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Personality: Laid-back, cool, calm, somewhat competitive, happy-go-lucky, a bit lazy. Tobias seems to know his way around everywhere and never asks for directions.
 
Personality: Laid-back, cool, calm, somewhat competitive, happy-go-lucky, a bit lazy. Tobias seems to know his way around everywhere and never asks for directions.
   
Appearance: Fair-skinned, Auburn hair, gray eyes, pointed nose, freckles                                                                                                                                                                    "''No, I don't need directions. I                                                                                                                     know my way around here... I think...''"
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Appearance: Fair-skinned, Auburn hair, gray eyes, pointed nose, freckles                                                                                                                                                                       "''No, I don't need directions. I                                                                                                                     know my way around here... I think...''"
   
 
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Naginata (Moonlight if Nyx, Conquestor if Nike)
 
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Naginata (Moonlight if Nyx, Conquestor if Nike)

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Name:Tobias (Toby) Falan

God Parent: Nike or Nyx

Species:Demigod

Current Age: 12

Mortal Parent Name: Henry Falan                                                                         

Personality: Laid-back, cool, calm, somewhat competitive, happy-go-lucky, a bit lazy. Tobias seems to know his way around everywhere and never asks for directions.

Appearance: Fair-skinned, Auburn hair, gray eyes, pointed nose, freckles                                                                                                                                                                       "No, I don't need directions. I                                                                                                                     know my way around here... I think..."

Weapons: Celestial Bronze Naginata (Moonlight if Nyx, Conquestor if Nike)

History: Toby's godmother and father met in a bar in a small-town city in Virginia. His godmother was gone a few days after he was born. Toby's mother was mainly absent, only leaving him a Celestial Bronze Naginata which he named Moonlight/Conquestor. Toby was mainly calm, and got good grades in school.

(These two paragraphs are mattering on which parent)

Toby found his true passion in sports, where he mainly dominated. Classmates looked in awe at his agility and strength. Becuase of this, he was well liked by other classmates. Especially a tall, unliked kid with a walking brace named Douglass.

Toby was considered weird by other kids. He was good at sports, but he didn't seem to care that much about them. He loved astronomy, particularly the moon. Maybe a little obsessed actually, as most kids did not care for Toby, except for a tall, unliked kid with a walking brace named Douglass.



However, everywhere Toby went, monsters seemed to follow. One day, a chimera came roaring in while young Toby and his dad were out fishing. Not wanting to put his father in danger, Toby ran away from home when 11, fighting monsters along the way, guided by Douglass. He fought a couple Harpies and Giant Scorpions, as well as some of Hephatuses's beasts (Small ones).



Douglass got Toby to camp via a map (Though Tobias insisted that he did not need one). Toby finally got to camp, though Douglass had to drag him into the border line (He was passed out from all the fighting).

Birthday: Third of August

Signature:

DJCosmicYT (talk) 18:44, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Tobias Falan

12

Pretty dang awesome


Comments

Hello and welcome, we're happy to have you on board! I'll be giving you some pointers on what needs to be done before your claim can be approved!

  • While one to two sentences is totally fine for the personality, we do ask that it be in full sentence form rather than a list of words.
  • You have a good start for the history, but we will ask for you to build upon it! We are looking at a minimum of two paragraphs and don't forget to include the following:
    • How the godparent and mortal met and fell in love, the conception of the child, and when the godparent left.
    • Tobias' early childhood.
    • Tobias' first monster and any subsequent attacks (if applicable).
    • How Tobias got to camp.

As a side note, we recommend sticking to using only one of your accounts to avoid any confusion!

OhWellOh well, karma's a bitch! KMØKarma'sABitch


Alright, I'll use my DJCosmicYT account.

-DJCosmicYT


Hey there! I'm Flopfish3, another claim worker on the wiki, and I'm here to help out with your claim today! There's just a few more things you'll have to do and then you should be good to go!

  • As KMO said, we're looking for at least two paragraphs on the history - could you expand a bit? We're looking for more information on the parents meeting/falling in love, early childhood, first monster attack, and so on.
  • Speaking of first monster attack, Giants are classified under hard monsters on the wiki - likely to almost immediately kill Tobias. Please select an Easy monster from here.
  • The Silver Axe from Tobias's mother wouldn't be able to kill monsters, due to being made of silver and not Celestial Bronze. Tobias could still keep it, but it would be largely ineffective.
  • Where did Tobias get the Celestial Bronze Naginata?
  • Please end your claim with your signature! In order to use it, type four ~ at the end of your claim/comment, and it will automatically turn into your signature as soon as you post.

Thanks for your patience!

Flopfish3 (talk) 18:32, March 7, 2019 (UTC)