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+ | '''Name:''' ''Kaitlyn Madison Williams'' (previously Asura Kenriyo) |
'''Age:''' ''14'' |
'''Age:''' ''14'' |
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+ | '''Mortal Parent:''' ''Hasumi Kenriyu'' (biological mother), ''Marshall Williams'' (step-father) |
| + | '''''Other Relatives:''''' ''[[Drew Campwood]]'' (best friend) |
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| − | '''Personality:''' Damien is a major introvert, quiet, shy, and reclusive. Certainly unpopular, and certainly ignorable. Being an only child, Damien grew this way, always noticing the difference between him and other children. These observations made Damien shy, and a loner. Having family ties with the [[Claiming:Camp/Drew Campwood|Virtuoso]] family, Damien grew up alongside Drew Campwood, although a less abusive path. Damien's shyness resulted in him never actually having friends, to this day. |
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| + | '''Personality:''' Katie is a naturally very cheerful girl, to the point of smiling even after having presumably killed someone, displaying apparent sadistic, psychopathic, and murderous tendencies and thoughts. Even when danger is imminent, as when monsters and demigods attack her, Katie continues smiling and giggling. She's also frequently seen blushing, though seemingly out of excitement rather than embarrassment, giving her a permanent somewhat lovesick look on her face. Katie is the closest friend to [[Drew Campwood|Andrew Campwood]], however, that can be mistakened for something different. Many who have seen them talk in public say that her words towards him are, at times, mildly suggestive, however, this is truly only coincidence. Katie is seen often skipping, and despite her youth, Katie is a brilliant tactican, and is very skilled in hand-to-hand combat, operating machinery, and building traps that are almost impossible for mere mortals to detect or escape. |
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| − | Damien, however, is also very intelligent, and enjoys science, particularly biology and the Periodic table. Damien's intelligence landed him a future in the machine industry, as [[Domonick Farmer]], owner of "''Code Red''", promised Damien a job by the age of 16. However, Damien's demigod powers aren't the only he has. His other three (Collossus, Motion-Adapt, and Transformative) are all transformations granted to him by the green pendant around his neck, gifted to him by his mother. |
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| + | But Katie is ''definitely'' farther from sanity than many, if not all, of the other campers. While Drew's undeniable insanity and bloodlust is very strong, she is beyond reasonable and is a danger to anyone near her. Katie is considered to suffer from OCD (Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder), Psychosis, Paranoid-Schitzophrenia, Manic-Depression disorder, Dementia, and Urbach-Wiethe disease. When it comes to attraction, she has algolagnia (erotic interest in pain), anthropophagy (erotic interest in consuming human flesh), asphyxiophilia (erotic interest in being strangled), autassassinophilia (erotic interest in being in life-threatning situations), sadism (erotic interest in inflicting pain on others), and hematolagnia (erotic interest in seeing or consuming another person's blood). Her several "issues" were so strange that she managed to strike fear into the hearts of many people at her psych ward, just by walking by. Even her best friend, who is psychotic himself, was originally uneasy by Katie. Not to mention, Katie's skills makes her a very dangerous person. |
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'''History:''' |
'''History:''' |
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| + | Hasumi was from a rich family in Japan, the Kenriyu's. Many feared the Kenriyu family's wrath, and Hasumi was set to become the next matriarch of the family. As her eighteenth birthday, she was happy, as she having an arranged marriage, but with her childhood best friend, a boy who emigrated from London with his billionaire parents, and since kindergarten, they were very close. Hasumi would meet Hephaestus at her bachellorette party. After talking to him for the majority of the night and getting drunk, Hasumi invited Hephaestus back to her hotel room, in which he accepted. The next day, Hasumi woke up with a hangover, unable to remember the night before. She then went on with the marriage. When she found out she was pregnant, she figured the child belonged to her newlywed husband Marshall, who was ecstatic, hoping for a son. |
