talking about? I don't think they have that. If you're having difficulties fixing that part, it's okay to just remove it since you mentioned an attack when she was 13. (Just a suggestion)
And her father was attacked by a hellhound? Um... monsters don't attack mortals. That's a no no. Unless they could see through the mist and well, you did mention he blocked the hellhound's way so... yeah. They could only be attacked IF they see through the mist AND they go in the way.
Smile and wave, boys. Now that's the worst disguise ever. ~Alias Kit