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Name: Riley Peregrine
Age: Fifteen
God Parent: Hecate/Melinoe/Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Joseph Peregrine


Appearance:
Riley-Keough

Model:Riley Keough


Personality:

Before Riley was taken custody by her cruel and strict stepmom, she was carefree, a bit tomboyish and crazy to sum it all up. But all that changed ever since the death of her parents. Even her supposed-stepdad-to-be treated her and her twin brother like dirt. After she got out of that mansion, Riley became quiet, disciplined, clever but stubborn, sarcastic and delusional as well.
Riley's extremely cautious, serious and making her crack a laugh is somewhere near to impossible. She's patient and calm in most situations, even at the brink of death. This gives her an advantage over most fights.

History:

[ Parents Meeting ]

As I regard the tale of my parents, I still believe it to be a lie. I mean, who would ever think my mother would be Hecate, the Greek goddess of magic who met, challenged my dad in illusion tricks in a circus and eventually fell in love with each other? It's all just a crazy myth my step-mom wove to scare us when my twin brother and I moved in on their mansion when I was eleven.
And another reason to keep us contained and be whipped for. That's why she locked us up on a spare room for nearly three years (we were twelve at that time)--because she was afraid of what we were capable of.

[ Childhood ]

That was the reason before we knew what my twin and I were. Before we got our first attack. Her reason used to be because it's her way of punishing us for ruining her party with her friends by accidentally shoving the cake. Ever since my father died on a heart attack, our lives drastically changed. We used to have a lot of friends in school even of our deformities in language (dyslexia) and of our ADHD that constantly kicks us out.
If only dad didn't die when we were 12. We wouldn't have been in this hell. For every wrong mistake we made, we were whipped. Every rule we broke, we were punished in every form of torture. Our room and the mansion were only our limitations. We're not allowed to go outside for an unknown reason. The people who knew us even thought we were dead, blinked out from existence. And we never knew why we were treated like this. We had attempts of running away but our stepmom made sure we stay contained. A question still lingered in my mind: if he hated us so much, why keep us?

[ First Attack ]

We never believed on her silly tale until my brother and I had finally got the chance to be taken to a festival after three years of imprisonment inside the mansion. Our Step-mom was having her 'night life' enjoying some games and gambles. We were on a Ferris wheel when we got attacked by a pack of harpies that looked a lot like old hags trying to claw our eyes out. After a couple of bloody gashes, bruises and cuts, we were at the brink of death until our step-mom butted in the moment the wheel stopped for the next round and slew the monsters. And we were like, No way! She must have noticed the chaos we were causing. People were staring us like we're crazy shooing a bunch of .... birds, I think? One little mortal girl had noticed.
Once we got home, she explained everything to us. She's a demigod too, a daughter of Eris, and another reason why she locked us up was because we have powers we may not be able to control and might disrupt her 'social life' and her shot at being not a demigod. She always said afterwards, "They say we're born to be heroes and trained to slay monsters. I say otherwise. We're trained to defend anyone but born to die." Her reason why she left camp, loathed it and forced herself to live a normal life.
She didn't regret marrying our father but when she knew what we were when we unintentionally broke the pipes out of anger due to her keeping us isolated from the world at 12, we became a living torment to her. That's why she hated us. But still, she took us to camp to jokingly 'dispose us' at that dump site.
No surprise. No wonder why she would shut herself out on her room whenever we find her covered with wounds, bruises and even injuries. Our backyard was usually the one messy as if there had been a battle. And there was. She was defending her home. And sometimes, Clara, our stepmom's friend would come to stop by us. She must have been helping her on fending the monsters off.

[ Third, Fourth and the Following Attacks to Camp ]

On our way, she gave us ordinary items she got from Clara once who was a child of Hephaestus. I got a leather belt that transforms into a whip and a sword after flicking the air thrice. My brother got an usb that transforms into a spear at will. It was necessary if we need to make it out alive. And we better learn fast as well each encounter on monsters such as hellhounds, giant scorpions and empousai on our way to camp. We had our final stand together at the foot of a hill. Frail, weak and pale from the lack of sunlight all those years inside the mansion, my brother and I were quite helpless in each fight.
But on this fight with the scorpions, we'd need every fraction of energy we have left. The fight last nearly half an hour. And at that time, we're already near to faint from exhaustion, blood loss, injuries and poison. Our step-mom was poisoned and so was my brother. I thought we were about to be finished off by two more scorpions until reinforcements came and helped us out.
The three of us ended up in an infirmary for two weeks. Our step-mom just wouldn't stop blaming us over and over again. Man, I hate that woman.