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| − | Before Damien was born, Melinoe and Hades were having "issues". Arguments seemed to always span between the two, despite Hades being Melinoe's father. Finally, as a peace treaty, Hades instilled some of his power into a charm that enhances one's physiology. Melinoe loved the gift, and wore it on the day she went to Hollywood. |
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| + | Nine months later, Hasumi gave birth to a ''daughter'', which severely disappointed Marshall, to the point he asked Hasumi, mere moments after giving birth to Katie (then Asura), begged his wife to promise him that she would place the newborn up for adoption. Hasumi, eager to please, sadly agreed, then fell asleep with the baby in her arms. Awakening, she saw Marshall asleep, and Hephaestus stood before her, cradling the infant in his arms. "You cannot give her away." Hephaestus said, sounding like a order. Hasumi immediately remembered Hephaestus. "Who are you, really?" Hasami stammerred, in which Hephaestus responded with a sneer. "Hephaestus..." he said in a deep voice, causing Hasami to nearly faint. "Listen, you will not place this child up for adoption!" Hephaestus snapped. "But..." Hasami started, but Hephaestus interrupted. "I do not wish to hear your execuses. This child...is destined for greatness. She is my daughter, after all!" Hephaestus bellowed with a hearty laugh. "Goodbye, Hasami..." Hephaestus smiled, then...disappeared. Hasami scrambled to catch Asura, then sighed, deciding to listen to Hephaestus' orders. Then, Hasami noticed the six strange combat knives Hephaestus left behind. Picking them up, the exhaustion from childbirth then kicked back in, sending her back to sleep. |
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| − | Julius was a blockbuster screenwriter and up-and-coming actor when he met Melinoe. Only 23, Julius had wrote six movies (two Oscar-nominated) and acted in two shows (one Emmy-nominated). Having an Academy-award for 'Best Actor' already, Julius was definitely catching the public's eye. Especially after purchasing his own yacht and finalizing a fragrance deal (''Sceptre''). Julius was at an afterparty for the celebration of a new movie he was both screenwriting and acting in, when he met Melinoe. Telling him her name was 'Melissa', Julius only spent an hour talking to her before inviting her back to his hotel room for the night. The next day, upon waking up, Julius found that 'Melissa' was gone, without a trace. Believing it was a one-night stand, he went on with life. Nine months later, only a few weeks before the movie would premiere in theatres, someone knocked at the door of his recently bought penthouse. Upon answering it, Julius found a baby wrapped in a blanket on the steps. Lying next to him was a gold-looking staff and a emerald necklace. No note; nothing. But Julius could tell, from the very shocking resemblance of the child and him, that the infant on the porch was his son. And if it wasn't, well... Julius could've used a child anyways. The high-life gets boring without someone to enjoy it with, so Julius decided to bring the infant into his life. And as he picked up the infant and moved towards the house, he saw a ''second'' infant... that looked exactly like the first. |
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| + | Asura's early childhood wasn't all that bad, she says often. But truthfully, it was almost perfect. Anything she wanted as an infant she got. Hasami catered to her daughter's every needs. Asura was often very happy, and rarely cried as an infant. ''Almost'' perfect. Marshall became a frequent drinker following Hasami's decision. While Hasami stayed, Marshall was out cheating almost every chance he got, not even mildly attempting to be subtle or lie about it to Hasami. Soon, Marshall regularly was abusing Hasami, something Asura witnessed happening at an early age. (This, as well as other factors, is one of the reasons Asura developed a fetish to abuse) Out of fear for the life of her daughter, Hasami tried to take the blame whenever Asura did something wrong, causing Marshall to often ignore Asura. But one day, Marshall's abuse was too much for Hasami. After getting angry about work, he grabbed a metal bat and hit Hasami. This not only knocked her unconscious, but killed her. Hasami died that day, and the police, bribed heavily by Marshall, never opened a case. However, the Kenriyu and Williams families were absolutely outraged at Marshall's options. In order to avoid being hunted down and likely beaten to death, Marshall grabbed Asura and fled to England, to start over. There, when Asura was only nine months old, she spoke her first words "Da-daa! Ma-Maa!", which were ignored by Marshall. To provide for himself, since his assets were frozen (by corruption from the Kenriyu and Williams families) in Japan. Marhsall then took a job: part-time mechanic for the vehicles of [[Drew Campwood|the Virtuoso family]]. |
