Name: Samantha Levi
God Parent: Themis, Ariadne, Apate
Mortal Parent: Marcus Levi
Appearance: Model- Katie Findlay
Personality: A complete polar opposite of her sister, Samantha is a very bright, bubbly, cheerful girl. Slightly clumsy, always eccentric, never sullen, Samantha really brightens the room when she enters it. She's always fighting for justice, and believes in the good of people. She loves to talk with people and make friends, and is extremely content with her life.
Marcus Levi was a young college student studying law. One day, he was waiting for class to begin when a woman walked in and sat next to him. She was the most beautiful person that he had ever seen, and when class was over that day, he worked up the courage to talk to her.
They ended up chatting and getting along well, and they ended up having lunch at a nearby cafe. He asked her out, and she accepted. They dated for a while and before Marcus knew it, the love of his life had left. Unknown to him, she was also pregnant, and with twins at that.
The love of his life gone, Marcus fell into a deep depression, and started to drink. He dropped out of school and his life basically fell into black hole. He moved in with his sister, Sarah. A few months after moving in with her, she married a man named Dante. Life was good for Sarah and Dante, but not for her brother. Marcus ended up drunk and behind the wheel. He never hit anybody, but slammed into a tree and died on impact.
One day, Sarah discovered two baby girls on her doorstep,one wrapped in a sky blue blanket, the other in a dark blue one. There was no note or card. Sarah brought them inside, wondering what the heck they were doing out there.
Dante was home at the time and saw Sarah bring the twins in. Dante was not a human, but a demigod, a child of Demeter, who had left camp to settle down and start a family. He insisted that they keep the twins, knowing that the two girls were most likely demigods. Their arrival was almost the same as his own to his father's doorstep, and he knew that they were Marcus's kids, having heard the story from Sarah several times.
When the girls were 3, Sarah was diagnosed with breast cancer. When they were 5, their only motherly figure died. This caused the big personality split in the girls. Samantha began to grow overly-perky and bright, laughing herself to sleep each night like a lullaby. She tried her best to think positive so she could feel better, and it worked. Mallory on the other hand, didn't want to talk to anyone, didn't want their condolences or their pity. She grew in self loathing and hate for the world. She blamed everyone for Sarah's death, the doctors, the nurses, Dante, for not noticing it faster. You couldn't talk any sense into her.
Life went on. Both girls had problems with school and were diagnosed with ADHD and dyslexia, making schoolwork somewhat difficult. Yet, Samantha loved school, and ended up becoming very popular in school. She was skilled at sports and joined the public school's track and soccer teams. By her first year in high school, she was already being scouted by colleges.
Mallory despised school, she hated how controlling it was, how fake everyone seemed. Unlike her twin, Mallory made next to no friends, pushing off all attempts of friendship from people. She ate lunch by herself at her own table. While also gifted with sports, she refused to join any teams so she wouldn't have to deal with people. By her first year of high school, everyone knew to stay away.
When both girls were 12, just before their 13th birthday, their first monster attack came. Samantha was playing a card game with Dante in the backyard while Mallory was sitting on grass drawing in her notebook. Dante hadn't told them that they were demigods, he wanted them to live as normal childhood as possible. The less they knew, the safer they were.
All seemed quiet, but then suddenly, a hell hound shadow traveled to them into the fenced in area. It pounced on Dante, the first scent it picked up. Dante touched his watch and it turned into a sword. He took down the hell hound. Both girls were completely shocked. Dante explained to them everything about life and camp, but he didn't want the girls to go just yet. He thought that they were too young, and the attack was merely a result of their combined scent and not the twins being targeted.
From then on, Dante trained the girls in basic combat, hand-to-hand and sword play. They also moved close to camp in case of the next attack. He also gave each girl daggers to keep on them at all times just in case.
The next attack happened to just Samantha and Mallory, when they were 13. They were in gym class. Samantha was passing a ball back and forth to a few friends and Mallory walking on the track by herself. Everyone else was playing basketball on the courts or tossing a football back and forth. She refused to play anything with anyone, so the coach made her walk the track to get credit for the class. She just turned the corner when she was suddenly heard a screech. It was a harpy. The harpy swooped down from her spot in the sky and started to claw at Mallory. Samantha saw this and ran over to help.
Mallory drew her dagger, which she had concealed at her waist under her shirt, and tried to stab at the harpy. The harpy would fly up above the dagger swipe and jump on Mallory again. By the time Samantha has crossed the field and track, Mallory manged to clip the wing, injuring the harpy from flying away. With the harpy unable to fly, she pulled on it's hurt wing and stabbed in in the chest, sending it to dust. The mortals all came running over. They had seen a bird come out of nowhere and attack her and Samantha had run to help.
