Name: Jackson Mertens
God Parent: Boreas, Aeolus, Zeus
Mortal Parent: Emily Mertens
Appearance: Handsome, Blonde hair
Personality: Jackson is a cool boy who really loves to have fun. He is sweet, friendly and cares about his loved ones and the wrong choice on an enemy
History: Emily Mertens is a woman who loves the snow. One day, when she was snowboarding, she accidentally bumped into Boreas. They asked for each other's names and Emily answered hers, but Boreas told her his name was Nick. They skied together while talking about their hobbies, likes, dislikes etc.. They eventually became friends and soon became lovers. They spent 4 months together and slept with each other for one night. After that night, Emily was pregnant. She shared the news to Nick but instead of him being happy, he looked sad. He has to leave.
Boreas explained everything to her and before he left, he gave Emily a watch that turns to a CB spear whenever Jackson wanted to. Nine months later, after Bores left, Emily gave birth to a boy and named him Jackson. Emily took care of him very well. She enrolled him to a private schools but he only has a few friends but a lot of admirers. At the age of 11, he got trouble at school and the teacher called for his mom. Emily took Jackson to the doctor and that was when they realized he has ADHD and Dyslexia.
For years later, he befriended a guy in crutches named Austin. He doesn't know he is a satyr. They hanged out until one day, as Jackson just got home from school with Austin. Austin was hanging out at Jackson's house, when a beautiful woman knocked on the door. Austin sniffed the air and knew that the one knocking at the door was a monster. Austin warned Emily and Jackson and they both believed him. They ran to the garden and hid behind the plants. Emily gave Jackson the spear and told him to use it. The empousa came and charged towards them. Jackson activated his spear and charged toward the empousa. As Austin then pulled out a sword and began slashing the empousa. Jackson remained at the backside of the empousa. While it was busy attacking Austin he stabbed it with his spear. Celestial Bronze blade struck the body on the empousa, killing it until it vaporized to dust.
After the attack, Emily explained everything to Jackson. Austin admitted that he is a satyr and that Jackson need to be taken to Camp Half-Blood and Jackson agreed. Jackson and Emily said their good byes. Jackson lived in New York so they simply took a cab to a hill. The taxi driver asked if they were sure about the location because nothing seems to be there except a huge hill. "Yes, we're sure. We're just admiring the view" Austin lied. The walked to the top of a huge hill and Jackson was surprised to see a huge camp called "Camp Half-Blood". Jackson was then claimed by his father. He was 13 years old when he got to camp.
Weapons: CB Spear
14:47, June 14, 2013 (UTC)
You've six more days left to finish this.
10:57, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
Electric spears won't vaporize an empousa. The only monster-killing metal we allow is Celestial Bronze. Only Lycans can be killed by silver though.
done. It was a celestial bronze electric spear. I added "He stabbed it with his spear. Celestial Bronze blade and electricity strucked the body on the empousa, killing it until it vaporized to dust."
10:36, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
I believe that, if a monster encounters a demigod and a satyr, it will go after the demigod and so, it would have kept a better eye on Jackson.
Done. I fixed it
13:29, June 17, 2013 (UTC)
When a woman suddenly turns into an empousa, there isn't much time for someone to explain a demigod's parentage to them, seeing as everyone would try to fight the monster or survive. Also, the empousa wouldn't wait for his mom to finish telling him about who he really is. If at all possible, could you fix up the paragraph where the empousa attack is? It is rather confusing with the sentences not being connected with each other.
Done. Is it okay now?04:24, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
How did Jackson and Austin know where Camp Half-Blood is or how to get there? Also, you may want to consider a different mist form for the spear other than a staff. A staff really isn't any less conspicuous than a spear. Windsword7Let The Battle Begin 07:01, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
Austin is a satyr so he know where CHB is. Jackson lived in New York so they simply took a cab to camp. Also, I changed that his weapon is a watch that turns into a spear.
09:47, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
If Boreas, we do not allow them to have electric spears. Electricity is controlled by children of Zeus.
I changed it.11:25, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
okay i have a hard time believing they'll take a mortal cab to camp >.<. they'd most likely walk12:26, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
fixed it. I put in a few changes13:36, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
Since Austin was a satyr, wouldn't he have been able to smell the monster and thus, warn Jackson or his mother of the threat? A simple door would not be able to hold an empousa out so it would have gotten to them sooner. And then, if I read it right, considering they were inside Jackson's room, fighting with a spear would be hard, what with all the things inside the room and all.
done. fixed it
13:54, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
It honestly looks fine to me.