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| − | At first, everyone was surprised by the sudden appearance of the two children that appeared out of nowhere, but after making up a tear-jerking story about finding the twins abandoned (which was half-true), Julius was painted as a hero, and the suspicions dropped. Meanwhile, Julius' movie (''A Silent Night'') gained blockbuster fame, getting a box office profit of about $250 million, within the first two months. As many actors and corporations reached out to do movies or make a franchise out of ''A Silent Night'', Julius started putting his focus into raising his sons. Naming the one he found first Murphy Allen Michaels, he named the second one Damien William Michaels. As the two got older, it was a main difference between the two. While Damien was perfectly healthy, Murphy had Type II Osteogenesis Imperfecta, a rare genetic disorder which left his bones extremely brittle. By age five, Murphy broke his collarbone twice, and fractured several bones to the point he was consistently in wheelchairs. He also showed a unidentifiable learning deficiency, that ultimately resulted in him being diagnosed with brain cancer. On their sixth birthday, Damien discovered Murphy in his bed, unresponsive. He had a seizure while sleeping, and due to his brittle bones, he broke several ribs, and passed away... all in his sleep. Julius was fairly sad and mournful, but Damien took it the worst, considering Murphy as his "only friend" (which is sadly, but accurately, true). Blaming himself for his brother's death, Damien became withdrawn, unable to figure out why Murphy had |
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| − | two different diseases, while he was perfectly healthy. But soon, Damien returned to school, never forgetting his brother. |
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| + | As Asura got older, she saw the horrible life that living with Marhsall Williams brought. First, he had her name chaanged, to Kaitlyn Madison Williams. (This later resulted in Katie severely hating her name, and insists people call her Katie. Only two people called her Kaitlyn and got away with it; her father, and Andrew Campwood, who both had permission to use that name) First, Marshall's alchohol addiction only got worse when they came to London. Not to mention, Marshall became a drug addict. No more were the days that he ignored Katie. Now he tortured her every single day, psychologically, physically, mentally, emotionally, and even socially. However, some of the things he did eventually helped Katie. For example, a week after her second birthday, Katie came home crying, complaining about how the older girls jumped her. In response, Marshall started teaching her how to fight. Marshall was also a fighting coach, teaching people karate, Tae Kwon Do, Capoeira, boxing, ground and pound wrestling, Jiu Jitsu, Savate, Kendo, Wing Chun, and Krav Mega. An extremely skilled fighter, he usually only taught one fighting form, but he insisted on teaching his daughter all he knew about fighting. Katie was already stronger than most children, and this only grew as she aged. And as she aged, Marshall noticed Katie was...different. Aside from a girl named Natalia, Katie had no friends. And slowly, he was losing control of her daughter, as she seemed to become sadistic. |
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| − | Damien was first attacked when he was 11. By then, Julius was not only one of the most sought-out screenwriters, but, at age 34, owned his own movie studios (Michaels Pictures), half of Apple, Inc., his own liquor (SinSation, a champagne), and mansion. As ''A Silent Night V: Deadly Insticts'' won an Academy award for "Best Screenplay" and Julius won his third "Best Actor" Academy award, Damien became obsessed with biology and the Periodic table. While Julius stayed in the limelight, Damien avoided it, almost forgotten by the public. One day, when Julius went to Toronto for a book signing ("''How to be a Better You!''" by Julius M. Michaels II), Damien was outside dismembering his old bike when a harpy swooped down to attack Damien. Ducking out of the way, Damien was scared