Name: Tony Nochenueva
God Parent: Hephaestus, Deimos, Hades
Mortal Parent: Ale Nochenueva
Age: just 17
Appearance: Big, tall, and muscular, 6ft 2in.
Personality: Happy-go-lucky guy. Even if his appearance doesn't seem like, he is a very caring person. At first people think he uses sarcasm more than he should, but when you get to know him he is really funny. He loves to read and exercise (his two favorite hobbies). He is impressively smart.
Mom met my father soon after she had her master's degree in graphic design. She was really good at it but she did every design about machines. She was in the cinema in Guadalajara, Jalisco, her hometown and Hector (as he presented himself) sat in the seat behind her. She accidentally got her hand into Hector's popcorn and she saw what she was doing and how Hector was looking at her she apologized greatly. They started talking and both were really interested between them. They talked and talked until the people kicked them out of the room.
He invited her to go to dinner with him and well, mom as a good girl, didn't refuse. They continued going out for a few weeks until they did "it". When she discovered she was pregnant of twins she told Hector, and he told her about everything, from where he was a god and the children would be demigods, to the point of going to camp and defending themselves, giving her a CB spear, and a CB rapier, she got a bit surprised by their size, but then she told her that they would be smaller in their disguised form.
Since little I was really interested in sports as well as Steven, my twin brother. We got along really well. We played sports between us until we couldn't stand more. Mom got a good job, but she didn't have much money since grandma died, because she always lent us some money. Even though, mom still did everything for us to have a happy childhood. She would usually take us to parks and play with us in her very short free time. When we were 7 we got into the popular group. Steven was the rebel and I was the good guy. Steven would always get us both in trouble, but I always followed him, since Steven was my role model. I had a peacefull and good childhood, until, well the attack happened. Since little we had sword fighting (which weren't really "classes", since our mom only taught us how to use some weapons, and strategy).
First Monster Attack:
When we were 11 years old, Mom gave us the CB weapons (but in their disguised position, I mean, she gave me a wristband, which would later turn into a rapier), and told us what to do with them when in danger, even though she didn't tell us their true form.
When we were 13, Steven and I were coming walking back home from our boxing class and in the way home we saw a giant scorpion coming toward us, it was the size of a car. We inmediatley knew what to do: fight for our life. I stripped of my wristband, and it turned into a rapier right in front of my eyes. We got our weapons and started fighting with it. With its pincers, it started to crush bargage cans and bicycles. When we got used to the weapons, we started attacking and I cut its tail off, while distracted, Steven impaled it with all his strength in a soft underside and it dissolved into golden dust.
We were extremely exhausted and really scared. We told our mom what had happened and she spat the truth. She told us that she hadn't told us before so we could have the most normal life we could possibly get, actually there was a camp we would need to go to be safe. We were shocked, she didn't take us there for our own sake, but the most important thing was mind-blowing. We were demigods.
The same happened almost every year, monster attacks, except for the the type of monsters: once, when we were 14 there was a fire breathing horse, which scorched most of our clothes, (we got to defeat it by sticking Steven's spear in the horse's chest, but surprisingly we didn't get skin burns), then there were two telkhines which we fought when we were 15,(and they were surprisingly deathly for their funny appearance. We defeated them when I flayed one in half, and Steven stabbed the other in it's head) and at the end, two harpies at 16 (They left us some bad cuts with their talons, but no scars left. We killed them both in midair by striking them.).
Coming to Camp:
She told us about a camp that we needed to go to. That was in the U.S. in NY, so basically we bought tickets for New York City, then we slept in a motel, and finally, we took a taxi all the way to camp(a few blocks before). We saw an empousa, and we fought it. Miraculously, we beat it, although we were only two demigods, but Steven died from a strike in the head from her. WhenI saw the entrance, I were relieved, since all my life, we had been avoiding this place to be with our family, but if we stayed with our family, they would be possibly killed. Now I'm waiting to be claimed here. Now I know I'm a child of Hephaestus.
Weapons: CB Rapier with snake venom in the blade.
- Where did the twins get the tools to fashion weapons?
- 15 is slightly too old for first monster attack, 11 to 13 is the required range for first attack for a big three kid.
- How did they get the food and shelter to survive for a week?
- By what mode of transportation did they get to camp?
- How did the twins defeat all these monsters without training or assistance?
- How did they know to go to Austin instead of going to New York directly?
--15:16, March 18, 2014 (UTC)
How did they know to build weapons, when a person, even a demigod, gets a block of metal, fashioning weapons is not usually their first reaction
--02:58, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Referring to the coming to camp section, how did Tony escape the dracaena and what made them decide to go to Austin instead of directly to NYC? In addition, please elaborate on the trip to camp.
I would suggest changing it so he gets to camp at the end of the history, as we do not allow for demigods to have been at camp any time in the past two and a half years. Also, the attacks would have become more and more frequent as they aged, and more and more deadly. fixed DrXax (talk) 23:03, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
There is no way that they would survive for six years of monster attacks without any formal training. Why did their godparent leave the mom with chunks of celestial bronze instead of actual weapons? If the mom obviously knew about the demigods and such, why didn't she take them to camp after the first attack at 13?
