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Personality: he is someone who is distant and wont talk he flinches at any social contact as he has a fear of turning into his step father. The attack left him having extreme PTSD as every night he kept on waking up wondering whether would it be different if he was more prepared. He wont talk and is quite antisocial as he is convince he's a monster. A bit paranoid and truthfully bad at his words as he never had a friend. |
Personality: he is someone who is distant and wont talk he flinches at any social contact as he has a fear of turning into his step father. The attack left him having extreme PTSD as every night he kept on waking up wondering whether would it be different if he was more prepared. He wont talk and is quite antisocial as he is convince he's a monster. A bit paranoid and truthfully bad at his words as he never had a friend. |
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| − | History:Off the coast of korea there was a small island. The island was very small that it was forgotten in most maps. In the island where the population was less than 500 people lived Felicity Sanderson a demigod child of eros living with her family. She was from a poor fisherman's family living in a very allocated island. Most of those in the village were poor and was very depended on the exports of their products as well as the rich folks in the island. The Sanderson wasn’t much different and Felicity being the eldest would often go to sea with her parents helping them out and if she can, she would also dive into the ocean looking for pearls for extra income. She loved the sea and would often go there when she was younger pretending that she was in her own world. As time passed Felicity grew and so did her beauty which caught the eye of one of the rich man’s son, Landon Helion . |
+ | History:Off the coast of korea there was a small island. The island was very small that it was forgotten in most maps. In the island where the population was less than 500 people lived Felicity Sanderson a demigod child of eros living with her family. She was from a poor fisherman's family living in a very allocated island. Most of those in the village were poor and was very depended on the exports of their products as well as the rich folks in the island. The Sanderson wasn’t much different and Felicity being the eldest would often go to sea with her parents helping them out and if she can, she would also dive into the ocean looking for pearls for extra income. She loved the sea and would often go there when she was younger pretending that she was in her own world. As time passed Felicity grew and so did her beauty which caught the eye of one of the rich man’s son, Landon Helion . |
| + | People say landon was one of the best men in the island for having both the charms and position on the island thus being courted by him was a dream for felicity. Landon was a kind gentleman and for felicity whom often dreamt of a perfect marriage he was all she wanted. Therefore when a ring came she said yes without any hesitation thinking it was her glass slipper yet it was not for it was the beginning of her nightmares. For she soon found out that landon was both possessive and abusive giving her a hard time. People would often hear Felicity screams yet being married to landon many was unable to help for he was one of the most powerful in the island. Even landon's parents sometimes joins in the torture as in their eyes the beautiful Felicity was of no right to be in their family |
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| ⚫ | Regardless of his iron will Felicity refused to give up as she plan to run from the island. Each time she manages to run away he would caught on and torture her even worse to ensure she would stay and listen to him. This become somewhat a cycle and Felicity was at the brick of giving up until one day she ran to the sea, running away from landon when she was saved by a man new to the island . The man was a god saw her and thought nothing but to save the woman from the situation. Landon was more than angry for he was used to getting things his way but it didn’t stop the god from taking Felicity away from him, from the island. The god brought her to the nearest town where he left her in a hospital to be cared for. When the god left young felicity she was fragile patite and weak with many scars from her abuse thus he was pleasently surprise when he got back there 2 months afterwards to see such energy from the same woman. Felicity seeing her savior of course was keen to thank him for all that he's done. The two spend a lot of time together and soon a after a few nights of passion she grew pregnant |
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| ⚫ | Regardless of his iron will Felicity refused to give up as she plan to run from the island. Each time she manages to run away he would caught on and torture her even worse to ensure she would stay and listen to him. This become somewhat a cycle and Felicity was at the brick of giving up until one day she ran to the sea, running away from landon when she was saved by a man new to the island . The man was a god saw her and thought nothing but to save the woman from the situation. Landon was more than angry for he was used to getting things his way but it didn’t stop the god from taking Felicity away from him, from the island. The god brought her to the nearest town where he left her in a hospital to be cared for. When the god left young felicity she was fragile patite and weak with many scars from her abuse thus he was pleasently surprise when he got back there 2 months afterwards to see such energy from the same woman. Felicity seeing her savior of course was keen to thank him for all that he's done. The two spend a lot of time together and soon a after a few nights of passion she grew pregnant. |