to death by the sudden appearance of the harpy. Crawling away, Damien ran inside the mansion for protection, only to be followed by the harpy. Running upstairs, Damien ran through eight different rooms, trying to lose the harpy. But the harpy wouldn't leave, and Damien ran up to the attic. Hididng, Damien was next to a box when he saw something gleaming inside. As the harpy banged on the attic door, trying to get in, Damien reached in the box and grabbed the shiny object, which was a green pendant with a silver chain. The pendant had ancient markings (later realized to be Greek) on it, that initially, Damien couldn't read. Then, the words seemed to rearrange themselves, until they formed a message: "''Stone of Transformations. To my sons. From your mother Melinoe''". Upon reading it, the harpy broke into the attic. But, Damien was froze in surprise. He never thought that his mother was a Greek goddess, but here was a stone stating it. As the harpy inched closer to Damien, Damien finally realized he was cornered. Thinking he was going to die, he clenched his hand around the pendant and closed his eyes. "''I wish...I wish I was stronger!''" Damien thought fearfully. Then, pitch black... and a cold, blinding purple light. When Damien opened his eyes, he felt different. He ''looked'' different, too. Glowing green inscriptions covered Damien's body, and his body seemed more toned and muscular. He felt stronger, faster, ''better''. As the harpy attacked, Damien grabbed it's arm and slammed it into the floor... and it went through. The harpy flew through the attic floor and crashed into the front door. Before Damien could move, his abilities deactivated... and his arm was broken. His other limbs were burn, frostbitten, and bruised, but Damien stood... full of fear. "''What was this? How did I...''" Damien thought, before fainting. |
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| + | By her ninth birthday, Katie was putting high school boxing champions in hospitals (Hephaestus children are innately stronger and faster than many humans). By then, Marshall was dreathly afraid of his daughter, and on her tenth birthday, his fears were correct, because one night he walked into the house, and triggereg a tripwire. The guest house exploded, killing Marshall. Meanwhile Katie was outside cheering, while Natalia was deathly silent. The two were arrested, and Katie took the blame for their actions. Natalia was let free, and Katie was found guilty by reason of insanity, and served four years in juvy, in their (rare) solitary confinement area. While in solitary confinement she was attacked by harpies several times, which she ultimately survived by using the knives Hephaestus left behind (she searched the house before detonating). Upon release, she found and killed Natalie, and found Drew Campwood, who she "connected" with. Finally, another psychopath. After that, she managed to secure herself a spot in the Pan American Games, the Olympics befor the Summer Olympics, which allowed people her age to compete. She then won a gold medal in wrestling and a gold medal in boxing, with Drew's support. The media even named "World's Strongest Teenage Girl" and "World's Fastest Teenager", to Katie's happiness. With Drew's help, he took her to Camp Half-Blood, where she was claimed by her god father, Hephaestus. She's been there ever since. |
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| − | when Julius returned, Damien explained his findings to him. At first skeptical, he seemed to believe Damien after seeing the security footage. Although it didn't show the harpy (just a pidgeon), it did show Damien transform (it showed the gleam from his transformation, but his actual transformation wasn't there, just regular ol' Damien). Julius then had his son taking boxing and Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu classes. As Damien got older, he seemed to understand the stone more. The stone contained the fused and altered DNA of several monsters, making Damien wonder if Hades created it (after all, Hades can control several monsters.) Damien can also enter a state where he can boost his body, with very drastic and nasty consequences. After seeing some of the consequences firsthand, he wasn't excited to continuously use the stone. One day, he got a knock on the door. Damien was 14, and was attacked several times already by monsters. At the door was his cousin, Andre Virtuouso, and his best friend, Drew Campwood. Convincing Julius, they invited Damien with them to Camp Half-Blood. That is where Damien's been ever since. |
