Name:Mark La Rue
God Parent: Hecate, Pandia, Cybele
Mortal Parent: Adrian La Rue
Appearance: see foto
Personality:He is very mysterious and doesn't like people but he is very calm and comfortable when needed. He loves to read, but prefers to read at night with the moon up high. He is very friendly and loyal, to the point to defend his friends at any cost. He is bisexual and single.
His father was a french demigod that worked on a bar in the outsides of Manhattan. One day a strange woman appeared. The two of them instantly fall in love. He took her tin a trip to Paris and there they finally coceive a child. In the morning after, she disappeared leaving a note telling him that his child was a demigodess and that at the age of twelve her child would have to go to to camp half bloodlearn how to survive. Along with the letter there was a sword and a map.
Four months latter he found Mark. He grow up with his father and his three brothers in a small apartment. In the school he was very lonlely and the other kids often bullied him. His father, tried to hide all the divine things so he could have a normal life, but one day his father was killed on Mark's 13 birthday by a siren that sensed him. The four of them were taken by their uncle, an exmilitary that was a bit trastornated after fighting against the talibans.
His uncle often drown himself mad, scaring them or even hiting them. After two years with his uncle, a dracanae attacked him while in the park. Fortunately He managed to scape and run home. There his uncle gave him his mother's note along with a map of camp half blood. He quicky packed her esential things, including the sword, and begin the trip. In the trip a group of dracanae attacked him while in a train to Long Island, but he managed to find Camp Half-Blood before the dracanae killed him.
Weapons: a silver (and celestial bronce) cavalry sword
hi and welcome to camp! I'll be your claimer today and I see a few problems with your claim
- please elaborate on the early childhood please?
- how did he get to camp??
- keres? good choice of a monster...but she's not one you can pick sorry but take your pick here http://camphalfbloodroleplay.wikia.com/wiki/Forum:The_Monster_Encyclopedia/Light_Monsters
- how did he received his weapon??? cause Celestrial bronze isnt exactly easy to get "...she disappeared leaving a note telling him that his child was a demigodess and that at the age of twelve her child would have to go to to camp half bloodlearn how to survive. Along with the letter there was a sword and a map." it is already there
- how old is he? cause first monster should be around 12 or 13
thats all the problems I see soo please do the required changes
- I told you no keres >,< pick another monster
- can you mention his age please??
why would a siren kill his dad? they dont kill mortals considering mortals cant see them soo is he clear sighted or a mortal himself? Look at the first line of the story
sorry >,< I guess I'm too tired but still with two demigods he would be attck sooner soo 15 is no longer acceptable