For the first critic, I say that they had fencing classes, so they both know how to use weapons, and they don't survive for 6 years they're only 3 and a half, saying that, is it still needed to be corrected? Other than that fixedDrXax (talk) 23:03, March 23, 2014 (UTC)
Looks okay to me I will ask an admin to look at it when they get a chance.
Please don't be translating the comments into any language aside from English as it would be hard keep track of by claim by claim checkers or any member of the administrative team that does not understand Spanish (From what I know the comment has been translated to Spanish). To be honest I find it kinda pointless for it to be, even if you would like the comments in Spanish for any reason(s) you should just keep it to yourself for reference and not edit it onto the actual page.
Daggers are not a good primary weapon.
Please change the last godparent choice (Phobos), because he isn't a cabin god.
I believe you can and probably the jamadhar is the best of the two I think.
Contradictory to what Ash has said, a jamadhar is similar to a katar, which is a dagger. He cannot wield daggers as his main weapon, so a rapier would be more suitable.
okay, why didn't tony's mother tell tony he was a demigod in the first place? i mean, that would have let him know about his heritage sooner and he would have been more prepaired for all of those monster attacks he had.
Why did the twins travel through Mexico? Did they do it for fun or was there a different motive to it? Also, did they travel alone or did they travel with their mother? Did the twins ever wonder why their mother had them make deadly weapons? Why did the attacks just suddenly stop for 7 months? Next, I highly doubt Orthus would attack the two, even if they were twins. I'd suggest changing that one monster attack. Then, the last paragraph under First Monster Attack really isn't necessary to the history. Why'd they buy tickets for Texas rather than for somewhere nearer to NY? Then, do you plan on creating Jake as well? If not, kindly add why he won't be in camp, since being 'in camp' would mean he's going to be rp'ed.
btw Jake Robson is already one of my chars and I explain that Ale was a friend of Jake's mother, and that they had contacted before, so Tony and Steven could take care of Jake, that's why they went to Texas directly, other than that, fixedDrXax (talk) 22:24, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
How did they automatically know what to do with the blocks of CB?....Why did they make a violent weapons? What did they fight the scorpion with? If they fought it with the weapons then why would they bring it like willy-nilly? How did they fight these monsters? They can't find them with their fists from wrestling, they would have died easily. Please explain at least one of the monster attacks it a bit more. Please also fix the spelling mistakes.
I say that they had sword-fighting classes, not only wrestling. other than that, fixed
Shouldn't making weaponry be difficult without the proper equipment and ugh, armory? Where did they make it? Where did the twins have sword-fighting classes?
I changed it so Hephaestus gives the weapons to Ale since she notices she's pregnant, and she later gives them to tony and Steven. I also added that the sword fighting "classes " were really only time for Ale to teach them how to use some weapons, and some strategy. fixed
i feel like two untrained Heph kids slaying a giant scorpion is kinda stupid, since they'd most likely die. Also, they wouldn't be able to get to 14 without a monster attack without a guardian or something hiding their scent.
According to the monster encyclopedia a giant scorpion is used for claims and can be killed from 1-3 demigods, so I don't know what to do about it. About the age, fixed
When you say he told her about everything, what do you mean? And, did she have any reaction to the rapier and spear? Boxing lessons are not going to help fight monsters. I don't understand all the age stuff in the history, make it more clear. To me it sounds like he is 13-14 throughout the whole claim. Please Check Your Spelling Template:Kat claim sig
Quick question. When Tony was 13 and had his first monster attack. Did he fight the monsters with the wristband turn into a rapier? If so, can you explain that? And how would he know it would transform into the weapon?
Yep, they fought with it fixed
Could you please expand on his early childhood before he was 7?
How did they navigate their way from texas all the way to NY? Why did they travel there by foot instead getting driven by one of their parents? Some of these monsters seem difficult for people without great training for their weapons, even with three people. Also the telekhines live in the ocean so they wouldn't go too far from the coast depending on where the chars live
They got a bus to Atlanta because their mothers couldn't afford for more, since both families were with some money problems. Also, were they lived, it isn't far the sea, so I think they could have traveled that distance, other than that, fixed
the monster attacks at ages 14-16 are a bit vague. could you please explain what happened in those monster attacks? (even one sentence will do)
It took them 4 months to get to Camp?
How come after 3 years of being attacked by monsters, no demigod nor satyr came to check it out? Also, surely at 13, they would have been confused and scared, and so would go to their source of comfort and familiarity, which is their mum, and tell her about what happened? You said their families had money problems, but that it also took four months to get to Camp. How would they have survived in terms of food, water and shelter? Would they have booked a motel or a room? Where would they have gotten their food and water from? Catch me if you can. ~ Elfie 11:00, May 19, 2014 (UTC)
ok, so i fixed the satyr thing, and now they don't have money problems,a and took a plane and a cab,soooooo fixed
Note: please do not delete our comments when helpers and rbs and up comment on your claim. it helps us keep track of things.
and this claim looks good to go.
tbh i didnt delete it, it was actually in the middle of all comments, so i needed to go to history to see the comment and read it. I think it was the one above of one of bird's comment. But I'll keep it in mind anyway, thanks!