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| − | *Strength: ''Boosts strength by up to x200% (Laistroygean Giant abilities). But, very likely that strength-boosted areas will suffer grevious injuries (forstbite, serious breaks, scorches, etc.) Overusage can lead to amputation or death. Can only be used once per fight.'' |
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| − | *Speed: ''Boosts Speed by x150% (harpy abilities). But, very likely to destroy muscles inside speed-boosted areas. Overusage can lead to limb failure or heart attack. Can only be used once per fight.'' |
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| − | *Durability:''Generates shell-like armor (giant scorpion abilities). Boosts durability x175%. But, user can still feel pain in covered areas, and armor can be broken. Can result in extreme bleeding. Cannot attack during usage. Can only be used twice a battle.'' |
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Thanks for checking my claim! :) |
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[[User:Ajacopia1|Ajacopia1]] ([[User talk:Ajacopia1|talk]]) 15:05, May 8, 2018 (UTC) |
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| + | With all due respect to Summer, I have to veto what she said about allowing the rest of the four abilities. Our character policies do not allow for any custom powers beyond the demigod's usual powers (as to prevent imparity between characters). Unfortunately, for now, I can't go anymore in-depth with checking your claim until this is fixed since the second half of your claim seems to be heavily dependent on this. |
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| + | Okay I changed a lot of things about the story. Ready to be checked! Thanks KMO, for the constructive feedback, which I severely appreciate! Any more suggestions are fully welcome!:) |
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| + | OMG HIMIKO TOGA! (she seems more of a sociopath than psychopath, to me *shrugs*) |
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| + | I'm incredibly sorry for only checking this now, but hey, you're claimed! I'm looking forward to roleplaying with her. :) |
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| + | {{Accept Claim|daughter of Hephaestus|{{User:Summer June/iggy}}}} |
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Latest revision as of 08:48, 17 June 2018
Name: Kaitlyn Madison Williams (previously Asura Kenriyo)
Age: 14
Mortal Parent: Hasumi Kenriyu (biological mother), Marshall Williams (step-father)
Other Relatives: Drew Campwood (best friend)
God/Titan: Hephaestus
Personality: Katie is a naturally very cheerful girl, to the point of smiling even after having presumably killed someone, displaying apparent sadistic, psychopathic, and murderous tendencies and thoughts. Even when danger is imminent, as when monsters and demigods attack her, Katie continues smiling and giggling. She's also frequently seen blushing, though seemingly out of excitement rather than embarrassment, giving her a permanent somewhat lovesick look on her face. Katie is the closest friend to Andrew Campwood, however, that can be mistakened for something different. Many who have seen them talk in public say that her words towards him are, at times, mildly suggestive, however, this is truly only coincidence. Katie is seen often skipping, and despite her youth, Katie is a brilliant tactican, and is very skilled in hand-to-hand combat, operating machinery, and building traps that are almost impossible for mere mortals to detect or escape.
But Katie is definitely farther from sanity than many, if not all, of the other campers. While Drew's undeniable insanity and bloodlust is very strong, she is beyond reasonable and is a danger to anyone near her. Katie is considered to suffer from OCD (Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder), Psychosis, Paranoid-Schitzophrenia, Manic-Depression disorder, Dementia, and Urbach-Wiethe disease. When it comes to attraction, she has algolagnia (erotic interest in pain), anthropophagy (erotic interest in consuming human flesh), asphyxiophilia (erotic interest in being strangled), autassassinophilia (erotic interest in being in life-threatning situations), sadism (erotic interest in inflicting pain on others), and hematolagnia (erotic interest in seeing or consuming another person's blood). Her several "issues" were so strange that she managed to strike fear into the hearts of many people at her psych ward, just by walking by. Even her best friend, who is psychotic himself, was originally uneasy by Katie. Not to mention, Katie's skills makes her a very dangerous person.