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| + | This was something to which the god was worried about for he got word that landon was soon getting close to knowing felicity's location and with the rule in mind he knew he could not protect felicity or the his child. With that in mind he decided to push the time limit but his reason was not enough for Zeus, whom soon ordered him to leave. He left with a heavy heart when the baby was a few weeks old and told felicity all about the greek gods and how the child will be force to go to camp and as a last gift he placed the mother and son far from the island with a pendant that can turn into a sword a gift for his son when he come of age . Felicity accepted it all and soon was happy living her life with her son to whom he named rykal. They lived a happy life despite struggling financially to meet ends met with Felicity doing odd jobs as she took care of young rykal. Pity to how that happiness was not long for when rykal was 4 Landon soon found her. |
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Landon used his powers and influence to bring Felicity and rykal to the island and as expected her husband came back to old habit and abuses her even worse than before. Rykal was sometimes even subjected to the abuse but Felicity would often defend him. Landon came to hate the child as he soon found out he could not have kids and thus abuse Felicty even worse making rykal see all of that every single day. landon would find any simple mistake and punish felicity for it soon even punishing him for breathing in his air. He grew up hating his father but each time his step father did something bad he would often taunt him on how he would turn out like him one day saying it was a curse of the family as rykal was not aware he was not his child. |
Landon used his powers and influence to bring Felicity and rykal to the island and as expected her husband came back to old habit and abuses her even worse than before. Rykal was sometimes even subjected to the abuse but Felicity would often defend him. Landon came to hate the child as he soon found out he could not have kids and thus abuse Felicty even worse making rykal see all of that every single day. landon would find any simple mistake and punish felicity for it soon even punishing him for breathing in his air. He grew up hating his father but each time his step father did something bad he would often taunt him on how he would turn out like him one day saying it was a curse of the family as rykal was not aware he was not his child. |
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| − | With his mother’s death Rykal no longer has any protection against his step father and many would expect him to kick the child out but surprisingly he did not for he wanted young Rykal to suffer. As he grew up young rykal was not only subjected to physical by his step father but he was even mentally abuse by him as he taunted his every move. Living in the mansion every day was hard as his grandmother a child of limos would sometimes even join in the torture as she would try to fight off some monsters thinking they were coming for her. By the age of 13 she died leaving the job of fighting the monsters to the servants she employed to which some are qualified demigods her aunt which was only 8 years older |
+ | With his mother’s death Rykal no longer has any protection against his step father and many would expect him to kick the child out but surprisingly he did not for he wanted young Rykal to suffer. As he grew up young rykal was not only subjected to physical by his step father but he was even mentally abuse by him as he taunted his every move. Living in the mansion every day was hard as his grandmother a child of limos would sometimes even join in the torture as she would try to fight off some monsters thinking they were coming for her. By the age of 13 she died leaving the job of fighting the monsters to the servants she employed to which some are qualified demigods her aunt which was only 8 years older.His aunt was a bit kinder than his father and often help rykal through everything yet their relationship was soon discovered by landon. She and landon had a little fight to which soon turn sour his anger soon reached its climax resulting in her death (something landon continue to deny and thus blame rykal) |
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Revision as of 15:53, 28 October 2014
Name:Rykal Sanderson
Gender:male
God Parent:Paleamon/Demios/Poseidon
Mortal Parent:Felicity Sanderson
Appearance:
Personality: he is someone who is distant and wont talk he flinches at any social contact as he has a fear of turning into his step father. The attack left him having extreme PTSD as every night he kept on waking up wondering whether would it be different if he was more prepared. He wont talk and is quite antisocial as he is convince he's a monster. A bit paranoid and truthfully bad at his words as he never had a friend.
History:Off the coast of korea there was a small island. The island was very small that it was forgotten in most maps. In the island where the population was less than 500 people lived Felicity Sanderson a demigod child of eros living with her family. She was from a poor fisherman's family living in a very allocated island. Most of those in the village were poor and was very depended on the exports of their products as well as the rich folks in the island. The Sanderson wasn’t much different and Felicity being the eldest would often go to sea with her parents helping them out and if she can, she would also dive into the ocean looking for pearls for extra income. She loved the sea and would often go there when she was younger pretending that she was in her own world. As time passed Felicity grew and so did her beauty which caught the eye of one of the rich man’s son, Landon Helion .
