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Name: Jackson Mertens

Gender: Male

God Parent: Boreas, Aeolus, Zeus

Mortal Parent: Emily Mertens

Appearance: Handsome, Blonde hair

Personality: Jackson is a cool boy who really loves to have fun. He is sweet, friendly and cares about his loved ones and the wrong choice on an enemy

History: Emily Mertens is a woman who loves the snow. One day, when she was snowboarding, she accidentally bumped into Boreas. They asked for each other's names and Emily answered hers, but Boreas told her his name was Nick. They skied together while talking about their hobbies, likes, dislikes etc.. They eventually became friends and soon became lovers. They spent 4 months together and slept with each other for one night. After that night, Emily was pregnant. She shared the news to Nick but instead of him being happy, he looked sad. He has to leave.

Boreas explained everything to her and before he left, he gave Emily a watch that turns to an electric spear whenever Jackson wanted to. Nine months later, after Bores left, Emily gave birth to a boy and named him Jackson. Emily took care of him very well. She enrolled him to a private schools but he only has a few friends but a lot of admirers. At the age of 11, he got trouble at school and the teacher called for his mom. Emily took Jackson to the doctor and that was when they realized he has ADHD and Dyslexia.

For years later, he befriended a guy in crutches named Austin. He doesn't know he is a satyr. They hanged out until one day, as Jackson just got home from school with Austin. Austin was on his way home from Jackson't house, a beautiful woman knocked on the door. As Emily opened at and let her come in, that pretty woman turned into a hideous empousa. They were shocked and ran towards Jackson's room and Emily knew it was time to tell Jackson the truth. She took a deep breath and explained everything to Jackson and gave him a watch that turns to an electric spear. And then, Boom! The empousa finally broke into the room and charges toward them. Austin heard Jackson and Emily's scream and hurried back to Jackson's house. Jackson activated his spear and charged toward the empousa. As Austin entered the house and saw the empousa, he pulled out a sword and began slashing the empousa. Jackson remained at the backside of the empousa. While it was busy attacking Austin he stabbed it with his spear. Celestial Bronze blade and electricity strucked the body on the empousa, killing it until it vaporized to dust.

Austin admitted that he is a satyr and that Jackson need to be taken to Camp Half-Blood. Jackson and Emely said their good byes and Jackson and Austin took a cab to camp. Jackson was then claimed by his father. He was 13 years old when he got to camp.

Weapons: CB Electric Spear

I may not look like much, but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja. 14:47, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

You've six more days left to finish this.

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done

I may not look like much, but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja. 10:57, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Electric spears won't vaporize an empousa. The only monster-killing metal we allow is Celestial Bronze. Only Lycans can be killed by silver though. Do you think about me? ★❣Broken❣★

done. It was a celestial bronze electric spear. I added "He stabbed it with his spear. Celestial Bronze blade and electricity strucked the body on the empousa, killing it until it vaporized to dust."

I may not look like much, but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja. 10:36, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

I believe that, if a monster encounters a demigod and a satyr, it will go after the demigod and so, it would have kept a better eye on Jackson. Take your time. I've got forever to wait -Demi ღ

Done. I fixed it

I may not look like much, but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja. 13:29, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

When a woman suddenly turns into an empousa, there isn't much time for someone to explain a demigod's parentage to them, seeing as everyone would try to fight the monster or survive. Also, the empousa wouldn't wait for his mom to finish telling him about who he really is. If at all possible, could you fix up the paragraph where the empousa attack is? It is rather confusing with the sentences not being connected with each other. Take your time. I've got forever to wait -Demi ღ

Done. Is it okay now? I may not look like much, but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja. 04:24, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

How did Jackson and Austin know where Camp Half-Blood is or how to get there? Also, you may want to consider a different mist form for the spear other than a staff. A staff really isn't any less conspicious than a spear. Windsword7 Let The Battle Begin 07:01, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Austin is a satyr so he know where CHB is. Jackson lived in New York so they simply took a cab to camp. Also, I changed that his weapon is a watch that turns into a spear.