History:
Hasumi was from a rich family in Japan, the Kenriyu's. Many feared the Kenriyu family's wrath, and Hasumi was set to become the next matriarch of the family. As her eighteenth birthday, she was happy, as she having an arranged marriage, but with her childhood best friend, a boy who emigrated from London with his billionaire parents, and since kindergarten, they were very close. Hasumi would meet Hephaestus at her bachellorette party. After talking to him for the majority of the night and getting drunk, Hasumi invited Hephaestus back to her hotel room, in which he accepted. The next day, Hasumi woke up with a hangover, unable to remember the night before. She then went on with the marriage. When she found out she was pregnant, she figured the child belonged to her newlywed husband Marshall, who was ecstatic, hoping for a son.
Nine months later, Hasumi gave birth to a daughter, which severely disappointed Marshall, to the point he asked Hasumi, mere moments after giving birth to Katie (then Asura), begged his wife to promise him that she would place the newborn up for adoption. Hasumi, eager to please, sadly agreed, then fell asleep with the baby in her arms. Awakening, she saw Marshall asleep, and Hephaestus stood before her, cradling the infant in his arms. "You cannot give her away." Hephaestus said, sounding like a order. Hasumi immediately remembered Hephaestus. "Who are you, really?" Hasami stammerred, in which Hephaestus responded with a sneer. "Hephaestus..." he said in a deep voice, causing Hasami to nearly faint. "Listen, you will not place this child up for adoption!" Hephaestus snapped. "But..." Hasami started, but Hephaestus interrupted. "I do not wish to hear your execuses. This child...is destined for greatness. She is my daughter, after all!" Hephaestus bellowed with a hearty laugh. "Goodbye, Hasami..." Hephaestus smiled, then...disappeared. Hasami scrambled to catch Asura, then sighed, deciding to listen to Hephaestus' orders. Then, Hasami noticed the six strange combat knives Hephaestus left behind. Picking them up, the exhaustion from childbirth then kicked back in, sending her back to sleep.
Asura's early childhood wasn't all that bad, she says often. But truthfully, it was almost perfect. Anything she wanted as an infant she got. Hasami catered to her daughter's every needs. Asura was often very happy, and rarely cried as an infant. Almost perfect. Marshall became a frequent drinker following Hasami's decision. While Hasami stayed, Marshall was out cheating almost every chance he got, not even mildly attempting to be subtle or lie about it to Hasami. Soon, Marshall regularly was abusing Hasami, something Asura witnessed happening at an early age. (This, as well as other factors, is one of the reasons Asura developed a fetish to abuse) Out of fear for the life of her daughter, Hasami tried to take the blame whenever Asura did something wrong, causing Marshall to often ignore Asura. But one day, Marshall's abuse was too much for Hasami. After getting angry about work, he grabbed a metal bat and hit Hasami. This not only knocked her unconscious, but killed her. Hasami died that day, and the police, bribed heavily by Marshall, never opened a case. However, the Kenriyu and Williams families were absolutely outraged at Marshall's options. In order to avoid being hunted down and likely beaten to death, Marshall grabbed Asura and fled to England, to start over. There, when Asura was only nine months old, she spoke her first words "Da-daa! Ma-Maa!", which were ignored by Marshall. To provide for himself, since his assets were frozen (by corruption from the Kenriyu and Williams families) in Japan. Marhsall then took a job: part-time mechanic for the vehicles of the Virtuoso family.