People say landon was one of the best men in the island for having both the charms and position on the island thus being courted by him was a dream for felicity. Landon was a kind gentleman and for felicity whom often dreamt of a perfect marriage he was all she wanted. Therefore when a ring came she said yes without any hesitation thinking it was her glass slipper yet it was not for it was the beginning of her nightmares. For she soon found out that landon was both possessive and abusive giving her a hard time. People would often hear Felicity screams yet being married to landon many was unable to help for he was one of the most powerful in the island. Even landon's parents sometimes joins in the torture as in their eyes the beautiful Felicity was of no right to be in their family
Regardless of his iron will Felicity refused to give up as she plan to run from the island. Each time she manages to run away he would caught on and torture her even worse to ensure she would stay and listen to him. This become somewhat a cycle and Felicity was at the brick of giving up until one day she ran to the sea, running away from landon when she was saved by a man new to the island . The man was a god saw her and thought nothing but to save the woman from the situation. Landon was more than angry for he was used to getting things his way but it didn’t stop the god from taking Felicity away from him, from the island. The god brought her to the nearest town where he left her in a hospital to be cared for. When the god left young felicity she was fragile patite and weak with many scars from her abuse thus he was pleasently surprise when he got back there 2 months afterwards to see such energy from the same woman. Felicity seeing her savior of course was keen to thank him for all that he's done. The two spend a lot of time together and soon a after a few nights of passion she grew pregnant.
This was something to which the god was worried about for he got word that landon was soon getting close to knowing felicity's location and with the rule in mind he knew he could not protect felicity or the his child. With that in mind he decided to push the time limit but his reason was not enough for Zeus, whom soon ordered him to leave. He left with a heavy heart when the baby was a few weeks old and told felicity all about the greek gods and how the child will be force to go to camp and as a last gift he placed the mother and son far from the island with a pendant that can turn into a sword a gift for his son when he come of age . Felicity accepted it all and soon was happy living her life with her son to whom he named rykal. They lived a happy life despite struggling financially to meet ends met with Felicity doing odd jobs as she took care of young rykal. Pity to how that happiness was not long for when rykal was 4 Landon soon found her.
Landon used his powers and influence to bring Felicity and rykal to the island and as expected her husband came back to old habit and abuses her even worse than before. Rykal was sometimes even subjected to the abuse but Felicity would often defend him. Landon came to hate the child as he soon found out he could not have kids and thus abuse Felicty even worse making rykal see all of that every single day. landon would find any simple mistake and punish felicity for it soon even punishing him for breathing in his air. He grew up hating his father but each time his step father did something bad he would often taunt him on how he would turn out like him one day saying it was a curse of the family as rykal was not aware he was not his child.
His taunts didn’t bother him as much having his mother as a guiding light but that was until he was 11 when a harpy managed to find him while at the garden with his mother . Rykal being young was clueless on what to do as he saw his mother trying hard to protect him but luck was not on their side as he saw his mother being winning but by the price of her life...
With his mother’s death Rykal no longer has any protection against his step father and many would expect him to kick the child out but surprisingly he did not for he wanted young Rykal to suffer. As he grew up young rykal was not only subjected to physical by his step father but he was even mentally abuse by him as he taunted his every move. Living in the mansion every day was hard as his grandmother a child of limos would sometimes even join in the torture as she would try to fight off some monsters thinking they were coming for her. By the age of 13 she died leaving the job of fighting the monsters to the servants she employed to which some are qualified demigods her aunt which was only 8 years older.His aunt was a bit kinder than his father and often help rykal through everything yet their relationship was soon discovered by landon. She and landon had a little fight to which soon turn sour his anger soon reached its climax resulting in her death (something landon continue to deny and thus blame rykal)
Rykal hated his life and thought each day to either kill his dad or himself not knowing he'll soon get his wish. By the age of 15 his step dad came back truly drunk and had tried to kill him. Out of impulse he protected himself accidentally he activated his powers (if paleamon the offensive powers which is Children of Palaemon are able to tap into primal shark instincts which allows them to attack with enhanced speed and ferocity. However, this ability can often lose to loss of self-control and only lasts for a short time. killing his father (or hurting him) when he was lsing himself) /If deimos the supplement powers which is Children of Deimos have the ability to conjure a real version of someone's worst fears, however, the child of Deimos is not able to control the conjured fear and is susceptible to them as well; they are also drained of a moderate amount of energy when the fear is conjured.landon's fear was a killer clown that killed him/ If poseidon the supplementary powers Children of Poseidon have the ability to create minor earthquakes, only large enough to knock anyone in the immediate vicinity of the user off their feat, and only for a few seconds. it killed him) which injured his father severely that he was close to death he tried to save his father but ironic to the timing as suddenly a few harpies came sniffing him out. Rykal saw his step father died (from his injury of the fight/heart attack) as the harpies tried to attacked rykal .
