Name: Zachariah McLane
Species: Mortal, Huntress
Mortal Parent: Gregory and Marissa McLane
Zachariah is a brunette with brown eyes. Her face shows she's a silent and kind girl, standing at the height of 5'6.
Personality: She is at first a shy and quiet girl. She does well in school, but she mostly dislike by her schoolmates for some stupid reasons. She doesn't fight, but when real anger comes, she's fire burning a tree. Zachariah is also a kind and patient girl, and is very loyal to her friends and family.
History: Zachariah's parents, Gregory and Marissa, both loved history and mythology. They met because of the subject. They were both teachers in different schools but always meet in a particular Greek mythology museum. From talking about the stories into falling in love, they got married soon.
Marissa soon gave birth to their firstborn, a boy, and named him Luke. After two years, then came Zachariah. She and her brother got along well, and like their parents, they, too, learned to love legends and mythologies. Their grandmother, Melanie Agatha - Marissa's mother - told them the stories about monsters, gods, heroes and their adventures. Zachariah has Artemis as her favourite, while Luke chose Poseidon, for he loved swimming and water. Just water. Their grandma believed they were real, so both of them pretended they were real. But Zachariah made it more than pretend, she wanted to find evidence that they were real. And she succeeded in that.
It was just when she was 16, and was doing her Science assignments in a garden in their school.There wasn't anyone around, and it was quiet. Then she heard a howl of a wolf piercing the silence. Surprised why there was something like that in their school, which wasn't even near a forest. She tucked her things in her bag and ran towards towards the sound.
Peeking around a corner, she saw a gray wolf lying on the ground, a silver arrow protuding from its neck. Curious, she neared the lifeless animal. What caught her eye was the arrow, shining very silver. She pulled it and examined the weapon. Near the nock, a word in different languange was etched:
With all her family gone, she decided she could not live a life like it. Then, remembering the girl with the silvery wolf months ago, she shouted at the sky blocked by the tall trees, "Artemis! I know you're there! Please, take me with you."
Nothing happened, and she lost all hope. Just then, the girl she saw appeared, together with seven more girls in silver parkas.
I pledge myself to the Goddess Artemis. I turn my back on the company of men, accept eternal maidenhood, and join the Hunt."
Weapons: A silver bow and hunting knives
Hi there I'll be your claimer today and I have to say this is a good claim but personally I dont think artemis would 'come' if she is called (thats just me) as she is busy with goddess stuff (again thats just me) still thats all the problem I see in this claim hope to see you again :)
Thanks. I've tried fixing it. Hope that's fine. :)
Hi there I'lll be your claimer once again anyhow I think this is ok but I have to ask why is she at camp and for what reason? as even if your a huntress it doesnt necessarily means you are in camp. So please explain
Um, she wasn't at camp actually. She doesn't even know Camp Half-Blood. The settings stated in the claim would only be in her school's garden and in her home, where she called out (I didn't put that..but it is still then). So, are there other problems, or I didn't understand your question the way you wished?... :)
what I mean is from the hunt how did she get to camp?
I'll take it. I'll add: Hunters do sometimes rest, right? So, Zachariah, after trying to see what Hunters go round in time, she tries visiting the Camp when they're rest location was near it. So there you go. (Have i got it right?)
please mention it on the history on how she got from the hunt to camp please
Fixed it :)
what did you add actually?
Sorry. What i wrote last time didn't get published. I didn't notice it, sorry. I've added it already. \\// :)
ok I understand how she found the hunt but what I'm asking is how she got from the hunt to camp as those two are different things
tried to add and fix it. Hope it's okay now.. :)
I think Mel is asking for a little more detail? Is she a lieutenant of Artemis, or just a random NPC you've created for the purposes of this claim? Please also add a little more detail on her joining the hunt, for example, do her parents know etc? I also doubt Zachariah would explicitly know the hunters of Artemis were a group and functioned like they did in the books, but it would be easy to have the black-haired girl explain.
Why is she at Camp Half-Blood? Is she there to represent Artemis, to train as a new hunter of Artemis etc? I would advise you to make the last paragraph a short description of how she ended up at CHB and why. Feel free to IM me if you have any questions or need more help.
I've fixed them (i just don't know if they're okay). And about her parents' knowledge - that's already nothing. They died before Zachariah knew about the Camp. And I've written that the black-haired girl (i just made her) explained her things (camp half-blood, hunt and all), I just didn't write all the things she explained. That's all, though.
On our wiki, there is only one lieutenant of the Hunters of Artemis and the character is owned by a user on the wiki. This is a godmodding of Hyu's character (the lieutenant Hunter of Artemis) if you do not have his permission to include his character in your history.
Okay. Got it. I've fixed it up. Sorry I didn't know and I just changed it for I have no time asking for permission. Thanks for that. Is it okay if I just made up someone?
Hey Summer, this claim is really good and is almost ready for approval. Just one quick thing left to fix: Regarding the Hyu Lt. Thing, since you aren't seeking his permission, the black haired huntress can't be referred to as the lieutenant. I think there's still one or two instances left in the claim where you refer to her as such. Just gotta get rid of them and then I can approve the claim. :)
Thanks. Done it.
- Is this girl clearsighted? If not then hunters of artemis should appear rather normal, and instead of carrying around greek weapons they'd have more natural things
- Normal Mortals can't just visit camp-half blood as though they were a regular demigod :/ there is a barrier to prevent such things, as well as the mist. In addition, this would make it difficult to explain why people's characters wouldn't recognize her or anything :/
- Where is she living if all her family is gone? she couldn't just live on her own :/
Yes, she has the Sight. And I've fixed the thing about her visiting the camp, so her friend is the one now who visits her. And she lives in her home, even though her family's gone. he has a sideline job, she can live on her own. People can do that, you know.