In between the third and second attacks on the twins did a monster just attack Dante. Once Dante had taken the day off of work on the girl's first day of school. (Just cause he wanted to be home, it was one of those days.) He was walking home from the nearby corner store to buy some eggs when a hell hound roughly the size of a car suddenly pounced on him. Since he still had his watch he turned it into a sword and killed the hell hound after a a few minutes of fighting. When he came back home with the carton of broken eggs, the twins were home from school. They had left during lunch when Dante hadn't answered his phone. Samantha pounced on him almost as hard as the hell hound did, fussing over him and "I was worried sick about you!" Mallory (while relieved that Dante was fine) just rolled her eyes and made a comment about how the hell hound should have done it's job better.
The third one happened when Dante and the girls were shopping at the local food store, when they were 15. An empousa who had been working at the counter jumped at them. Mallory had been across the store, and came running. She only made it just to see the fight ending. Samantha kept Dante's head in the game and he killed the empousa quickly. That day, Dante gave Samantha, the oldest, his watch and made her promise to use it only if she needed. She agreed. Mallory later got her weapons at the camp armory. That day, he also decided that they should go to camp. They drove to camp straight from the store,they didn't run into anything, but it was quite nerve-wrecking for all three of them. When they arrived at camp and they were claimed by Themis at age 15.
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Sword, given to her by Dante.
Name: Mallory LeviAge: 15
God Parent: Themis, Ariadne, Apate
Mortal Parent: Marcus Levi
Appearence: Model- Katie Findlay
Personality: A polar opposite of her sister, Mallory is a very closed, collected, serious girl. She gives off an aura of unhappiness and loathing. She's very cold to people and is extremely closed to everyone, including her sister. She rarely speaks, and when she does, it's always something harsh or mean. She's cold, cunning, and sly, and extreme;y anti social. She's always fighting for an equal voice for all, and will do anything and go over anyone to achieve it.
History: See Samantha.
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Bow and Arrows found in the weapons shed at the armory.
How would Dante know the twins were demigods right away? Demigods can't sense other demigods. With three demigods in one household (two if you don't count Dante), the scent would have been extremely strong. So Samantha and Mallory would have been attacked much sooner than 13, I'd say around 10 or 11. Also that model looks older than 13, I'd suggest maybe 15 or 16, it's your call though
With three demigods in one place, they are also likely to be attacked quite often and daggers are not good primary weapons, and I highly doubt the armory would charge a camper for a weapon, but besides those things it looks like a really good claim.
Their arrival was almost the same as his own to his father's doorstep. - How would he know how he arrived on a doorstep? Also, did they have any monster attacks at the age of fifteen? They would also most likely have one attack per year (roughly) as their scent becomes stronger, so having the twins be attacked in the way you've described is a little far-fetched.
His father had told Dante about his arrival on his doorstep, so he could make the connection.
- 1 How do Dante know they were demigods? He wouldn't be able to just go "Oh, it's a demigod." So elaborate. Template:Kat claim sig
Their arrival was almost the same as his own to his father's doorstep, and he knew that they were Marcus's kids, having heard the story from Sarah several times.
Please add in the history the time they obtained there weapons.
I only have a few minor questions. First, a hellhound is rather big, the smallest of which are about the size of a car. Therefore, if it shadow-traveled to their living room, it would have been able to hurt the twins unintentionally. I'd suggest having the attack be in an open area like a backyard. Then, where exactly did Mallory hide the dagger she used to defeat the harpy?
"Life went on. Both girls had problems with school and were diagnosed with ADHD and dyslexia. This only confirmed Dante's belief that both girls were demigods. Samantha loved school, and ended up becoming very popular in school. She was skilled at sports and joined the public school's track and soccer teams. By her first year in high school, she was already being scouted by colleges."
Wait... basically, anybody can have those disorders (uh, no offense if anybody has that reads this >.<") how could Dante know just because they are diagnosed with ADHD and dyslexia? Does he know that most demigods have that?
Explain more On Mallory. Also, I don't understand how they skipped 1 year of a monster attack when they were 14. Also, how did they get those weapons after training? This is a really good claim c:
- Why didn't Dante send them to camp sooner? He seemed to know that camp was the safest place for them.
- What happened on the way to camp? Did any attacks happen along the way?
- Since Dante, Samantha, and Mallory were all demigods, attacks would be more frequent. Also, the girls would probably see Dante get attacked. You should at least mention that Dante was attacked, even if the girls didn't see.
- For clarification purposes, you will be owning both, correct?
In reply, Dante wanted them to live as normal a life as possible. Not having that chance himself, he wanted to make sure his nieces could. He believed that he could protect the girls by himself (it was a stupid, but you know, ego and such.) And yes, I will. I might put one up for adoption in the future, but it seems very unlikely.
Almost there :) If the girls knew about the hellhound attacking their stepfather, why didn't they even attempt to help him? Then, seeing as there are 3 demigods all in one place, all of whom know that they're half-bloods, there would be more attacks occurring; two to three each year probably.