Weapon: A leather belt that transforms into a whip and a sword after flicking the air thrice

Chouettes-10The problem with some people... is that they exist! ☽Mathemagician☾

Comments

Wait... so the step-mother was a clear sighted mortal? and if she was mortal, how on earth did she cross camp boarders? plus are you going to make the claim for Riley's brother since you mentioned him a lot in her history?

Pandy-LSP render“Oh my glob!! Drama bomb!”~Pandora

Nope. She's a daughter of Eris. And no, I'm not going to make a claim for him if it's okay =D I don't have a good model for him.

Chouettes-10The problem with some people... is that they exist! ☽Mathemagician☾

on the second paragraph under "Third, fourth, and following attacks to camp", is that when Riley was 15? Also, where are the attacks when she was 13 and 14? >.<

Pandy-LSP render“Oh my glob!! Drama bomb!”~Pandora

Actually, their first attack was fourteen at the ferris wheel when their step mom allowed them to go out for the festival. They got locked up on their stepmom's mansion (twelve at that time) for nearly three years. The third, fourth and the following attacks are on the way to camp. They're already fifteen at that point when they got to the infirmary. So you can say that they were unconscious when their birthday passed.

Hecate's a minor goddess right? 

Chouettes-10The problem with some people... is that they exist! ☽Mathemagician☾

Can you add the ages directly into the story? Also, if they were on a ferries wheel when they were attacked, how exactly did the step-mom reach them in order to save them? and if the step-mom was on the ride with them, why wouldn't she have helped out earlier, and prevented all the scratches and bruises? lastly, what reinforcements saved them when they were attacked by scorpions during their trip? it's difficult to read some of this with the grammar and changing in past tense to present to future tense Ferret"Lord of the Hidden Realm"-"Gateway between Realms"~HiddenRealm Hidden Realm Logo

I fixed the second question. And no, the step-mom wasn't on the ride with them. As for the reinforcements, they're demigods. Sorry for the grammar errors, I'm on tab so it's very hard to edit

Chouettes-10The problem with some people... is that they exist! ☽Mathemagician☾

I feel like you could include more detail in her early childhood. How old were Riley and her brother when their father died? Could you expand on their life with their step-mom?

User:Bird of Winter/sigcoding2

I added a paragraph more on the childhood (but I could actually make a story out of it in Wattpad sometime :3). Hope it's good now.

Chouettes-10 May the forces of evil be confused on the way to your house.Mathemagician


Hey Math, Having 2 female and 1 male choices as riley's parents kinda makes things hard. You'd have to make a sperate paragraph taking about how apollo  wouldve met Rileys mom. I'd recommend just taking out apollo and switching him for a female god. 141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

How did the step mother find out that they were demigods, and knew about their mother? You will need to elaborate on how a mortal suddenly knows about them.

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Step mom actually. Finding out they were demigods was written on the part that says 'First Attack'. 

Chouettes-10 May the forces of evil be confused on the way to your house.Mathemagician


What was their childhood like before the age of 12? On the presumption (from reading the comments) that the first monster attack occured at the age of fourteen, it's too late. There are three demigods living in one house at one time, so having a monster attack between the ages of 11-13 is sort of inevitable, and they would have been attacked more frequently due to their number.

User:Bird of Winter/sigcoding2

I thought fourteen was the latest possible? But I added a few things on the stepmom and on the first attack.

Chouettes-10 May the forces of evil be confused on the way to your house.Mathemagician


Please expand throughout the whole claim, things feel a bit to short for my taste. Also Hecate cabin is full so i reccomend changing your goddess, To add to that having 2 female and one male god complicates things and sense you didnt make a seperate/alternate history about apollo i think it would best to just make all your god parent options female or male. 141667793555905    IT WAS ULTRAVIOLENCE   ONCE UPON A DREAM ♫ DEATH

What should I elaborate more on? I tend to make things brief and concise, see. No offense but, really, the history was written on a good length >.< and Hecate's cabin isn't full yet.... Fifteen members plus two. Also, if she won't be claimed as ahecate kid (cuz its full whene the claim's already good enough -.-) that's when I'll change the history to reflect on the god parent.

Chouettes-10 May the forces of evil be confused on the way to your house.Mathemagician


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