Lucky for him before it could attack a group of demigod came and killed the monster saving him by default. the demigods was there on the island for a quest to search for something in the forest near where the village was. They left him after saving him going to the forest yet before leaving the island they invited him to get out of the island thinking it'll do him some good . On the journey in the boat from the small island to Korea (which has the closest airport) they were attack a few times but the questors was well experience and managed to protect themselves . After a few days in the boat they reached Korea a satyr (who awaited their return to take the object the questors found on rykal's island) told them about rykal being a demigod thus enlisted the satyr to bring him to camp. Soon after arriving at camp he found a yo yo quite similar to that he lost on his bed saying it was a present from his real dad
Weapons:
1)A yo yo that is acctually an altered chain whip [1]. the tip part is acctually pretty strong steal and if he while even his yo yo string is very sharp that if your cought in it you might get cut or worse..
2)pendant that can turn into a sword
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....
There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 15:51, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
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You current have a total of four active claims, you may only have one active at once. As such this claim will be placed on hold until Claiming:Camp/Suzaku, and then Claiming:Camp/Pamina Clayton has been claimed/approved.
|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|-|---~Kevin---
Even if you end up as the world's enemy, I'll be your knight.
Pamina has been claimed. Since I can't rename, this claim is next. Please fix the following issues:
- No manticores, too strong. No manticore would come out for one demigod, especially those that haven't reached camp yet. If you need help, Forum:The Monster Encyclopedia/Light Monsters
- Please separate these into at least 4 paragraphs: parent's meeting, childhood, first monster attack, and arrival at camp.
- How did his mother die?
- Sorry but... fixing the grammar and spelling would be appreciated.
Such is life~ lol. 
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finally finished the fixes needed
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 17:50, August 26, 2014 (UTC)
Why did the rich man's son abuse his wife? What made him change in marrying a poor woman? How old was he when he had his first monster attack? Mind separating the paragraph of childhood from first monster attack and how he got to camp? Where did his yooy come from? What "sharp device" do you mean? thanks. Such is life~ lol. Broken
Changed it.........
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 17:09, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
What powers exactly did Landon have that would force his mom to return to the island?
"No wind is of service to him that is bound for nowhere." -Wind
ok I changed it to them being kidnap by the husband is that better?
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 17:23, September 1, 2014 (UTC)
uhm okay for starters where exactly was this island? it's just your being somewhat vague with that. i feel like deimos would have better things to do than play nurse for some random mortal woman, he's a god afterall. how did rykal use his powers to hurt his stepdad, monsters don't typically kill mortals unless they're in the way of their demigod prey.
Hydro " We all have secrets. The ones we keep... and the ones that are kept from us." 03:13, September 5, 2014 (UTC) [[Special:EditCount/Hydrocarbon1997|Special:EditCount/Hydrocarbon1997]]
done
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 18:10, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
- The godly parent could not have stayed more than 2-3 months, and even that's pushing it.
- Was Felicity clear-sighted? If not, why did she protect Rykal from the harpy (because she wouldn't have seen it as a harpy)
- Once the harpy had killed his mother there would have been nothing stopping it attacking Rykal.
- After his first monster attack he should be attacked at least once every year, so please add in those attacks.
- If his sword was celestial bronze then it wouldn't have hurt the step father as he's a mortal.
- Please include the sword listed in the history in the weapons section.
- Why was there a group of demigods on the island if you claim it was so small and remote?
- How did the demigods realise he was one too?
User:Bird of Winter/sigcoding2
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User:Bird of Winter/sigcoding2
done with the changes
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 18:09, September 23, 2014 (UTC)
- 6 months is still too long for Palaemon to have stayed. As I said in a previous comment, he could onl have stayed 2-3 months tops.
- If there were so many demigods in one household there would have been many more attacks.
- What powers could he have used to kill his step-father?
- Please detail the journey to camp.
- Please include his sword in the weapons listing.
User:Bird of Winter/sigcoding2
done...and I think I need to go to bed...
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 17:22, October 5, 2014 (UTC)
If the grandmother died when Rykal was 13, he would have had an attack at age fourteen. Again, please detail his actual journey to camp (what transport did he take to get there, how long did the journey take, was he attacked etc).
User:Bird of Winter/sigcoding2
done...
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 17:20, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
i'm confused, this history is a lil hard to read since the paragraphs are really piled up. please try and make them a lil smaller. anyway, landon just killed rykal's aunt cuz he was a lil mad? was he drunk? i'm sorry it doesn't precisely make sense to me
Hydro " We all have secrets. The ones we keep... and the ones that are kept from us." 01:45, October 18, 2014 (UTC) [[Special:EditCount/Hydrocarbon1997|Special:EditCount/Hydrocarbon1997]]
This claim hasn't been edited in 10 days. If it is not edited by the 30th of October, it will be deleted.
Take your time. I've got forever to wait -Demi ღ
done..
Behind those cold hard computer screens.....There’s a human heart beating away its emotions… 15:53, October 28, 2014 (UTC)