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Name: Lacus/λίμνη

Gender: male

Spices: Lake Nymph

Dad\Creator:Poisdon,

appearance: Sea green eyes and long brown straight hair covered in water moss. Pale skin and he usually wears whatever he feels comfortable with.
Lake Nymph

Personality: Wise and wet in personality he dislike's most Camper's and there bathing in his lake. He is very intellegant but only shares info with his closest friends or someone who can beat him in a riddle contest.

History: His life force is the lake around camp half blood. He was at least 400 years old and was created 450 years ago.. He was created as a guardien for the swimmer's in the lake (though he hates this). He now resides in a small rock cavern under the water. He protects drownign swimmers by adding them and carrieing them to the surface of the water.

Weapons: no weapon


since he's a nymph, you don't need to have the choices, you can pick just one. This reads almost exactly like Marry's claim, I'd suggest tweaking the history a bit and expanding more. You should probably have more personality too. "Please don't try so hard to say goodbye." 00:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Do you still plan to work on this claim?

"You are in every line I have ever read."   -Ruby

He wouldn't be able to see the future, the first sentence is still the same as from Marry's claim and doesn't make sense, so all he does is protect people at the lake? "You are in every line I have ever read."   -Ruby

Here's the thing, nymphs/spirits that are created/born as one, probably don't have long histories, but if he used to be a demigod, you'd need to explain more of who he was before becoming a nymph/spirit

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Ok, I'm giong to approve this, now just as a suggestion to beef up the actual page a bit, I'd suggest adding some camp life info, like maybe an interesting story about a swimmer he saved and such, it keeps from the page looking too stub like. I mean reasonably speaking there are character types whose history just doesn't require a lot of explanations, but there's still plenty of ways around having a boring/stub page after.

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This claim has been approved as a fresh water nymph of the lake. You now need to make a page for them and a word bubble, if you aren't sure how to do this you can see the guide here. Once you have done that you can add your character's name to the cabin list located on the cabin pages and start role playing with your new character. If you have any questions feel free to ask a member of the Admin team.



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