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Name: Jaron Schreave

Gender: Male

Age: 15

God Parent: Zeus/Boreas/Ares

Mortal Parent: Erin Schreave

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Jaron Schreave

Appearance: Jaron has dark brown hair that curls on the ends and brown eyes. He stands at 6'2 and has a slight muscular build. He is handsome, having elegant features on his face that makes him more appealing to the eye. 

Personality: On the outside, Jaron comes across as rude and arrogant, always utilizing his quick wit and sarcasm. He is aware of his good looks and uses it to get his way sometimes. But in reality, he is actually caring and would risk his life for the people he loves. He is also self-sacrificing.

History: Jaron's mother, Erin Schreave, worked with The British Royal Air Force, serving also as a pilot of a B-2 Spirit aircraft. As a lady, she was respected by all the members of the military force. She was a strong, fierce and brave woman, being loved by everyone.

Then, she met a new recruited soldier, Jason, who immediately fell in love with her for everyhting she was - beautiful, ferocious, clever and courageous. They became friends, and sooner became more than that. Jason started to keep visiting Erin in her house, giving presents such as chocolates, flowers, and a sword (a Celestial bronze sword). Erin kept the sword safe, admiring its beauty.

After a year of their relationship, Erin bore a child, and named him Jaron, just after his father. After all that, Jason solemnly told Erin everything he was - that his real name wasn't Jason, that he was a god, that mythologies and legends were real. Erin believed him after showing some unnatural abilities, and he left instructions to her before he left and never to return. Before leaving, he gave Erin a bronze ring, and told her to give it to Jaron for protection from monsters when he grows up.

After two years, Erin decided to live in Long Island, New York with her sister. Their home was just near the forest, quiet and peaceful. Jaron, still little, easily adapted to his new home. As he grew, Erin trained him, as she knew what was to become of her son. She trained him to use the sword given to her by Jaron's father. Since then, he dreamed to be like his mother someday and join the air force, where he can always feel the power of victory and the grace of the western winds. Age 12, he became good in every skill taught by his mom using the sword. He lived a normal life, until one certain day came.

He was walking home, passing a road flanked by forests of trees. He was alone, even the roads were empty. Then a horrible, screeching sound filled the air. He looked around, scared, and pulled out his sword in full length.  From the top of the trees, a crazed looking woman with bird wings swooped down and reached for him. Jaron almost didn't move in his spot, but training kept him alert. He moved away and slashed at the monster, cutting its head. It bursted into a shower of golden dust. He was too happy that moment for him to attend for some more. Another one lunged at him, claws extended. He was too late dodge, but a man came and killed it with a powerful jab on the side. More came, until both he and the guy finished just five of them. The man urged him to follow.

Too stunned and didn't know what to do, he just followed it until they reached a camp in the middle of the woods. There, the guy introduced himself and said that he was a demigod and the monsters that attacked were harpies - half-women and half-bird.  Jaron knew the word, and doubted everything he said - that he was a demigod, a son of a god, that he had unhuman abilities needed to improve and develop. They reached the camp, and the guy inroduced him to the others. Still, he didn't believe all of it was real.

After three days of staying in the camp and still in doubt, Jaron tried to run away from the camp. He succeeded and went back home to his mother, who was sick worried about him. He told everything to Erin, and she became alert about everything since then. She remembered the ring Jaron's father had gave her. So she gave it to her son and told him never to remove it from his finger.

No one came to bring him back. The ring protected Jaron for almost two years, a pretty lucky thing for him - except for another harpy attack, which calmed him down for there was only one. But one day, when he was to turn fifteen, he tried to wander one more time in the forest, which was just behind their backyard. He told himself not to go farther away. But he went farther away, curious on what may be there. Never noticing he was already out of sight from their home, a guy appeared in front of him. Surprisingly, he had legs of a goat, which made Karon knew where he was from. "I knew you were here," he said to him. "Come with me."

