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Why would a kid have her own penthouse? What was Lexi doing for work if she's a kid? Hellhounds aren't disguised as people, they just look like regular big dogs in the mist. How did she get away from the hellhound? How old is she now? |
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So her dad just randomly got a guy without knowing hes a satyr or did Aphro like tell him or etc?Won't it take much time to take her to another place since the hellhound was searching for her?<span style="padding-left:10px; background-color:#000000; border:3px outset hotpink;{{border-radius|25em 25em 25em 25em}}">[[File:Smiley-sad055.gif|link=User:Broken_fire/Me_Awards_and_Badgies]] [[User:Broken_fire/Me_Charries|<font size="3" face="century gothic" color=white>I know I'm annoying, but that's my way of "I love you!" Don't you ever dare leave me or I'll at least hug you and never let go!</font>]] [[User:Broken_fire|<font size="4" face="vivaldi" color=white>★~Broken~★</font>]] [[File:Jap32.gif|link=User talk:Broken_fire]]</span> |
So her dad just randomly got a guy without knowing hes a satyr or did Aphro like tell him or etc?Won't it take much time to take her to another place since the hellhound was searching for her?<span style="padding-left:10px; background-color:#000000; border:3px outset hotpink;{{border-radius|25em 25em 25em 25em}}">[[File:Smiley-sad055.gif|link=User:Broken_fire/Me_Awards_and_Badgies]] [[User:Broken_fire/Me_Charries|<font size="3" face="century gothic" color=white>I know I'm annoying, but that's my way of "I love you!" Don't you ever dare leave me or I'll at least hug you and never let go!</font>]] [[User:Broken_fire|<font size="4" face="vivaldi" color=white>★~Broken~★</font>]] [[File:Jap32.gif|link=User talk:Broken_fire]]</span> |
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| + | * In your story, it would seem that the father got the letter, after the Hell-Hound was chasing Lexi. You need to work on wording. {{User:Slayingthehalcyon/sig|00:26,11/23/2012}} |
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Revision as of 00:26, 23 November 2012
Lexi Mansin
Name: Lexi Mansin
Age: 16
Gender: Female
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Ben Mansin
Appearance: Long flowing blonde hair, Blue eyes, Pale skin, 5'7
Personality: Lexi is very strong and powerful. She never backs down from a fight and can battle with the best of them. She has a powerful aura surrounding her and she tends to clash with other strong personalties.
History: Before Lexi was born her father was a model. Well in Italy he met a gorgous young woman named Amanda. But what she wasn't telling him was that she was really Aphrodite. They lived togther for 3 months and ended up having a baby about year later.
Aphrodite had to leave to join the gods and left Ben with the baby who he named Lexi. She grew up in Ontario Canada in a city called Toronto. Lexi and her father spent every minute together.
When she was 15 she got a job at a local resturant. But one night after working, Lexi returned home and heard something in her room. Then a hellhound burst out of the room. In a panick Lexi threw a knife into it's head but the hellhound did not die as it was not celestial bronze. But luckly it gave Lexi time to run. After getting the knife out, it bounded after so she locked the bedroom door behind her. As she ran into her fathers room. Ben knowing what was going on took her to a man's house. Aphrodite told Ben in a letter that the man was a satyr that could help Lexi. Claiming the man could save her she went along.
Well on the run Lexi learned the man was a satyr. He told her about a safe place for demigods like her. Where there would be more people like her and she could fit in without a monster attacking her ever again. When the satyr got Lexi to camp he granted her with a bow called Shocker.
Weapons: Bow and Arrow called Shocker.
Comments
Why would a kid have her own penthouse? What was Lexi doing for work if she's a kid? Hellhounds aren't disguised as people, they just look like regular big dogs in the mist. How did she get away from the hellhound? How old is she now?
That moel is already being used by another user on the wiki
Question:
So her dad just randomly got a guy without knowing hes a satyr or did Aphro like tell him or etc?Won't it take much time to take her to another place since the hellhound was searching for her?
I know I'm annoying, but that's my way of "I love you!" Don't you ever dare leave me or I'll at least hug you and never let go! ★~Broken~★ 
10:38, November 22, 2012 (UTC)
- In your story, it would seem that the father got the letter, after the Hell-Hound was chasing Lexi. You need to work on wording. Slay Talk "Shadows wonder why we scream."00:26,11/23/2012 [[Special:EditCount/Slayingthehalcyon|Special:EditCount/Slayingthehalcyon]]