I may not look like much, but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja. 09:47, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

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 History: Emily Mertens is a woman who loves the snow. One day, when she was snowboarding, she accidentally bumped into Boreas. They asked for each other's names and Emily answered hers, but Boreas told her his name was Nick. They skied together while talking about their hobbies, likes, dislikes etc.. They eventually became friends and soon became lovers. They spent 4 months together and slept with each other for one night. After that night, Emily was pregnant. She shared the news to Nick but instead of him being happy, he looked sad. He has to leave.
-Boreas explained everything to her and before he left, he gave Emily a staff that turns to an electric spear whenever Jackson wanted to. Nine months later, after Bores left, Emily gave birth to a boy and named him Jackson. Emily took care of him very well. She enrolled him to a private schools but he only has a few friends but a lot of admirers. At the age of 11, he got trouble at school and the teacher called for his mom. Emily took Jackson to the doctor and that was when they realized he has ADHD and Dyslexia.
+Boreas explained everything to her and before he left, he gave Emily a watch that turns to an electric spear whenever Jackson wanted to. Nine months later, after Bores left, Emily gave birth to a boy and named him Jackson. Emily took care of him very well. She enrolled him to a private schools but he only has a few friends but a lot of admirers. At the age of 11, he got trouble at school and the teacher called for his mom. Emily took Jackson to the doctor and that was when they realized he has ADHD and Dyslexia.
-For years later, he befriended a guy in crutches named Austin. He doesn't know he is a satyr. They hanged out until one day, as Jackson just got home from school with Austin. Austin was on his way home from Jackson't house, a beautiful woman knocked on the door. As Emily opened at and let her come in, that pretty woman turned into a hideous empousa. They were shocked and ran towards Jackson's room and  Emily knew it was time to tell Jackson the truth. She took a deep breath and explained everything to Jackson and gave him a staff that turns to an electric spear. And then, Boom! The empousa finally broke into the room and charges toward them. Austin heard Jackson and Emily's scream and hurried back to Jackson's house. Jackson activated his spear and charged toward the empousa. As Austin entered the house and saw the empousa, he pulled out a sword and began slashing the empousa. Jackson remained at the backside of the empousa. While it was busy attacking Austin he stabbed it with his spear. Celestial Bronze blade and electricity strucked the body on the empousa, killing it until it vaporized to dust.
+For years later, he befriended a guy in crutches named Austin. He doesn't know he is a satyr. They hanged out until one day, as Jackson just got home from school with Austin. Austin was on his way home from Jackson't house, a beautiful woman knocked on the door. As Emily opened at and let her come in, that pretty woman turned into a hideous empousa. They were shocked and ran towards Jackson's room and  Emily knew it was time to tell Jackson the truth. She took a deep breath and explained everything to Jackson and gave him a watch that turns to an electric spear. And then, Boom! The empousa finally broke into the room and charges toward them. Austin heard Jackson and Emily's scream and hurried back to Jackson's house. Jackson activated his spear and charged toward the empousa. As Austin entered the house and saw the empousa, he pulled out a sword and began slashing the empousa. Jackson remained at the backside of the empousa. While it was busy attacking Austin he stabbed it with his spear. Celestial Bronze blade and electricity strucked the body on the empousa, killing it until it vaporized to dust.
-Jackson and Emely said their good byes and Jackson and Austin took a cab to camp. Jackson was then claimed by his father. He was 13 years old when he got to camp.
+Austin admitted that he is a satyr and that Jackson need to be taken to Camp Half-Blood. Jackson and Emely said their good byes and Jackson and Austin took a cab to camp. Jackson was then claimed by his father. He was 13 years old when he got to camp.
 Weapons: CB Electric Spear
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 How did Jackson and Austin know where Camp Half-Blood is or how to get there? Also, you may want to consider a different mist form for the spear other than a staff. A staff really isn't any less conspicious than a spear. [[User:Windsword7|<font face="Dalek" size="4" color="#536872" >Windsword7</font>]][[File:chb.png|45px]][[User talk:Windsword7|<font face="Dalek" size="4" color="#536872" >Let The Battle Begin</font>]] 07:01, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
+Austin is a satyr so he know where CHB is. Jackson lived in New York so they simply took a cab to camp. Also, I changed that his weapon is a watch that turns into a spear.
+<span style="padding-center:20px;background-color:blue; border:3px ridge #08DEFF;{{border-radius|30em 30em 30em 30em}}">[[File:Gumball.png|70px|link=User:KimJim/My Charries]] [[User:KimJim|<font size="5.5"><font face="French Script MT"><font color=Yellow>I may not look like much,</font></font></font>]] [[User talk:KimJim|<font size="5.5"><font face="French Script MT"><font color=Yellow> but I'm Pro at pretending to be a ninja.</font></font></font>]]</span> 09:47, June 19, 2013 (UTC)