As Asura got older, she saw the horrible life that living with Marhsall Williams brought. First, he had her name chaanged, to Kaitlyn Madison Williams. (This later resulted in Katie severely hating her name, and insists people call her Katie. Only two people called her Kaitlyn and got away with it; her father, and Andrew Campwood, who both had permission to use that name) First, Marshall's alchohol addiction only got worse when they came to London. Not to mention, Marshall became a drug addict. No more were the days that he ignored Katie. Now he tortured her every single day, psychologically, physically, mentally, emotionally, and even socially. However, some of the things he did eventually helped Katie. For example, a week after her second birthday, Katie came home crying, complaining about how the older girls jumped her. In response, Marshall started teaching her how to fight. Marshall was also a fighting coach, teaching people karate, Tae Kwon Do, Capoeira, boxing, ground and pound wrestling, Jiu Jitsu, Savate, Kendo, Wing Chun, and Krav Mega. An extremely skilled fighter, he usually only taught one fighting form, but he insisted on teaching his daughter all he knew about fighting. Katie was already stronger than most children, and this only grew as she aged. And as she aged, Marshall noticed Katie was...different. Aside from a girl named Natalia, Katie had no friends. And slowly, he was losing control of her daughter, as she seemed to become sadistic.
By her ninth birthday, Katie was putting high school boxing champions in hospitals (Hephaestus children are innately stronger and faster than many humans). By then, Marshall was dreathly afraid of his daughter, and on her tenth birthday, his fears were correct, because one night he walked into the house, and triggereg a tripwire. The guest house exploded, killing Marshall. Meanwhile Katie was outside cheering, while Natalia was deathly silent. The two were arrested, and Katie took the blame for their actions. Natalia was let free, and Katie was found guilty by reason of insanity, and served four years in juvy, in their (rare) solitary confinement area. While in solitary confinement she was attacked by harpies several times, which she ultimately survived by using the knives Hephaestus left behind (she searched the house before detonating). Upon release, she found and killed Natalie, and found Drew Campwood, who she "connected" with. Finally, another psychopath. After that, she managed to secure herself a spot in the Pan American Games, the Olympics befor the Summer Olympics, which allowed people her age to compete. She then won a gold medal in wrestling and a gold medal in boxing, with Drew's support. The media even named "World's Strongest Teenage Girl" and "World's Fastest Teenager", to Katie's happiness. With Drew's help, he took her to Camp Half-Blood, where she was claimed by her god father, Hephaestus. She's been there ever since.
Weapon(s): Celestial Bronze knives (six)
Ajacopia1 (talk) 22:26, May 24, 2018 (UTC)
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Really, really sorry for the super late check; something went on irl and I couldn't use my laptop (which is the only thing I use to open the wiki). I apologize ;-;
- There's just one thing though. I think the four abilities will be enough for the enhancements the pendant gives. Morphing isn't really a physical enhancement, plus it's way out of the scope of his real abilities., which could be OP.
- Tiny bit: Can he control how much he's gonna use these additional abilities? Like, only boosting up an aspect to some degree?
Hi, Summer June! The late check is alright, I don't mind! :)
- As for the morphing abilities, I removed it! Thanks for the advice!
- As said in the abilities list, he can boost his strength x200%. This is his limit, and the only amount he can boost it by. This goes the same with his other abilities.
Thanks for checking my claim! :) Ajacopia1 (talk) 15:05, May 8, 2018 (UTC)
With all due respect to Summer, I have to veto what she said about allowing the rest of the four abilities. Our character policies do not allow for any custom powers beyond the demigod's usual powers (as to prevent imparity between characters). Unfortunately, for now, I can't go anymore in-depth with checking your claim until this is fixed since the second half of your claim seems to be heavily dependent on this.
Okay I changed a lot of things about the story. Ready to be checked! Thanks KMO, for the constructive feedback, which I severely appreciate! Any more suggestions are fully welcome!:)
"No matter what happens, my light will destroy your darkness."
OMG HIMIKO TOGA! (she seems more of a sociopath than psychopath, to me *shrugs*)
I'm incredibly sorry for only checking this now, but hey, you're claimed! I'm looking forward to roleplaying with her. :)
This claim has been approved as daughter of Hephaestus. You now need to make a page for them and a word bubble, if you aren't sure how to do this you can see the guide here. Once you have done that you can add your character's name to the cabin list located on the cabin pages and start role playing with your new character. If you have any questions feel free to ask a member of the Admin team.