God Parent: Harmonia, Nyx, Nike
Mortal Parent: Jared Marcee
Appearance: Karen isn't to tall, she is only 5 foot. She has dirty blond hair, is always wearing skinny jeans, and a flowery shirt. She has hazel brown eyes.
Personality: She loves playing the 12 string guitar, She will fight for anyone that needs it. She can see fault in others, but she cant see it in herself as often as she should. She always feels like people are staring at her.
History: Jared Marcee was at a pub just hanging out with some friends when a woman got up on stage and sang a karaoke song. Jared fell in love with Harmonia. After she was done singing her song. He had decided that there was something different about her. He walked up to her and asked her if she would like to talk. Harmonia talked with Jared for a while, and then they began to fall in-love. They then went back to Jared's house and had fun that entire night. When Harmonia left she told Jared that she was a Goddess and that she had to go. Nine months later Karen was born and she arrived on Jared's doorstep in a basket woven out of reeds. Jared left Karen at an after-school program one day, and a hell-hound attacked the school building, it almost killed a Karen and a few of her friends but the fire alarm and everyone was ushered out-side. A small portion of the school building collapsed because of a fire inside the wall, and it fell on-top of the hellhound leaving it trapped. Karen, Not seeing the hell-hound until after she walked right by it to get to her fathers car, screamed and told her dad there was some kind of demon underneath the bricks. After that Jared raised Karen and tried to keep her away from monsters, by homeschooling her and barely letting her have any interaction with the outside world. A few days after Karen turned 16 a fury smashed thru the front window, and tried to kill her, but Jared slammed a chair onto the fury's back, and head, crushing its skull and breaking one of its wings. Jared then ran out to his car with Karen in-tow and they drove 40 miles to the edge of a forest, Jared then told Karen to get out of the car and run, because he was afraid that they were being followed. He then left her to try and draw if anything away from Karen so that she could stumble and run away to a new place. Yet also it was because he wanted to make sure that she stayed out of sight and away from other people so that she won't get hurt. Karen then stumbled into Camp half blood thru Camp Half Blood Gate two days later, she was dehydrated and hungry when she arrived. Karen has been at camp half blood ever since.
Weapons: None yet
Ok, taking a women and running to his car would seem like kidnapping to most. In fact, it is kidnapping I believe. How did he know she was a demigod? Try and make the claim longer.♫Jassi Jasmine♫ Speak in Colour♥ 07:05, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Why did he just tell her to run to a forest? RubyRose ~"We all share the pain of our histories" 17:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC) Alright well you've got your basic history good to go now you may just want to work on touchings things up like adding more description and fixing up grammar. The better a claim looks the faster a camper will get claimed. Windsword7Let the magic begin