Once more, he didn't want to go with the satyr. A heartbeat after, the sound of crunching leaves and crashing of little trees filled the air around them. From a few metres away, a large red ant appeared in view. "Myrmekes!" the satyr shouted."

"Myr- what?" Jaron asked, but the satyr encouraged him to join attacking the single ant. Jaron drew his sword out and started slashing at it, warned by the satyr that it sprayed acid. Just a few minutes, they both killed it, smiling at each other. Then a familiar voice shouted Jaron's name. He turned and saw Erin running towards him and stared as she saw the dead ant, that turned into gold dust. With Jaron confused why she can see it as it was, Erin explained that she had the Sight, which the satyr agreed with.

Erin, worried, told her son to go with the satyr, and told him, "I didn't want to let you go, Jaron. But you need to go back to the camp you've gotten into long ago. It's where you belong, okay?" She convinced him more and more until he agreed to. Jaron, knowing that his mother knew about this, also tried to believe it once he arrived back at the camp with the company of the satyr. A group of demigods saw him, including the one who led him in there before. Cheering that he'd come back, Jaron accepted the truth and trained to live with them.


Weapons: A Celestial bronze sword

--Summer June (talk) 09:57, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

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Hi there I'll be your claimer today and I have to say this is a nice claim but I have to request you make the first monster attack sooner as I dont think 16 is appropriate (unless you can validate your point then i'll accept it :) )


Behind those cold hard computer screens.....SuitIsASexyWhoreThere’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 08:09, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

-Hi. Please can you make the first monster attack a little earlier- most Big Three children get attacked between the ages of 9-12, or at least explain why he was immune. Could you also explain what the big monsters actually were? 

-Also, Long Island is pretty far out from the rest of New York. I doubt Jason and the other demigod could walk it. I would use a plot device like a map, or just have the demigod state that he was an ex-camper. Also, as he has not yet joined camp, he cannot have yet met and been accepted by the camp. 

Apart from that, the claim looks ready to go 

--CherryBlossomBranch Embrace tears. They're the cheapest way to accessorise. FateScalesOfFate 09:16, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for telling the problem. I've already fixed his history. Sorry, I copied the wrong file from Word.Thanks again. --Summer June (talk) 09:58, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I am your claim checker today ^.^

  • He wouldn't be able to become a "master" of swords at just age twelve. It takes the best of the best a lifetime to become a "master", especially without a real fight, and an unexperienced teacher (by inexperienced I mean either no sword skills at all, minimal, and no experience teaching swordplay) I would reword this x.x
  • what are the "mythical creatures that attacked him?
  • He is really unlucky if five monsters all attacked him at once... and at the same time really lucky that they all came at him one at a time xD
  • Gryphons are a bit too strong for one demigod to handle five of them alone, especially when burdened with another demigod who's inexperienced if you will, please choose one of the Easy Monsters if you want to use five of them at once x3
  • Going from having five monsters attracted to him at once, to none for 2 1/2 years is really stretching it xD Rings don't have the power to repel a monster, he would likely encounter at least 1 monster regardless
  • Centaurs are seen as intelligent beings (capable of speech, and thinking), so they wouldn't just suddenly attack someone, for no reason, especially nearby a person's house... The centaur is part horse, it would be on Jaron's heels in a matter of seconds, especially if Jaron is "zig-zagging" which would take much longer.
  • A gun would have zero effects on monsters. Meaning it wouldn't even slow them down
  • Lately, can her mom see through the mist? Because if she cannot: 1. The CB sword wouldn't look like a CB sword to her, and she couldn't hold it, she wouldn't recognize the centaur as a monster, and the ring would appear to be made out of a different material

Overall, this is a nicely done claim x3 just, a little bit of work x3

Ferret"Lord of the Hidden Realm"-"Gateway between Realms"~HiddenRealm Hidden Realm Logo

Is that okay already? Tell me immediately what's wrong the next time. Thank you.xD

--Summer June (talk) 10:53, March 24, 2015 (UTC)


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